The System Abandoned Me, So I Took the Heavenly Dao as My Father

It's very interesting, very interesting. At first I thought it was just a funny article, but I didn't expect it to be a big surprise. There are basically no cliche plots, everything is new. The author's writing is smooth and there is no need to say much. In addition to the laughter, there are all kinds of bloody fights, bloody scenes, or monsters. The world of immortality described by the author seems to be shrouded in fog. There are too few chapters and many of them are underwater, which made me feel a little uncomfortable. At the same time, the protagonist is very, very likable, full of youthfulness and high-spirited. We can also see his growth, from starting to leave the village to being decisive in killing, from opening the graves of his seniors every day, to rejecting the invincible method during the golden elixir. The main character is likable. I usually watch female videos and I feel disgusted when I see men, except for this protagonist. So can you ask the author to create a female protagonist? Is it possible to have no heroine? Leave your name on the second brush.

Anyway, I read it in one sitting. Although this book is a work of practice by the author, it is still a masterpiece in this world. The author's rhythm is very comfortable. The last book in 🍅 that made me so comfortable was Chen Xun Patriarch and Ximen Heiniu, but the text Some details in the book still need to be polished carefully. It has its own complete and huge world view. It is enough that it has not collapsed until now. This shows that the author has polished it well. This book is even better than "Slaying Gods". The rating of 8.6 Is really a talent.

The world view is huge, the branches are still exciting, and more importantly, the layout laid out by the author is very cool. Some people say that the Thirteen Immortal Fates are viruses that invade the avenue and the way of heaven. The path is dead, there are secrets in reincarnation, becoming an immortal is poisonous, and the way of heaven says that he is the supreme god, but he turns into an old beggar. The beggar has saved the protagonist between life and death several times. This game runs through three eras, encompassing other worlds, and even the appearance of the protagonist. The three incense are all constant among the variables. The fate remains unchanged, but it is indeed ever-changing. The protagonist has escaped the shackles of all living beings. The key is to still Some book friends said that the protagonist's rebirth may be due to the little girl's Huangliang dream, which came true in an instant, just like Gu Xizhou, but better than him. The author of this book has played chess very far, and the wonderful inferences of us chess viewers are even more exciting. Trembling, pretending, borrowing, fighting, killing, gambling... There are five out of thirteen, and the rest of the immortal lives are even more curious. More importantly, the author has countless pitfalls. I hope he can fill them in one by one in the future. Well... All the way to the first grade of junior high school, it is really comfortable to watch so far.

It looks good, there are no typos, basically, the logic is good, and the plot setting is also good. It's a pity that the golden scales are so subtle. He speaks nicely and is polite. What a pity. That Hua Linlang is really annoying. Can the author skin her in the future and let her try what it feels like to be skinned? And the setting of Son of Heaven is really cool!

This is the most fascinating novel I have ever read since I joined Tomato. I thought it was a cool novel, but the more I read it, the more excited I became. From the appearance of 13 Immortals, the plot began to become compact. Basically, every picture is quite good-looking, with some moisture, but not much. The writing is also very good. Some of the sentences in the novel are really evocative after listening to them, like the philosophy of life. Anyway, in general, there is no place that has not been completed. Basically, if there are holes, it is filled in, so it looks very comfortable. The concept is very good, basically I can't guess what to do next. One secret is revealed, and the next secret will appear again. There are ghosts in the years, and there are secrets in reincarnation. I can only say that this novel is the best one I have read so far.

This novel is really good. The main character is also really miserable. Died three times. Resurrected three times. From the beginning, I worshiped God as my father with high spirits. To the point of despair that sends all sentient beings in the Thirteen Lands into despair. From the deep hatred for Bai Qing. Then he went to drink tea with Bai Qing in the void. Gu Xizhou's dream was not just a tree. Golden Scale isn't just his enemy either. You filial sons are also making people cry. I just sigh for Yi Yuexue who died because of gambling. The determination to shoot down the sun from a single person. To the point of having no choice but to cut down the tree of balance. The biggest rebel in the world of obedience. To mend the sky with your own body and weapons. From the death of Gu Xizhou. The transformation of a passerby. Until Wang, who just appeared on the scene, got the immortal destiny of matching characters. This was the beginning of this era of immortal destiny. A device with no sense of presence. A bet of your life against the world. Can't tell the difference between true and false. It's a mistake. The letter is taken with only one hand. And all this is just a scam of 12 immortal lives. Thirteen immortal lives, all brilliant. Being falsely introduced to the path of immortality. Brought into the first place by loan. Being teased with a boatload of creatures. Twelve places of suffering due to killing. Because of gambling, he entered the realm of immortal destiny. Clear your mind to step into the ascending dimension. Gain money to understand the nature of the world. The rhyme of the instrument fills the sky to observe the great road Enter the battle with money and get the cause from the effect. Outside the void, you can achieve the middle-character fruition status. In the past tense, the way of mismatch is revealed. In this life, thirteen-character immortals, twelve immortal lives, eleven reincarnations, and pairs of big hands turned Li Chuyi into chess pieces on the chessboard, playing against each other. All living beings suffer, practitioners suffer, and Li Chuyi suffers the most.

The writing is super good, and there is no ambiguity with women to disgust people. It is a rare good book on Tomato. Is the author a trumpet created by some great god?

The setting is very novel, but the story in the early stage of Fate World is a bit cliche. I feel that the author didn't have enough control in the early stage, and it feels like he just wrote it. Finally, I think the novels serialized in Tomato are the best in terms of the excitement of the story, the excellence of the settings, and the completeness of the situation. If the author has a follow-up work, and can fully write his own characteristics and settings, and can add some of their stories to the supporting characters, make the supporting characters flesh and blood, and strengthen his storytelling ability, it will definitely become a masterpiece. The more you write, the more awesome you become.

Nice! ! ! ! I like this one without a heroine! ! ! ! ! Super Invincible likes this kind of immortality novel, and the content is new, and there are also some funny parts. It is really good to read. As for the one by Lao Niu and Chen Xun, I think it is better not to read it. After reading that one for a while, I didn't want to read it. It was too bland. Well, the writing style is also very good. But this book is absolutely on par with that one! ! ! Personally think [laughs] There are 10 million Hamlets among 10 million readers, read books rationally

Wow wow wow, this book really frustrated me. I am an immersive reader. It was easy to get involved when reading this book. It's great! (I am exaggerating here, and I will urge you to add more 🌚hehehe/The capitalization is really good, so great, so great, like, like, like [like] [shy]) And from what I have seen so far, this book is not brainless or clichéd. The plot is first-rate, the outline looks good, the world view is okay, and the writing is good (and then... Then... Well... I suddenly forgot what I wanted to say [crying], I will add it when I remember it) PS: (When I read a book, I always go through it in my head, phew, probably with my eyes, and then forget about it after a while, but some books are different. [For example, this one] after reading it, it's like a breeze blowing in my heart, leaving traces of passage) (Oooh, blame me for not reading the book well, I can't express my feelings [crying]) The cruelty of cultivating immortals is very realistically described