So What If You Can Fight? Can You Outlast Me?

Good looking, clear and fluent writing Why do you need to find a social butterfly to be your Taoist companion? [Awkward laugh]

The writing is good, but why the sudden emotional scenes?

The introduction is about demon martial arts, but in fact it is a pure mortal cultivating immortals. The golden finger is also small. Fortunately, the writing is okay and the writing rhythm is good.

Come on, author! After reading ups and downs for several years, I now like to read plain and simple ones.

It's okay, a bit bland

After reading Chapter 9, the plot is quite bland, but I feel there is nothing wrong with it. Why did the author end Chapter 76? The pile skills are divided into entry level, proficiency, minor achievement, and dacheng. The level of proficiency is reached when dacheng reaches perfection. No wonder this book is not rated highly... First, he took Liu Shan as a sweet boy, and then he was manipulated by a bad woman, Xiao Chunan. The male protagonist Gou just didn't like to go out, but he was actually not cautious. His survival was all due to the fact that the supporting character didn't have bad intentions. ——Separating line—— Starting from the preparation of foundation building, it is very boring. Good foundation building pills (> genuine products, < high-quality products) + foundation building spiritual objects only have a half chance of successful foundation building. The male protagonist only builds foundation when he is in his 30s, and his life span is basically not increased during the Qi training period. These Qi training periods are basically pure consumables... Song Qian's death was inexplicable... Song Ye's attempt to seize his younger brother was not discovered by the Zhengdao sect... It was a smooth journey, but the aura of the male protagonist was too big... After the male protagonist builds his foundation. Even the alchemy room has to find help... Completely lost to everyone... Moreover, there are no foundation-building spells. The only new escape technique, Wandering Dragon, requires the help of spiritual plants planted by the author himself. The foundation-building set by the author is very low... It is completely lacking in the strong character that has been laid out in dozens of chapters.

The writing is good, and although there are panels, the timeline is reasonable. Unlike other panel-based fairy tales and garbage spiritual roots, all the skills are maxed out in a few years, and the cultivation level is extremely fast, not counting how long it takes to refresh a skill and how long it takes to recover. Although the story line of this short story about Cultivation to Immortality only covers foundation building, it also gives readers an explanation at the end, which makes it easier to read than other books, and then go and read the author's new book.

It's quite boring, but it's more authentic, plain and real, so I want to follow the protagonist to experience the world of immortality. Unlike most cool novels, they don't have any brains, they just get whatever they want, and upgrades are always successful the first time; they don't abuse themselves, like they shed a few layers of skin after upgrading. There are no villains who commit suicide without thinking. Generally speaking, the logic is self-consistent and not unfinished. The last few chapters are just an outline.

I think it's pretty good-looking. Later, in order to avoid supervision, The writing is too delicate.

Good-looking is good-looking, ugly is ugly👀. What does ugly👀 mean?