My Little Pony: Ultraman Pony in the Dark

Seeing as you are like this, you should take all the 6m from the first world [laughing]

Can the author give himself a good review?

The writing is very good. I feel that turning back time cannot save little Maria. It can only cover up the exposed darkness again. Love and hope are useful in the original universe, but the only way to save the dark fandom is war! Only blood and fire, those moths are not qualified to be saved. Ultraman's power is still too merciful. Since fate cannot be broken, do the ponies who have been saved by the protagonist count as breaking their fate? Can it interfere with the fate of other universes? According to Discord's description, there are so many dark universes that the protagonist is still stretched thin. Since all the F6 in the first world have been promoted to become princesses, the combat power is not as simple as doubling. Has the author considered letting them spread out to save the world? The saved world can also join them. I have already thought of a name, let's call it the Star Expeditionary Force!

I think the score is 7-8. First of all, this book is really okay. After all, there are very few pony texts, and there are even fewer black novels. Secondly, the subject matter is mainly Ultra, which is relatively new. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. First, the character structure is too empty, especially the character structure of m6 and Luna in the first world. The focus is on how they change from despair to hope. Second, the description of the characters' emotions, or the development of space, or the first world, focuses on Twilight, but several other ponies also have emotions, how to develop them, or how to accumulate them, no, the whole story is about "falling in love" because of "redemption". . . . Third, the length of each world is too small. The current novel is less than 200,000 words, which is equivalent to less than 70,000 words for each world. There is too little development for some plots, and some parts are dictated by "m6", which makes it feel too compact. On the contrary, it feels like it is gone after not much reading.

So far, I actually feel that the writing is pretty good and it is considered a masterpiece. It's just that the update frequency is too slow. I've been keeping the book for a long time, but I found out that only 5 chapters have been updated. I hope the author can update it more, otherwise it won't be enough! I hope the author can stick with it, otherwise I will have to find another book again! Come on, author!

The writing is very good. I would like to remind some combatants that the protagonist only has Ultraman's skill mechanism and not the numerical value. To put it bluntly, the protagonist has Ultraman's attack methods and templates, but the numerical value belongs to the mobile Ultraman.

It's very beautiful. The heroine of the single is Twilight.

Just don't stop updating, and then can you write Gaussian and Archer later?

Come on! I want to see Twilight's heart and grasp the protagonist's future!

Very good, I hope I can have a normal pony world to enjoy life in the future