Elden Ring: Redemption DLC

The protagonist is the same god-man as always, but with a happy reunion style. It still has great potential, but readers who have never played the game may not be able to get some data.

I love watching farming infrastructure, and I love watching fandoms. The combination of the two is extremely delicious! I feel that the ring is still a bit unpopular, so the users who watch it are not very sticky. In addition, there are too few times when Ah Tui can show off, so it can be increased appropriately. The author's writing skills are still very mature, and the plot is delicious. Come on!

It's okay. It would be better to insert nonsensical jokes more appropriately. Also, the story line with Melina is a bit thin. Her goal is to burn herself to death, which is such a decisive point. It would be quite frivolous if she only solved the key main line in one or two chapters. I hope there will be more descriptions in the future that change Melina's mind. For example: After witnessing A'Die and his friends realize one miracle after another and beautiful visions in the border area with their own human strength and actions. Melina, who was originally determined to die and sacrifice, gradually began to have hope~

The plot is regrettably adapted from the main tone of the Ring of Law fandom. The protagonist is an abstract 🦐-headed second-game player. The style is similar to the funny western fantasy Farming Lords Battle. The disadvantage is that the various settings are too game-like and a bit unrealistic, and the game is very confusing. There are very few descriptions of various landmarks, objects, etc., Which is very unfriendly to readers who have never played the game (it is recommended to post pictures when the author says so). There are many such enchantment fanfics, and it will be difficult for the author to attract people if he does not write his own style and characteristics.

As an old ass who has come all the way from Ghastly Souls, this DLC is a bit too warm. Although I didn't see a river of blood, the warm junction is also very exciting. I hope the author will update it soon.

Ah! The rating of your work is □+! This most beautiful work rises from the market, especially the little one at the front, which makes people feel the rhythm! Being able to see such wonderful works is the most fortunate thing in my life! Very happy to see you! Please join us!

At first, I thought it was another routine love story in the name of saving, but it turns out that you are really saving. [Sinister smile]

The author's writing style is superb (at least in Tomato), it can be read without difficulty even if you don't have the foundation of the original work (you can also read it as a lord novel), it has a perfect ending (without any regrets), the gameplay is average (a bit incomprehensible), summary: It's awesome! [Praise]

It looks good. It reminds me of the first time I watched The Road to the Golden Tree. It is no longer a world where there is only slashing and killing. Just like in the comics, you can get the amputated Grek's big rune through the amputation competition. The author has added new settings or small quirks to each character's settings, making them more three-dimensional. As the name of the book says, everyone will be saved, including demi-humans and mushroom people.

When I first started watching it, I didn't know how Salted Duck would change the fate of the characters and the direction of the plot. But as a reader, what I wanted to see was a different interface [crying] Come on, it's normal for the data to be bad at the beginning!