Elden Ring: Redemption DLC

It features a protagonist who is exceptionally gifted, but with a strong moral compass and a happy ending. It still has great potential; however, readers who haven't played the game might not understand some of the data.

I love farming and infrastructure building stories, and I love Ringo fanfiction; the combination of the two is incredibly delicious! I feel Ringo is still a bit niche, so the readership isn't very loyal. Plus, there aren't many opportunities for A-Mei to show off; perhaps more of those could be added. The author's writing is quite mature, and the plot is very engaging. Keep it up!

It would be better to insert more nonsensical jokes. Also, the storyline with Melina is a bit thin. Her goal of burning herself to death is such a resolute point; if it's only resolved in one or two chapters of the main plot, it feels rather superficial.

The plot follows the main theme of the Ring of Law fanfiction, rewriting the regrets. The protagonist is a second-time player with an abstract shrimp head. The style is similar to a comedic Western fantasy farming/lord-conquering game. The downside is that various settings are too game-like and somewhat unrealistic.

As a veteran Assassin who's been through the Ghasts series, this DLC is a bit too heartwarming. While there wasn't any bloodshed, the touching borderlands are still quite appealing. I hope the author updates soon.

Ah! Your work is rated □+! This beautiful piece rises from the city, especially the small window at the very front, which gives one a wonderful sense of rhythm! Seeing such a wonderful piece is one of the most fortunate things in my life! I'm so glad to see your work! Please join our group!

At first, I thought it was just another formulaic romance novel masquerading as a rescue story, but it turns out you really do rescue people. 😏

The author's writing is superb (at least on Tomato's platform), and even those without prior knowledge of the original work can read it without difficulty (it can even be read as a lord-themed novel). The ending is perfect (without any regrets). The action scenes are somewhat average (a bit confusing). In summary: Absolutely fantastic! 👍

It's great. It reminded me of the first time I read *The Road to the Golden Tree*. It's no longer just a world of hack-and-slash. Like in the comics where you can obtain the Great Rune of Grik through an amputation contest, the author has added new backstory and quirks to each character, making them more three-dimensional. As the title suggests, it seems everyone will find redemption, including the demi-humans and mushroom people.

At first, I didn't know how the salted duck would change the characters' fates and the plot, but as a reader, I wanted to see a different kind of crossroads 😢 Keep it up! It's normal for the data to be bad at the beginning!