My Dungeon Comes from Elden Ring

The book is very well written. It is a very standard novel. The protagonist is too damn useless. Other than that, there are no other highlights. The most interesting thing about the whole book is actually seeing the protagonist's subordinates. It would be better if the protagonist is treated as the kind of tool man protagonist in the fourth natural disaster novel.

In the early stage, the psychological description of the protagonist was indeed too exaggerated, which made many people unable to stand it. However, the author listened to the advice and worked hard to update the book. The characterization and plot of this book are quite good so far, and it is worth reading.

How to say it? It would be good if the main character's paranoia was reduced. Apart from the main character, everything is pretty good. Especially the relevant supporting characters are all online in terms of motivation and IQ. Of course, the strength is still inferior. [Cover face]

Although the starting point is a bit poor and a bit forced to paranoia, but if you are exposed to this kind of thing, then this book is a pure and enjoyable book. I suggest cutting off the inner drama of the protagonist and adding more dihua things. It should be extremely enjoyable to the fullest. Hurry up and give me more

It's okay to skip all the protagonist's scenes.

It was well written, but the main character made me feel an unknown fire.

The more you write, the better it gets. The bad point in the early stage is that the protagonist's thinking and logic cannot be rounded. It seems that the protagonist is too cowardly and the transformation is too Ruozhi, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. But when it starts from the surrender of the kingdom, it is very good. It refers to the sense of fate of the defeated soldiers who unite, like the protagonist group that slowly absorbs capable talents and emerges as a savior against the evil god in the final battle. The author tries to describe the protagonist as little as possible. You can refer to the Bone King's idea of ​​transformation.

I like everything else, except that the protagonist has severe delusions of destruction.

It's still pretty good. The main reason is that the protagonist's paranoia of being persecuted was too severe in the early stage. But as the protagonist used runes to strengthen his own strength, the paranoia of being persecuted disappeared. However, there will still be some leftovers. Let's see how the author writes in the later period.

Very suitable for my taste