The Kindling Girl and Her Tarnished One

I. . . Remembered. . . I remembered it all. . . I am not a small sickle that takes half of the left bow and half of the big sword and wets it. . . I am. . I am a practitioner of the Golden Law, and I am Melina's only king😭😭😭

Except for the ending, which was a bit rushed, the plot overall was smooth. I have actually written a fanfic about the Circle of Magic myself, and the heroine is also Meimei😭😭😭. I can clearly feel that the author is very good at expressing emotions. He is used to using language and actions to pave a silent but affectionate road between Melina and the Faded One. The author's depiction of battle scenes is really not a strong point - but it is harmless. After all, this is a fanfic about Melina. We are just here to see the story between Melina and the Faded One. I just went to burn Meimei and it feels so good to read this again.

It's beautiful. The author's control over the plot and foreshadowing is very subtle. The love plot is very natural. The writing style is simple and unpretentious but can still make people feel the emotions inside. It is definitely top-notch among the second creations of Lao Tou Huan.

The author writes so well. It is definitely an excellent second creation. The emotional depiction and plot control are both top-notch. At least I think it is impossible for Meimei Dang who has played Ring of Magic not to like it after reading it.

I am Melina's sharp edge [punch hard] [crazy]

It's beautiful and worth watching, especially the emotional line. It's over, the two of you coexist in a beautiful partnership, love will always be with you, embrace each other in the name of the king

Unexpected ending, but still very good, but I still prefer a more cliched ending

Five stars for Meimei

I feel good after reading it

Score for Meimei [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]