Harry Potter: The Chosen One, You’re Acting Strange

It looks good, tied. Judging from the trend, it is probably with Harry. Ask about the attributes of the left and right bits. Although I didn't mention it, it's true that Ha's feelings are more active now, and he's taller than Li. I'm looking forward to a Ha 1, praying. Additional: What do you want Harry to do to me? Don't post it under my comment. Send it to the author. It's not up to me to decide. Is it because you post it under my comment to let me see it and to spite me? Do you hate me? I don't understand⁽⁽ƪ(•̩̩̩̩＿•̩̩̩̩)ʃ⁾⁾ᵒᵐᵍᵎᵎ. Go and give the author a five-star rating yourself, or go and support your colleagues in the comments. Please let me go (please)

The writing is very good, the plot is novel and not cliché. The system's presence is very low, its combat power is still good, and at least it doesn't have the outrageous operation of throwing out Avatar in the first grade. The protagonist drives the plot, but does not interfere too much with the direction of the story. It is more about growing together. There is no operation to steal Harry's highlights, but the relationship is quite slow. Now Harry is taller than Leon, so Harry is the attacker? Harry in these chapters is very aggressive and has a very fierce demeanor. Looking forward to the follow-up plot~(◦˙▽˙◦)

It's good to read. I like this kind of novel with a delicate emotional line. Except for the slightly awkward bloodline (but HP novels, which original protagonist doesn't have a special bloodline), the plot development can basically maintain logic and reasonableness. [Quietly tell me about my writing style tendency 1] You can scroll down and see the reviews. There are only a handful of three-star reviews. Do you understand the value of these negative reviews? It's so sweet. Love is not something you fall in love with out of thin air. The logic is online. There are no stupid NPCs in the book and the main character suffers. It's great.

It looks good, but there is currently a problem with one of Leon's settings: Didn't he say that he had seen (?) HP? Then why are there unexpected ideas in the article. Or just a little familiar with it. In addition, I support Liha [like]

Nice! I have been following it recently, and I was surprised that the cp is Xiao Ha's book. The protagonist has not fully opened the perspective, and does not fully understand the content of the book. He only relies on his own efforts and the restraint and teaching of Xiao Ha. The writing is quite delicate. It is an HP fanfic that I like very much recently🥰🥰🥰

It's so good that I cry to death The character creation is very comprehensive, the pace is slow and steady, and the flow is steady. Many sentences are very beautifully described, not with a lot of rhetoric but with a simple texture. Full of power of words. Subtle changes in the emotions between the two can be seen in some small interactions. Their love does not come out of nowhere or suddenly. Their love is based on their deep bond with each other and the youthfulness and ignorance of teenagers. It is subconscious care and protection. Leon's composure comes from his two lives. His emotional insensitivity and fear of facing the profound theme of death show his imperfect side and he is a complex character. Harry's bravery and wit were his most important characteristics in the early stage. In the later stage, he gradually grew up, and the love buried deep in his heart began to appear clearly. Shaped full and round. (But I personally think that his love is somewhat smooth. The biggest conflict between the two may be Leon's deep feeling of powerlessness when he did not tell him the truth for some reason. It is recommended to add more frustration as seasoning) Although there are not many other characters appearing, their personalities are also very distinct. Bagman's shrewdness as a businessman. The daily interactions and inevitable quarrels between Hermione and Ron. Hermione noticed each other's subtleties earlier than Ron (but the two may not necessarily be partners later). Ron is dull and often does not consider other people's feelings. He always blurts out hurtful words. This is his biggest flaw and the reason why everyone does not support this pair of partners. Perhaps it is precisely because of this kind of incomprehension and even disgust that he intensifies the sharpness of his words (?) Maybe he is portrayed too much like a real person, and this reality is uncomfortable. The plot setting of the article is very interesting, the system does not play much role in it, and the combat power is consistent with common sense. The characters' efforts to improve are all visible, and most of them are positive, rather than negative, as if everything will become unimportant and slowly disappear in the long flow of time. It feels very close to the original work, but it doesn't follow the original plot without any sense. The plot is not particularly big, and the story is slow and steady. This book can be the best choice during the book shortage. PS: In fact, I clearly feel that the author's writing skills have improved later on, please work hard [laughs] I wrote it wrong, it should be "The plot is not that exciting"

Ahhhhh, update soon! Big! Don't skimp on your writing! Although some parts are not my idea! But especially the part about being a seeker! It's so cool! This is Gryffindor! A brave Gryffindor, not a bunch of mindless bastards!

So sweet! ! ! The interaction between Baby Leon and Harry was so natural, it was so sweet that the corners of my mouth raised. I was really afraid of making a strange laugh while watching it [laughing and crying]. The system has a sense of presence but not very strong, but the emotional line interaction is really good! ! ! [Love][Sending Hearts][KISS]

This is for CP Harry, because I rarely see Harry's fanfics (written in a way that's eye-catching) The more I read this book, the more interesting it becomes. I like the emotional line. The emotional line is well written. I think it is very good to watch after the second grade. I especially like to watch the emotional line. It is written very naturally. Although the plot is also based on the original work, it is not exactly the same as the original work and will not appear boring. Moreover, some small changes are also very interesting and natural, and will not feel abrupt. Ha 1, which was the first to be tempted, was really delicious.

This book is still being serialized and is very interesting to read overall. Although the male protagonist has a golden finger, he is not wide-open. The author very realistically writes about his depression and helplessness after coming to the new world. There is no arrogance from the perspective of Almighty God, and the character is very down-to-earth. The emotional line develops logically and smoothly, and it goes in both directions with Harry Potter, which is very sweet. The only thing that can be improved is that the protagonist rarely experiences failure, and everyone he wants to save is successfully saved, which is a bit idealistic, but the purpose of fan fiction is to heal everyone, and there is nothing wrong with it [Blow kiss] Beautiful! Finished spreading flowers!