Miss Player, Please Don't Give Up on Winning Me Over

The writing is very good. The overall writing style is very gentle so far, and there is a delicate warmth between the lines. The writing style fits the theme of the novel just right, there is no redundant content, and the writing is very smooth. The combination with the setting of Gai Mu is very clever, there is no inexplicable sense of separation, and it is very comfortable to watch all the way, from the inside to the outside, psychologically and visually. Although it is a Baidu, in terms of the setting and performance of the protagonist, it can be regarded as a pure Baibai. The current performance of this article is rated as Super Cup on the Lily track. It has strong versatility and strong countermeasures. It is suitable for related enthusiasts to watch. How should I put it? After writing too much, some problems have emerged. Although the impact is not big, it is still not so perfect. . .

The writing is very good, especially the heroine's experience of lack of love, which made me feel immersed in it. However, unlike the heroine, I worked hard to change the Liu Ju script I took into the Jin Dynasty Yang Guang script. Author, don't let the other heroine have an ambiguous plot with the other two.

1. This "anti-routine strategy + orange daily" setting is so right! I originally thought it was a "tool man" guide with a clear goal, but it turned out that the protagonist's secretly moving little entanglements were soft and cute, and the sweetness was very natural and not artificial, without the greasy feeling of industrial saccharine at all. 2. The writing style is as gentle and gentle as drinking orange soda under the sun. There is a kind of subtle warmth between the lines. The little awkwardness in the protagonist's heart and the interaction with the player lady are very vivid. As I read it, I felt that my mood became lighter and lighter. It is completely healing and sweet. 3. There is no nonsense and no fuss, it is the daily delicacy and cookies that are the most poignant. The protagonist's transformation from "treating the other person as a tool" to quietly caring about it is written so realistically, and every little emotion is accurately captured. It is a good work that makes people can't help but raise their mouths. 4: New real gold was also discovered in Yangshizi. 5: However, I have to criticize the author severely. It has reached the point where people can't help but complain. I struggled for a long time and didn't know how to start. Finally, I came to my senses and just said three words: It's even slower! Ps: Read Chapter 37 and comment

I originally wanted to find a book to pass the time before going to bed to induce drowsiness. The introduction was interesting, so I clicked on it and read it. Unexpectedly, the writing was pretty good. I stayed up all night and read the latest version in one breath. I thought about it and wrote down my thoughts. The background of the book is very clever - "one of the gal's heroines to be conquered". It can be said that within this framework, every step of the plot is closely related to the psychological activities and emotions of the characters, and the author also describes it very well. It can be said that the delicate psychological description is the biggest feature of this book. The embarrassment of poverty, fragile self-esteem, etc. Are all very attractive to me. The last time I saw this kind of novel that combines plot and psychological description so closely was Chi Xiaocheng. After talking about the psychological description, what also surprised me was the cg, be and chapter. On the one hand, the creation of CG is to fit the background framework of "gal", and on the other hand, it is a picture described by more words. When the CG emerges, I will be led to grind the text carefully and imagine the scene in my mind, because at this moment, I can temporarily not care about the progress of the plot, I only need to follow the text to fantasize, so that the image of the characters in my mind becomes clearer. The setting of be is also very clever. Its existence makes the development of the plot start to have ups and downs. When I detect a contradiction, I will not directly think that the contradiction can be eliminated. Instead, I will be curious and want to explore whether the contradiction is a new be. At the same time, because the root cause of be is the friction between the two, it will reveal character flaws and the serious consequences of unresolved conflicts, which can deepen the impression of the characters. The chapter simply describes the past, which deepened my love for Porridge. Because the chapter was written in such a miserable way, Jiang and I had a brief emotional resonance. After talking about what you think is good, let's talk about what you think is bad. The first one is that the progress is too fast. Part of it is a common thread. The essence now is the unspeakable misunderstanding in romance novels, but it could have more meanings and more articles. It is also quite interesting to extend the time they share together, slowly increase the favorability of others, and then start other people's solo lines involuntarily and then try to break back to Congee's line. It's a pity that it ended too quickly, and it was over after two bes. The other part is "the personal line that is more difficult than the common line". There is no difficulty in the personal line of Congee, it is smooth and simple, and there is no be. Good feelings come so easily. Without setbacks, the most intuitive feeling is that progress is so fast. Another point is the rollback mechanism. I originally thought that each rollback mechanism would be slightly different and increase the difficulty of Jiang, but in fact it did not. It was just a simple reversal of time. Let's take a look again. What if the author flips the table and says that everything is just a prologue, the ez mode is over, and if you want to take away the porridge, you have to challenge the nightmare difficulty or other super expansion? That should be interesting. ——2025.11.24

The writing is great. I have read so many "Baibaiwen" in 🍅. The quality of this book is considered to be T0 level. The emotions are delicate and the character is distinctive. Coupled with the author's ingenuity, it is a breath of fresh air in the current routine of "Baibaiwen". The data should be better. I wish it a good success. I hope the author can continue to work hard and create more excellent works [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Although the protagonist of this image knows that she has turned into a girl since she was a child, the setting of multiple transformations of this character feels weird. Moreover, a person who knows that she is in a game world can still return to the original world and see that she has always been ashamed there. If she changes to Pure Bai and removes the setting of the game or the protagonist does not know that she is in the game or does not know the way to go back, I feel that her emotions are more reasonable (because I feel that after knowing that this is a game world) In this case, you can even go back. Then the identity and background of this world can be regarded as an immersive game. It is not real. Only the home in the real world is real. Even if she has been a little immersed in it since she was a child, I personally feel that it is possible for the protagonist to have such emotions in front of anyone, but it should not be the key figure when she returns to the real world. She is a player. I really can't think of any other emotion in front of her other than thinking about conquering her and going home.) Therefore, the shame caused by the heroine seeing the dilapidated home in the game made me feel very out of place, and the previous emotional line was too natural. I did not clearly see in the book that the protagonist knew that the other party was a woman in real life. I do not rule out the possibility of boys playing this lily-like game. So in the beginning, I felt that there was an awkward period where I was afraid that the other person was actually a foot-picking burly guy but I was looking forward to going home and had to conquer this player. Later on, I found out that the other person was a female. For example, at a stage, I was rewarded with the possibility of temporarily returning to the real world or possessing a kitten. After all, it would not be very fun if the heroine discovered the protagonist before he returned to the real world. (Some people who listen to the book are more careful and some may be too busy to hear clearly. If you make a mistake, please remind me and I will delete this comment. I don't mean to criticize by posting this comment. I just feel that the author's writing style is very delicate and I like the style. I can't help but make some suggestions. If the author doesn't like it, you can inform me to delete it.)

Fragrant😋, the content is remarkable, but there is too little description of the other female protagonists😡, but judging from the two fake endings, I closed my heart after saying a few words😭😭It is indeed difficult to write. There is nothing wrong with the general direction. It feels like Jiang has changed a different person after failing twice. It makes me feel a little strange. But overall it is still a good story. Whether it is the environment or the description of the characters, it can be seen that care has been taken. The update frequency is very fast ⭕️💰, but I still hope that the smelly mole takes care of himself❤️ and do what you can, you guy! 😤

It can be said that Zhou was reincarnated into this world and started living again as a baby, but she only remembered that she was a man in her previous life and that this world was fake. Overall, it can be viewed as pure redemption. In the end, long live pure love and don't resort to bloody plots. Pure love becomes a hundred (actually it can be a pure hundred) This is a rare campus love story that describes a kind of beauty unique to the youthful period. It's not pretentious or illusory. It is a campus novel with the purest goodwill and troubles unique to girls. (I have seen too many industrial saccharin disguised as campus) For love, it is not simply lust, but the resonance of two souls, not industrial saccharine.

This book was really amazing when I first read it. The delicate writing style, rich emotional descriptions, and vivid descriptions of the interaction between Zhou and Jiang made people feel distressed and angry, especially when Zhou's parents died when he was a child and he was framed in the second grade of junior high school. But after Zhou's favorability exceeded 50, I began to feel that the author's writing power was a bit out of control. During the week of my third year in junior high school, I was gang-banged by my classmates, especially when Dahuang passed away on my birthday. These two incidents seemed a bit sadistic. I feel that Dahuang's death was unnecessary. It would have been better if it was a good thing. After all, four consecutive very miserable experiences made me feel a little tired or tired. Then after Zhou's favorability exceeded 70, I could feel that I was losing control of the plot, or that I couldn't hold back my writing power. The description of the daily interaction between two people is a bit bland, and the emotional description can feel that the author is a bit short of words. Especially for Jiang, I feel that after the main perspective changed to Jiang, Jiang vaguely changed to a male perspective, because Zhou has little feeling for Jiang's female charm, and after all, he is also a former male in the setting (although it is just a setting). I also know that it is difficult to write about this kind of ordinary life well, so most of the treatment of this part is in the form of a unit drama. Finally, I hope that Zhou's perspective can be used more in the future. After all, the protagonist is also Zhou, and Zhou can be a little more proactive, so that the plot has some ups and downs. As long as he still acts as a pillow princess [blowing kiss] To sum up, I think I will give it 5 stars at the moment. It is really eye-catching among the many routine articles on Tomato. Although there are some shortcomings in the back, the first half of the writing is really great. I hope the author can continue writing [Blow kiss]

It's okay. The author's thoughts and ideas are very interesting, and the foreshadowing is good. For example, Zhou Zhou reincarnated and wrote about changing from a boy to a girl, but because he lived for 17 years, he became a girl in consciousness. I feel that the writing is to purely determine sexual orientation, but there is no feeling of adult thinking in the memories, no matter when he was a child. Regarding relatives, facing slander and betrayal, the writing is suitable for the current age but not suitable for adults. Also, the idea of a fake ending is good, but it is easy to write. The biggest shortcoming is that it is easy to lose patience. Even if you are patient, readers may lose patience, so this is a test for the author. Unfortunately, he is a little too hasty, no She was living well, but then she sold miserably, sold too much, betrayed Rhubarb from a low self-esteem family, and had the most classic depression. There are too many buffs. It's unnecessary. It's really unnecessary. You might as well explain her situation or other things in more detail, or skip some topics and talk about the Raiders. After all, There is no description of the Raiders at all, at least not until Chapter 44. This is a big shortcoming. It's not like running in both directions, but this is understandable. After all, the selling point is Zhou Porridge. Emotionally, I still prefer this side. It is well written. Some of it may not be logical, but I think the emotional description is really okay.