Magical Girl: I Choose to Cultivate Immortality in a Supernatural World

It can be seen that the author has researched the setting of transforming into a very young lady. It was a very good book but unfortunately it was discontinued later. I suggest that the author slow down the pace a little and add more daily routine. For plug-ins from another world, I think you shouldn't set too many realms of cultivation. Unless you plan to cross realms or have unlimited flow or spiritual energy recovery in the future, if you can practice qi until you can transcend tribulations, Mahayana, etc., Firstly, the world you set should be spiritual. If you don't have too much Qi, you can't cultivate it. You can become invincible just by building the foundation. Secondly, I feel that with so many realms, it's easy for you to end up like Miss Eldest's book. If you don't plan to write such a grand world view, the four realms like refining Qi and refining God to return to the void will be enough. Come on!

Evaluation: High-quality grain and grass, potential, very good-looking. The story is good, but there isn't much content to write about right now. It's probably a novel about an ordinary person who is drawn into a supernatural "inner world" and practices and fights interspersed with his daily life. The development of the world view advances step by step, and the plot connection is relatively coherent. The language style is relaxed, the writing is plain and natural, and there is no obscure literary vocabulary. In addition, there are no major poisonous points at present. The common pitfalls of transformation stories have been safely avoided. The protagonist also moved out of the dormitory quickly after the transformation. His psychological acceptance is faster, and his thinking is closer to normal people. Overall, I wouldn't say it's particularly stunning, but it's interesting and watchable. It's worth looking forward to. Come on.

It looks good, um... Let me mention it here. There is a plot where the protagonist learns spiritual power from others and disguises himself back to his original appearance (just touching the surface will change it back). This is not a poison. It is just for the convenience of handling the gender change. After processing, it will not appear. After all, if the person has changed, the information will still be the same as the original, but don't worry about the information being changed. The supernatural bureau will take care of it.

The writing is okay, but I am a little anxious.

Why not updated?

Five-star support

I watched it for a long time, and I haven't even started the so-called cultivation of immortality yet. 🙂 I feel there is no need to write some plots, it's too slow.