Possessed by the Marquis Champion, What Am I Supposed to Do?

First, with a clang, he slid down and knelt in place! Good evening/good morning/good afternoon dear readers and angels! What you see now is a wild little novice author, holding her trembling keyboard and performing a begging performance. Let's get down to business first, and ask for the three core points in a row Please update: You're welcome! Your "quick update" is my clarion call to stay up late! Please add to the bookshelf: This is really, really, really important to me! It is the food that can keep children alive during the new book period! Asking for "power generation for love": it is the free power generation for love! It is like a small trophy and the greatest spiritual encouragement to me! Protection period for newbies, please forgive me I am just starting out, so the plot may occasionally be bumpy and the writing is still immature. If something is not well written... Just read it for fun! Or, give me a gentle reminder, I am thin-skinned but I learn quickly! I bow to you! 🧠 Brain storage place Before reading, please park your clever little mind here temporarily! This article focuses on an easy decompression, please do not bring too much logic into it, just have fun! A mental massage is included with the brain removal~ Okay, enough nonsense, I'm going to start coding! Any interaction from you is the light that illuminates the future of this little transparent person like me!

The overall plot is good, but Che Zulu's words go back and forth. There are currently two problems. The first big problem is: 1. The protagonist has already found out the enemy's royal tent and its defense situation, and later arrested people for interrogation to spy on the military situation. These two things are still the same thing. 2. The previous one has been studied. Tactics, sand table deductions and their perfection. Later, because of the second arrest of people to spy on military intelligence, the tactical layout was described in detail again. In these two incidents, the exact same military situation and layout were described twice. Did you fail to arrange the plot sequence or was it written by two people? The second big question is, is it reasonable to write that the shaman self-destructed and vomited blood and turned into a poisonous scorpion? This is not a world of low martial arts. Since you have come to the Han Dynasty, just bring Huo Zu in your mind. Let's write about Huo Zu's war intuition and the ability to take over the body to make the original body stronger. The two military masters combine modern knowledge with ancient wars. The original owner's own memory has improved due to time travel, and with the accumulation of knowledge before the time travel, the protagonist's shortcomings are revealed. In the novel, small hangings are not counted as troubles. With these stories about the war of the big Han, Then when I return to the court, I can write about the turbulent situation of the Han Dynasty, write about the strength of the Han Dynasty, lead our flower growers to become stronger, and write about the national pride of the Han Dynasty. I have to deal with these low-level martial arts things, and it cannot be integrated. The above two major points are the main reasons for me to give this rating, mixed with my own suggestions. You can listen to it or not. After all, I am a reader and not a writer. The rating may be changed in the future, but for now it is the true evaluation in my heart. Now when I see the big shaman being killed, the shaman said before he died that the court is the biggest game, which is a bit low. I know you are trying to set up the game, but it is too obvious. This is not a TV series, nor is it a screenwriter's script. This is a novel, so it is inappropriate to express it this way. The writing style needs to be strengthened, um... I said I am not criticizing the author of Do You Believe It? I am just expressing my truest thoughts after reading this book. If you have read it, thank you for reading my comment. After all, I want to say something good. I like the description of the war in your article and the plot of the protagonist leading the scouts to investigate the military situation. These two plots are very well written, but I have also written the subsequent questions above, so come on, I believe you will do better.

It's a very interesting article about infrastructure power and strategy. There are no major flaws in general. It's a composite and slightly cool article. It's set as a five-star new book for encouragement. I'd love to read more. Let me add that when something happens, Huo Qubing's only use is to say "kill them all" in his head and then be persuaded by the protagonist. Although he is a military commander, he is not a killer. To be honest, Zhu Bajie is not so easy to break up and go back to Gaolaozhuang when something happens. Huo Qubing's decision to kill everyone when something happens is a bit too intellectual for him.

Lose your mind emmm and ignore the logic, it is still a good and refreshing article, giving the big man a better future, haha. That's enough, I'm here just for their regrets.

Looks good! ! It's a pity that it's too short and not enough to watch.

It's beautiful, thank you to the author! ! ! [Laughs][laughs]

The author's writing is very good, but some places are a bit messy and confusing to read. However, the author's writing is very good. Come on.