Dragon Raja: Holy Lord Bloodline, Slaying Dragon Kings

This book is amazing, and it's definitely a great read. The author is a professional at avoiding bad content, at least better than 90% of Tomato's writers 🤭😏 I've already collected the following: Susie Nonoya, the three school beauties of Shilan High School, and Chu Zihang's mother (the protagonist is probably a rabbit talisman who transmigrated to the past and is Chu Zihang's biological father; Chu Tianjiao is a pure and innocent victim who was taken in but doesn't even get to eat).

This book is quite good, the overpowered abilities are strong, and there are no instances of the protagonist being wronged. It's much better than other fanfictions on the market. However, more effort could be put into the plot to make it more substantial. Most other dragon fanfictions are just babysitting/supporting stories, lacking the satisfying feeling of a typical wish-fulfillment novel.

This is a true "all-inclusive" story among Dragon Raja fanfiction; those who are interested can check it out. Seeing the latest chapter, I'm not going to fawn over Lu Mingfei or act as a babysitter; I'm taking in any female characters with significant roles.

It's not easy to find someone who accepts all women and doesn't give them anything, and the writing is quite good. However, some parts have too large a time span, especially the beginning, which lacks annotations like "how many days later" or "how many months later." I suggest making the timeline clearer.

It's pretty good. The protagonist is a succubus, and she's domineering enough to collect everyone. Although I don't know the protagonist's identity yet, it feels rather ancient 🤔

What does Jiang Nan know about Dragon Raja? He's just a fanfiction writer. Lu Mingfei only deserves to sit on the lonely throne.

Chickens aren't telekinesis, gravity is a curse 🤦

Personally, I have no objection to accepting all the submissions. I'm just a country bumpkin who likes happy endings. And I think the writing style is quite good, at least it's very good for Tomato. Then, I just hope the author updates more often! You could set up a rule where for every certain number of submissions, you get an extra chapter. After all, there are three free submissions every day. Keep it up, and I wish you all the best! 💕💕💕

Although it's messy, it's alright. Also, the author doesn't seem to care about the opinions of fans of the original work or the characters; once the power of the talismans is revealed, it should be thoroughly suppressed. 🍉 Many comments in the comment section are negative because the author didn't use talismans to crush Caesar.

Many settings have been changed, the most outrageous being that Chu Zihang is the protagonist's son 🙂 That's incredible!