Dragon Raja: What Do You Mean I’m the Black King, Nidhogg?

Although, I still want to ask the author, the protagonist should not be a woman, right? What is the meaning of "The Unmarried Man and Lily's CP painted pear clothes" [what], if it is a gender change, the plot will be very slow 🤦, after all, I came here for the "Unmarried Man" and the Lily CP painted pear clothes 😢, so the author asked, is the main character male or female?

Let me talk about my personal opinion: First of all, except for the setting of the original work, the plot has basically been changed, so it is more of a re-writing based on the original world view. The author's writing style is biased towards daily life, with a faint sense of warmth. This is why someone in the comment area said that it feels the same as Lu Mingfei. The small drawback is that the tension of the action is insufficient, so many battle scenes cannot be visualized in the mind. At the same time, the pace of entering the main story is too slow. The plot of the book title is basically presented after a hundred chapters, so it is difficult to retain some readers or cause skipping. Of course, the author also said that it is an if line to make up for regrets, so just take it as it comes.

Dragon Clan fan, very good article, and the main character will gradually change into a woman, Bai

After watching it for a while, many key characters are missing. Characters such as Nono, Professor, and Aki who played a big role in the plot in the early stage did not appear. As I said before, I don't know whether they will appear later. Those who have not watched Dragons will find it good, but I have re-watched them all several times. I always feel that without these characters, the plot will lose a lot of interesting things. Overall evaluation: OK [I learned it]

The relationship between Lu Mingfei and the protagonist was written based on a part of my life. Pure brotherhood! And I have written very restrainedly! There is something called brotherhood rather than ambiguity! If you really feel it's ambiguous, you can watch the Dragon Clan anime Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang... And how Lu Mingfei and Chu Zihang were described in the original Jiangnan novel when they slept in the same bed. Isn't that ambiguous? Sometimes I also think... If I hadn't met my brother, I might not have had so many dark histories and wouldn't have been ridiculed or made a fool of myself. But in my opinion, none of this matters anymore. What matters is the process of making fools of each other, the birth of black history. Each of them was born in irreversible youth. "There is happiness", "there is pain", "I am disappointed" and "there is anger". But without exception, I do not regret knowing my brother. At this time our emotions have gone beyond so-called love. This may be the "friendship of life and death". In my opinion, this so-called brotherhood is far more important than love.

So, author, are you accepting both Natsumi and Eri? I mentioned CP Eri before, but now it's become CP Natsumi and Qingbai Eri [what]? If Natsumi and Eri were accepted together, then I would like it more [smile] [smile] [smile] @Manmiao

It was okay before, but the current Xia Mi gives me a very borderless look (personal feeling). Even if the two of them are together, I can't accept the fact that you bite Sister Na regardless of the occasion (at least it saves the protagonist some face, but if you can't do it in private, I can accept it). Other than this, there are no problems for now, and I think the writing is really good 🙂

I think it's okay. There are a few points that should be changed according to the original work, although it is said that it was created by a fan, Lu Mingze. The child is a cousin and not Lu Mingfei's. The younger brother Lu Mingze has a twin relationship with him. The Dragon Clan has two personalities, the Black King and the White King. I think it's incredible that Eriki can become the White King. The death of Holzog must be tragic.

Yes, compared to the author's first book that I read for the first time, it is a good improvement. It has improved a lot. The plot of the story is also okay.

It feels like it was expanded by AI.