Dragon Raja: Transmigrating and Starting by Eloping with Renata

The self-setting of the protagonist in the early stage is a bit strange, but it is invincible later on. After watching "Black Swan Port", I can continue to watch it and it is fun all the way. But so far, I only have kisses and hugs, but there is no more exciting program.

The whole book is very good. The world view is also well organized. The stories that happen in the book are also interlocking. It can be regarded as a high-quality dragon fanfic, but it needs to continue to work hard. I found a problem when reading the book, that is, the author's age when writing is not right. I really don't know it myself. At the beginning of the book, the protagonist and several others As for the age of the characters, I feel that Su Enxi and Chen Motong are too young. Needless to say, Xiami, it doesn't matter how old they are. But I personally feel that in the world view of the Dragon Clan, Chen Motong, Su Enxi and Ling are all about the same age, with the oldest being Ling. Chen Motong and Su Enxi are about the same age. I still hope the author can describe it more. When I read the book, I always feel that the protagonist takes three years to start every moment. The author still needs to work hard. Do you still need to score points?

Uh, you must update, Vadasi, anything is fine I must write about the Dragon Clan for the rest of my life.

Is the author a female author? The overall logic is okay, there are fewer fighting scenes, more emotional scenes, and many female protagonists, but the pace is too fast. It's already good to write a book for the first time

The writing is very good, it would be even better if it could be updated [please provide updates]. There's nothing sluggish about the writing. Is he really a novice author? I feel like it's the best among Dragon Clan fandom. The pace is just too fast. How many words does the author intend to write? I hope there is at least 50w or more.

Yes, it can be considered a first-class one among Dragon Clan fans. I hope there will be more plots about Renata, Xiami, and Eri in the future.

So far, it's a very comfortable fanfic. The protagonist has a good character with a bit of a sinister streak, and the emotional line is okay. I hope it won't be all the same. After all, the Dragon Clan is not so strong in the plot. Don't write down the parts about Bronze and Fire King in detail. It's too boring. I read a lot of fics and the impression of Bronze and Fire is very poor.

Not bad, not bad. It's rare to get them all. Jiangnan's works are all about poor girls.

Yes, the author writes about dragon harem, which is the best I have seen so far. Alas, indeed!!

When does the author eat meat 🤔, eating meat can replenish five stars