Playing a Secret Identity: A Powerful Figure from Another World

Plot composition, plot ups and downs They are all quite good, very reasonable, and good. There are no obvious shortcomings, and they are even advantages. There is a shortage of people with intelligence nowadays. The most important thing is that a soldier was so frightened that he fell asleep and did not choose to kill directly. This directly highlights the kindness of the protagonist. It is not the kind of rustling writing. It can be said to be quite good. The second angel character was directly attacked by the orcs, for a very normal reason. You control several of them, and the monsters and the tone of those soldiers tell you that their people must have died. Wen, who has a very high IQ, is not the traditional person who just kills people when he sees them unhappy. The main reason is that there are too few things like transformation, and there are even fewer themes about one soul and twins. Compared with the one soul twins I have seen, they are much better. I am an old bookworm, and the transformation type is worthy of application. Toyoha The tears of the consciousness are abundant, and life is wrapped in the consciousness The flying wings filter the waves, and the name is Luo Ziguo

It's not bad. Most of the stories about Rim World are about colonial development. I've never seen a story about a character in a famous module about Rim World. For the subsequent development of the base, you can learn from the book about Rat Knight Captain next door, and also build a survival aid. Blueprints can be built with one click, and scientific research can generate data out of thin air. The operation of the base can be left to Miriam, so that the protagonist's clone is not occupied.

As one of the few marginal novels and well written, I give it full marks.

Is the main character single?

The author writes very well, keep up the good work

Great ideas, but the writing style needs to be improved I didn't want to say more. But there are too few books about the world, so I might as well give my opinion. My personal suggestion is The strength of the vests should not be that big. You can start with rat, cat, alien rat, ordinary rice, and then Lydia. In this way, the main line can give each race's vest a branch line, such as conquest ~ travel or experience life. In short, let these vests spread out to expand the world view. Furthermore, the interaction between the supporting characters and the protagonist is too human-machine-like and not excessive at all. Two people with different personalities use the same way of speaking in different scenes, without any consideration of whether the character in this scene should have such a way of speaking. Finally, a little suggestion. Since you are already invincible at the start, why not just add Midi's ship and set it so that it does not exist in the real world. It would be great if the vests can be freely teleported to the ship. It is also convenient as I mentioned above. The vests can be gathered together when scattered. In short, I still hope that the author can write better and better

Is Feng Yunlan a vest or something else? Why can't I control this vest?

Huan's novel is great, keep it up

Macabaka (Evaluation-Excellent)

Very beautiful, very beautiful.