Praise Aha from the Start, and Social Death Makes Me Stronger

When I first read the comments, I thought that the so-called excessive shame of the heroine had really gone over the limit, but after reading it, I found that it was okay. It felt like a national destiny story plus a transformation story, which was quite refreshing, but the setting made up for the forced pretentiousness of the national destiny story and the forced embarrassment of the transformation story. I encourage it. It is best to complete the world view as soon as possible, otherwise I feel that I am not far away from Kavin. In fact, rather than saying that the embarrassment of the protagonist is a failure, it is better to say that the shame of transforming in public is an indispensable part of the transformation story. It feels like watching the sweetheart heroine transform in public in elementary school. If the protagonist speaks stereotypical chuunier lines after transformation, and everyone around feels so excited and powerful, and the protagonist is unfazed, then it is embarrassing. As long as the protagonist's shame does not delay the business, or if you don't write about shame to ruin the atmosphere when you are writing about a big event, it is just right.

It's a fun and interesting article, but I found that I was infected by netizens. I don't know why the protagonist is embarrassed, but I think he is super handsome 🤦

It's pretty good, but when the protagonist transforms in public, it's hard for me to understand why the audience laughs at him? Although my clothes changed after I transformed, I felt that the audience was laughing too abnormally 🤔

It's just a novice at the moment, but it's refreshing enough, and there's no situation where the geniuses are all just on the side of the road. It's rare to see a book like this on Tomato that talks about teamwork. It's really delicious.

The game invades reality + game copy + system + card drawing + Bengtie Yuanshen (with some other games) + transformation + joy + team Recommendation: It's quite interesting. You can draw cards through joy points. There are basically everything in the card pool (Genshin Impact's iron elements account for the majority). You can draw weapons, currencies, skills, character transformation cards... When you use skills, there is a 5% probability of transforming into other original Beng character brackets (the external performance is the main one). The character wears a COS suit that matches the size of the original character (if it's a boy, it's the male protagonist's hard-wearing version). There will also be a character-related short PV character demonstration or second creation on the head, and you can get a certain skill of the character (such as Zhongli's marksmanship, Ningguang's gem appreciation...) It's so fun. As an aside, I think it's more interesting to just transform into someone else. It's so much fun to be able to change from male to female anywhere, haha. The protagonist's current image is that of a pink-haired melee priest, armed with Alicia's staff. The best way to save teammates is to destroy all enemies. The supporting role of the sister is quite comfortable and okay, and getting along with the rare teammates is more natural. Finally, there is a team-type plot that does not seem to be a point deduction. Groove: Every time the protagonist transforms, the reactions of other supporting characters are too AI. They keep doing the same thing countless times. It is recommended to adjust the AI in this aspect or change it yourself. Too few chapters

I think it was a lot of fun and interesting to write, but there is one question that can be changed. Does the pink hair have to be fixed? For some transformed characters, pink hair is really awkward. Isn't pink hair just a rendering of Alicia? But the power of some characters can break through this rendering, right? It's not necessary for all characters to have pink hair [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes] [rolls eyes]

So pretty! Why is the rating so low? The logic is online. Each character appears and has corresponding events that can solve the current difficulties. Goldfinger has it, but it is not outrageous. The heroine has not drawn a card for a long time. I want to know who the next permanent character will be. I look forward to Shadow Treasure [I understand][I understand]

Finding a book that is almost as good as "Drawing Wind Pansy Cards at the Beginning" may be a little uncomfortable in the early stage, but as long as the protagonist adapts to the joy later, everything will not be a problem. [OK]

Good luck to the author, I feel pretty good anyway. Some people ask why everyone has pink hair, so I would like to say, why is it not fun to have all pink hair? Thank you to the author for bringing joy to us readers. Well, someone mentioned that the queen has a harem. I thought about it and it's not impossible. Anyway, Lily harem, you can play a game and still have so many wives. The main thing is that I'm afraid that the author will deviate from the core of happiness because of the emotional line. Emotional space is allowed, but not too much.

Not bad, great fun article. However, there are still some flaws. First of all, the protagonist's battle priest route at the beginning has completely changed to a route that relies on character transformation, which is a pity. Also, various descriptions always give me a strange feeling, that is, they feel too exaggerated, and this kind of description is especially serious after entering the second dungeon, at least it did not give me such a strong sense of violation before. Overall it's okay