No Superpowers After Transmigrating? I'll Secretly Develop Alongside Myself

This is a new author here, just starting out, and there are so few people. I don't have enough experience, but I want to enjoy reading it, so I just follow my preferences and write wherever I think of the outline. I don't know if this is the right way to write it, or if it will be too procrastinating. Thank you all. I have written hundreds of thousands of words. When everyone is reading, if you have any comments, you can put them forward in the comments or discussion area. As long as there are a few posts every day, I will mostly change what needs to be changed. Of course, don't quarrel 😘😘

It's very interesting. I hope that there will be no CP/no female protagonist as stated in the introduction, and readers must not be tricked into killing them. Come on, it's really well written and very enjoyable to read. It's better than the novels I've read before. The writing at the back is very good, but Chen Chen upgrades a bit slowly, and the atmosphere between the female clones and Zhixia gives people a weird feeling every time they blush, which makes people a little bit uncomfortable. But fortunately, after reading the chapters, every clone is very good. I hope I don't kill anyone. After all, it can be seen that Chen Chen really treats each clone as a family member. If they are gone, Chen Chen will definitely cry sadly. Xie Xiran is so crazy and cute, but Chenchen is even cuter. There are also updates soon. I'm afraid I'll finish reading them in two days.

I have read Chapter 21 so far, and I feel very eager to read it. This is a novel with a theme that is not new, but very innovative (his avatar will not always be a male, and has different personalities. I have always wanted to find a doppelgänger novel like this, and the author finally wrote it). Maybe it is because I have read less novels like this, but I personally think it is very good. (As for why I didn't give it five stars, it's because many people read five-star reviews and think it's a human machine [laughs crookedly]) But there are still some problems. For example, when describing sentence fragmentation, when describing the Vientiane Heavenly Palace, you will find that there are many long paragraphs of description. In fact, as a person, you should divide it into more paragraphs and give more periods. There is another problem, that is, the author, your book will be popular, but! Your book will definitely be criticized for the first few chapters! Because your protagonist has not achieved the personality they want. This is what the person who gave three stars in the 33 book reviews said "doesn't have the qualifications to be a king." But I think it's pretty good, so you have to add something more emphasized in the introduction: "The protagonist's early personality is relatively unconventional, and what I want to describe is a person's slow transformation." If that's what it means, I remember the first one, but it's best to add the introduction as well. For those of you who read my book review, if you have no book to read or want to read a clone novel, and you still have time to read this book, then! Please read my book review! If I gave the previous four stars because I was afraid that the author would be high-profile and deliberately gave it, then my four stars are an encouragement to the author, asking him to work hard and improve. I can say I have seen over 60 now Zhang, if you really want to see it, I can emphasize to you, don't be too smart Son! Don't be smart! Because this is a new author, this book has many shortcomings Point, although the author may be unhappy by saying this, it is true There are many realities, for example: there is no sense of a large organization. No organization In the early stage of development, which is the so-called novice village, the author directly wrote about the early and middle stages for him. More than 60 pictures used to include more than 60 pictures with very few fighting scenes! No What passion. Low concept of money and props. Start contacting the official when your level is very low. You don't have to worry about someone being radical within the official. They will bring someone with a higher level and use a special device to directly check your level. If you find that your level is low (although the official statement is that it is a branch or not a strong branch), When you meet an unfathomable person in a fantasy world, you think that the official can't find your level in your territory and you are shocked. You don't think about whether you have any props.) You directly use force on the clone and put all the responsibility on yourself. You are afraid that the organization will ignore the people (even though you said you are on the side of the official) and so on... But! There are still advantages, it is not limited to traditional points Shen Wen has innovated the clone, which is composed of some sudden changes of the protagonist. Thinking suddenly creates some different clones, giving It brings readers some different reading and a novel experience of group portrait writing. This is what I see Motivation to go on. If you also like its advantages, you can Keep reading!!!

I like the core setting of this clone style the most: the main body keeps the original heart, and the clone opens up the world. Unlike the cookie-cutter protagonist who makes a strong appearance and makes a counterattack in the face, this article focuses on the sense of control behind the scenes. There are many avatars with different personalities and complementary abilities. Some are killing and scheming, while others are dormant and cultivating their power, weaving a complete power network from all walks of life. The protagonist uses his clone as a pawn to leverage the entire worldview.

A super interesting book about the behind-the-scenes of the clones. I spent two days catching up on the latest chapter and read it as soon as I woke up. I really haven't read enough. There is still no heroine who can focus on her career. The character of each clone is vividly shaped. The author will update it as soon as possible!

I like the setting of the author very much, but the original character of the protagonist is too... Well, I can't describe it. It just feels weird. Secondly, the protagonist group has been fighting monsters for more than a hundred chapters. It is not a big challenge. It feels a bit harsh. After all, the first few zodiac signs, including Sloth, are all S-level and above. Logically speaking, they should be much higher than ordinary superpowers or even A-level superpowers, but they are not much higher now; the author's writing is still good. I can't stand many novels. After reading Tomato Peak and The Ten Deadly Sins I haven't found a book that I can continue to read, but what the author wrote made me shine. My ideas and the author's are almost coincident (except for the character of the main body and the character of the snake). Finally, I would like to emphasize that the author's setting really poked me. I really hope that the author will keep writing and not stop updating. After all, it is difficult to find a satisfactory novel setting. It is not easy to find a needle in a haystack. I hope the author will persevere. Finally, I hope there will be no BE and Hu'an CP. Thank you! (Personal opinion) 😘🤧🙃 I feel that the development of the plot is not too amazing and is a bit bland. I really hope that the author will stick to it and write it well before typing so many words to express his opinion. I have been reading for several years and I have never typed so many words. Later, I can also try to write some fusion abilities. For example, fuse low-level abilities with each other to create more powerful abilities. It is similar to the synthesis in Mc. You can also differentiate low-level abilities and attach them to powerful abilities for non-staff use (cannot reach the level of members within the organization). Get a sense of belonging, increase trust, and look up to the mystery and strength of the organization; there are powers that are not only the ones you describe, but also include but are not limited to: metal cards and the like. A person can also have multiple skills at the same time. Of course, they cannot be repeated. This depends on the author's imagination. At the same time, there must not be too many entities. I hope these can provide ideas for the author 🙂

So beautiful🥺Men are menstruating🙄Women are crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It is the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome😘He is a god It was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist and I was so cute that I shed tears Not only will the world no longer be short of water, it will be the nemesis of depression 😋 It will also be the alarm clock of vegetative people 😨 So cute that tears flowed out of the corners of my mouth and flooded the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that I shed tears, and from now on, the world will no longer be short of water

I don't know how many stars I'm going to give, so I'll give it a few reasons, just in case it turns out to be good later, and I'll also ask the author. How was this clone divided? How often? Or is it a level upgrade? I feel that the personalities of the protagonist and the clone are too different. Logically speaking, they should be the same, but the protagonist feels like a little wife, so why not let Chenlong be the protagonist?

The subject matter is always old, but the advantage is that the first viewing experience is good, I hope it will not fall apart later. The more the organization is written, the bigger it becomes. A villain cannot be like the protagonist. When the protagonist becomes stronger, he will also become stronger.

I've finished reading it, and it's quite interesting, with some foreshadowing, and it's not a brainless novel. It's the author's first book, but I really didn't think it was poorly written. The plot is also intertwined and very addictive. Perhaps the only drawback is that this is the author's first book, so it only has over 700 chapters, and I feel like I could write more. But it didn't end so suddenly. I can only say that it was expected and unreasonable, but it was really much better than most novels. I hope whoever writes the next book will be as good as him 😘😘