Top Alpha, Stop Begging! I’ll Accept My Punishment, Okay?

Looking forward to chasing my wife in the crematorium, a little torture [cool]

Chase your wife quickly, and you must torture Pei Yunshen ruthlessly.

It's so fun to pull and pull, I'm looking forward to chasing my wife in the crematorium, but I hope it won't be too cruel [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Overall, it's very interesting to read, and the author's writing style is also very good. It's worth watching because the ambiguity is also very good [shy]. I also like the character design. It would be great if Pei takes more initiative in the later period, he is just like a piece of wood. Also, the pacing is a bit slow. It would be nice if the protagonist had a long mouth. I look forward to Pei chasing his wife's crematorium in the later stage, but don't chase it for too long. I feel uncomfortable waiting for two chapters a day [I'm about to cry]

Except for Xiao Shi's feeling that the case could have been solved a long time ago, but the case was delayed, as if the author deliberately prevented the case from being solved, the other words are good.

Not bad, quite good. It's about teasing and teasing the little fox who skips the ticket x the cold-hearted but hot-hearted dedicated detective. So far, it seems that Su's character is just a pretense in front of Pei. He has his own plans and goals. The ultimate goal is to reunite his family and find his biological mother. Therefore, this character design seems to have no other feelings besides being flirtatious, special attack on Pei, and scheming. Let's talk about the plot of the story. Let's not talk about the fact that Pei is always seriously injured in the plot (you can barely use the detective setting to fool him). He has always been passive, taking into account social responsibilities and the sudden flirtation of his private life. This setting first Tian has determined that this character can only pursue his wife or choose to protect himself from dangers to warm up his emotions. The author generally chose the former, which is a bit similar to ancient romance. In fact, I have read a lot of fan fiction, and this kind of setting is not new (referring to public officials) Then there is the overall style of diction. Some places are a little more obscure because of the problem of sinking the river. This can't be helped, but some places seem to have unsound sentences, which is understandable. After all, it is inevitable to be careless when typing by hand. A certain person has low ability to plot plots, so his appreciation ability is naturally limited to the audience of ordinary people. Don't take it seriously. I can't give constructive suggestions. After all, the book is written by the author.

I can't stand it anymore [I'm about to cry], this is so flirty, give me an update (><)

What Pei Yan did in the early stage took me two weeks to finish watching. I felt really chilly and aggrieved after watching it. Although the state after the experience of Xiao school beauty is the sequelae of psychological stimulation, I still feel a little sad [almost crying]. I plan to read the rest tonight, like I have to bite the bullet and watch it

Super pretty! ! The ambiguity is very satisfying. I like Su Linqian's character so much! Looking forward to Chasing Wife Crematorium

It's very good. The protagonist's charm is well written and the emotions are good. You can really watch it.