[Sharp-tongued, scheming, irresistible Beta × aloof, jealous Omega]
Shi Yue transmigrates into an ABO novel as a cannon-fodder Beta who won't survive past three chapters.
The original owner brought disaster on herself by throwing herself at the protagonist, and met a tragic end. Determined to rewrite her fate, Shi Yue has just one rule for staying alive: keep away from the protagonist, Ling Xuehan.
Ling Xuehan is the top student at the Federation's No. 1 Military Academy, heir to the Ling family's military-industrial empire, and an S-rank Omega. With silver hair and blue eyes, she's an untouchable flower on a high peak. The school's Alphas only dare admire her from afar.
Shi Yue steers clear of her, keeping her head down and dodging her whenever she can.
And yet
She avoids Ling Xuehan, but when Ling's mental powers run wild, Shi Yue is the only one who can calm her;
she avoids her, but her own chubby little bird spirit keeps burrowing into Ling's snow leopard's arms;
she avoids her, but rumors start spreading across campus: that Beta has landed the top student.
Shi Yue: ??? I didn't do anything. Don't make things up.
Until one day, Ling Xuehan corners her against a wall. Icy blue eyes are inches away, and her voice is low and restrained:
"Just when... are you going to let me mark you?"
Shi Yue: ...Did someone give me the wrong script?
It's beautiful and the setting is delicious. By the way... Did it use AI? There are a lot of dashes [thoughts]
It's really pitiful to be liked by the heroine, but when the heroine gets jealous, she targets the protagonist (corresponds to Chapter 19 of the original text)
The writing is okay, but if the heroine is friends with other people, she can make her feelings less obscure, otherwise it will look a bit awkward.
@S The writing is very beautiful, highly recommended👍👍, but the emotional scenes are a bit lacking, I hope there will be more in the future❤️
It's pretty good to watch, but the emotional scenes jump too fast. Sometimes it is unclear where the relationship between the four people started. But overall it's okay The titles of each chapter are a bit strange. Is it the author's unique design? It feels a bit like that um... Memoir, and I have a bad feeling about it. I want to ask first whether the ending is he or be
Is it combined with AI to edit the text? It looks a bit similar in some places (no malice)
More emotional scenes, especially the heroine and her CP. I feel that the person named Ye appears a bit too much.
Very nice book, very delicious
The emotional scenes are okay so far, but I feel like they lack some unique pheromones [Salute]
Beautiful and very logical 😘