A Strongest Warrior of the Ninja World, Yet Always Shipped as the Bottom

It's so beautiful and I love watching it. Every couple is so cute. Mom, this little Yu Lie has really become Xiao Yu's Bai Yueguang [Crying] [Crying] Quan Nai and Xiao Yu are also delicious. Tobijian and Xiao Yu's research on chakra makes them cherish each other. It's a pity that because of the hatred between the two races, Tobijian can't express his feelings (Tobijian is really a good man, I love him) Ban, rise up, I can't imagine the scene where Ban saw Xiao Yu coming back from the dead, it must be very delicious😋. An explosion of protectiveness and possessiveness Obito, please rise too. Although Xiao Yu regards him as Lie's substitute (actually not), I want to see "Who are you looking at through my eyes?", And I can't bear the pain because I want this kind of emotional pull [laughs] Kakashi, you should also keep up. Personal guidance from the reborn Xiao Yu is rare. Cherish it and don't let Obito steal Xiao Yu's attention. Yes, that's right, our Xiao Yu is the succubus of the ninja world. She is strong and beautiful, so beautiful and powerful. Who can see it without pity or wonder [][] tied it in one breath, it is so beautiful

The rice is so delicious, and the grandmother is very good. My favorite part is the scene where the protagonist is sad in front of his friend's grave, pinching the protagonist's face and roughly wiping his tears. This kind of widow's sense of betrayal in front of the grave is really refreshing [Like] [Like] [Like]

Woooooooooooo delicious. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooontdytle-doingsssssingssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss . . . The protagonist is also very strong. . The last few chapters of the first unit, give me the knife...! Looking forward to the Shura Field later! [Although I'm always in Shura Field] Yu kowtows with everyone, it's so delicious! Very good at writing! Hey, Memoirs of a Dead Wife! ! ! ! Resurrection my love! ! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I'm at it so far, I'm ranked number one the most! The shocking kiss before death, and the words he elicited later due to the system's [physical problems] were not as good as his hey hey hey hey hey hey hey. Needless to say, Madara's scenes made me go crazy and forget about love. . . In the end, they died like a couple dying in love! ! Izumi. . My cute tea-scented kitten. . . Tobirama,. Forget it but have to say it. . . Uhhhhhhhhhhh! Although unit 2 has opened a new vest, hehe, the power of grandma continues to activate! Although there is a new Obito, Kakashi. . . .，， At last! Modo Modo! So delicious! This is the first time I write a long review in so many years!

"The ninja world who definitely knows how to be a mom vs. The man who definitely doesn't want to be a mom"

There is no one in Hokage that depicts the best battles among foreign persimmons. The protagonist is strong but not cheating. There are emotional lines but not forced. Each emotional line is described. The protagonist's smile before revealing himself and the scene before Izuna Retsu's death are really tearful. Each scene is very delicate, not frivolous, inexplicable abstract, and has real own strength. Lie's death was so good that I cried and felt happy. I'd like Quan Nai to come back in the future😋 Moreover, the protagonist didn't feel cheated when he fought against an army of 40,000. It was really the result of the protagonist's hard work and efforts! ! Everyone will be well in the future! (Crying) I can't forget Sengoku F4. I can't forget Tobirama's sight and concern for the protagonist. I can't forget Izuna's death. I can't forget Retsu's kiss. Come back, okay? (Crying) The back is not as delicate as the front, which is weird

It's very original and the content is not boring. However, some issues still need improvement. The protagonist Yu is very vivid, but it feels like he doesn't want to really watch Naruto's time traveler. For example, he doesn't know about Black Zetsu. But Yu's death was very surprising. Tobirama's portrayal is also very good, but Hashirama is relatively unsatisfactory. Retsu's proportion is really large, while Izuna's is pitifully small, and it seems that it hardly affects Yi. Madara also thinks that even if Yi knows that the other person is not dead, it is normally impossible for him to have no feelings about his injury, right? 👀This is my own understanding, and the rest is for the author to fill in. Finally, I am looking forward to the follow-up, so don't stop updating! 👍🏻

One of my favorite articles ♥ The author reminds us mothers that the original intention of the character "Mom" is to make him loved by more people. He has his own will and is not a puppet manipulated by the plot. Family and friendship are indispensable bonds between people.

It is really a well-written fanfic. The protagonists, Retsu, Madara, Izuna and Tobirama, are all very easy to relate to. While the emotional development of the characters is not outstanding, the OOC characters are not outstanding. In my eyes, the characters' blood and flesh are written out. The development of the story is also relatively logical. While creating a new story, the author also retained the original major event nodes, so that he did not deviate from the main line and allowed his story to be expressed delicately. Random Thoughts: The chapter where Izuna and Retsu died was really brutal, and the protagonist's coma afterwards was also uncomfortable. The protagonist dies and Madara dies as well. Although they are all fake deaths in the plan, it is still quite embarrassing. Seeing this, I really feel that Hashirama is not a thing (is it putting the cart before the horse or is Madara and Yu not important enough). Uchiha, who valued love and justice, died in the hands of his best friend, and Yu, who guarded the flames and broke through the darkness, fell on the eve of dawn. I want to ask: Will Yu's identity return in the future? Will you continue to use it after returning? Can the recent ending be he? Although Dao's are attractive, I want to see them happy. I hope the author can continue to write well like he is now. I am really afraid that he will suddenly run away or end the story halfway through the writing. After all, most fan fiction is like this, but it is really rare to have a good writing style that is also to my liking. I hope the author will write better and better, and Yu and Uchiha will also get better and better.

Feiyu99! ! Feiyu99! ! ! ! 😭😭😭😭😭 Feijian, you must cling to Xiao Yu! ! ! The author's description of emotions is super delicate! ! I read the description of Tobirama and Yu over and over again! ! Especially when Tobirama met Yu's eyes on the battlefield and knew that Yu was an Uchiha. It's really cool! It's so cool! It's so cool! ! ! There is also Tobirama's shock and joy when he saw Yu using the space-time ninjutsu, and his regret and regret when he thought he had found his soulmate but found out it was an Uchiha. Senju and Uchiha are destined not to be close friends What touched me the most was Tobirama's shock, disbelief, and sadness when he learned the news about Yu's self-destruction. Although his heart was in pain as if it was being torn apart, he couldn't express his sadness because of his identity. Woo hoo hoo, I'm crying to death! ! So the teacher's grasp of emotions is really delicate! All in all, this is a good book! Xiaoyu has a good time with everyone! ! Of course, my favorite is Fei Yu. Because I like the kind of restraint, forbearance, twisting, entanglement, struggle, love mixed with hate, and the kind of emotion that cannot be seen clearly in one's heart! I think if they hadn't been born into naturally opposing families, they would have become very, very good friends. The bond that shouldn't exist has accidentally become a red thread connecting the blood of two people by a river. I'm really looking forward to seeing Yu's reaction after Tobirama is reincarnated by the dirty soil! Is it the joy of finding something lost? Or is it the anger and melancholy of being deceived again? Of course, the most important thing is to see how the author writes! Really looking forward to it! ! ! Author, please update! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. In addition, I like Zhu Liang's words to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is so arrogant, don't show off in front of your brother Liang." His indignation will be beaten to death. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are like being there, and the character descriptions are very good!