
The Underworld King of the Business World’s Pure-Hearted Redemption
商圈阎王的纯白救赎
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 377k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Youth Sweet Romance
- Updated
- 11mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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145Chapters
8Reads
5.8Score
23.7kReads · all time
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The story line is good, but there are still some shortcomings in some details. For example: when I read Chapter 50 or 60, I found that the words "love" appeared in almost every chapter. The frequency was too high, it seemed very deliberate, and it didn't give people a good sense. In fact, there is no need to keep emphasizing the relationship between them. Just describe the characters through their actions and demeanor. It is recommended that there be more character dialogue and emotional pull. You can also put some words on characters other than the two protagonists to structure the entire novel in many ways. Another point is whether the character processing is a little too fast. For example, the appearance of characters such as the parents of the Yun family, Master Liao Kong, Master Jinghui (Jingming?), Etc., Seemed to come and go quickly. I feel that we can add some psychological descriptions and action descriptions of other characters from their perspectives to portray the images of other characters more fully. I feel that the villain did not cause much emotional fluctuations. If the description was more vivid, although it might make people hate it, it would be better than nothing. This way the plot won't be too rushed and stiff. Overall it's pretty good, keep it up ✊
It's beautiful and clear. Don't love it too much, Xiao Fu.
I like it. My baby's writing has improved. Keep up the good work.
Not bad, the writing is delicate
So beautiful!
Looks good, has good content
Good. I enjoyed reading it. The writing was pretty good. Recommended.