
Wuxia Crossover: From the Start at Lingyun Cave, I Create Dungeons
综武:开局凌云窟,我打造副本
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- Ongoing
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- 109k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
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- Male-Channel Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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Self-happy article, self-happy
Lingyun Skeleton wrote dozens of chapters.
Why does it feel so chaotic? There was a storm ahead. Blood Bodhisattva was pulled out one by one. They went crazy after about ten or twenty chapters. Then Xiong Ba said a miracle and got more than a dozen fruits with unknown effects. Then he summoned three people. Didn't he pass early? What else is unclear about the effects? It was clearly written before that White Blood Bodhi was not hundreds or thousands of people (one at the beginning, one for everyone, dozens or hundreds of people in Tianxiahui broke through). Did they eat it? Why is the effect unclear?
Topsy-turvy, no logic, Write an outline, organize and summarize, and reissue the book
The plot is a mess