Total War: From the Start, I Become Guderian

To be honest, I enjoyed watching the world outside "Zongheng": the collision of wisdom and strategy, the competition of blood and courage. The world within "Zongheng": It reveals a strong anti-war consciousness. When a war starts, the people will always suffer the most. It has both depth and breadth, yet it is fine chaff. I wrote a 2637-word article to explain why I say this, as well as some explanations for why you think this book is unreasonable. I put it in the comment area, and please allow me to clear up your doubts. Thank you very much...

It's so unbelievable. If you don't have conditions, you don't have to blitz everything. The Army has more than one tactic.

! ! ! (A must-read for the author)! ! ! First of all, although I really want to give it three stars, I know that writing a book is not easy, so I would like to give it some support. Then I would like to say a few questions and suggestions. 1- Try to reduce the number of heaven-defying skills, especially those that are lossless for all members and maintained for a long time. Although it is a cheating skill, it is unreasonable to give S after strengthening. The strength and level do not match. There are also SS and SSS you mentioned. This kind of long-term invincible skill can only be S. I don't know what to do with those skills after you. (From the current point of view, the protagonist relies heavily on the skills of the members, and everyone has performed well. The other classes have various commander skills that are against the sky. Those class members are more like making up the numbers. The strength of the entire class is based on skills) 2. Enter large-scale combat as soon as possible. With a total team of 4-50 people, many places cannot be rounded up. It is more like a small-scale combat, similar to a battlefield or a tactical squad, and it is difficult to have a sense of battlefield immersion. The suggestion here is to launch a multi-school joint operation in the future? Or a merger battle? That is, two or more classes or schools are combined to participate in layer-by-level selection. In this way, not only can you get a sense of satisfaction from the continuous expansion of the protagonist team, but you can also recruit some important supporting characters. 3-Currently, many supporting character commanders have excellent skills, but what will happen later? There can only be one commander in a battle, and then others will join the protagonist as soldiers and lose their powerful command skills. You can't let others command the protagonist. This is a problem that needs to be solved. 4-Forcibly sensationalizing is completely unnecessary, because people can be resurrected with resource points, although it is real pain to the senses. But judging from the way it was written before, it is completely sensational about the idea that people cannot be resurrected after death. 5-I don't know if the author missed it, but it was mentioned before that the owner of Wanye's skill upgrades his military rank and obtains new skills. Based on the protagonist's contribution, I don't know how many levels it can be upgraded to, and I haven't seen any mention of the protagonist gaining new skills or being upgraded. There is only a vague sentence: "Maybe it's because I can last longer because of my promotion in military rank or my endurance." 6-In fact, you can change your thinking after selecting 4 classes from the school. For example, for a battle between 1 and 2 middle schools, both sides will merge the 4 classes, and then 4 schools will be selected, followed by other cities or provinces, then the whole country, and then the real national war. Otherwise, with the current writing method of 4-50, I really don't know how long it will take before large-scale combat. (I have a feeling that large-scale combat will be the explosive period of this book, and blitzkrieg and various well-known battles will be really exciting) 7-Yes, yes, I almost forgot an important thing. I suggest that you write some personal lines of powerful supporting characters. It doesn't need to be too long, as long as it is reasonable. Then add a setting of how many outside transfer members each class can accept. In this way, some supporting characters with plot lines can gather under the protagonist for various reasons, such as wanting to become stronger, or wanting to win, or various inspirational stories. Add one star to prevent the author from running away if his rating is too low [eating melon]

This book is okay, the plot is compact and the logic is rigorous. It still looks pretty good. Although it is said that the protagonist enters a game called Zongheng to lead troops to fight, in fact, the article is biased towards military strategy, not that kind of game article. It feels like the protagonist's IQ is also online, and it's all about top-notch wit. I hope the author can continue writing. [Laughs][laughs]

It's pretty good, but some of the operations are quite outrageous.

The framework is quite rigorous, the logic is clear, and the setting is OK. There is very little impetuousness like a cool novel. The plot is exciting, the emotional rendering is a bit stiff, and the writing skills need to be further improved. But overall it is a very interesting book. I really like the moments of fit between the protagonist and the famous general. It is very handsome, and the outstanding performance of using various famous tactics to fight against the opponent's strange skills. The protagonist grows step by step, not all the tricks are exhausted, but he can also save the day and make a comeback against the wind. It is exciting and cool! I also wish the author to improve his writing skills and keep writing! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Light military, good writing, good narration, the most important thing is that the author is too temperamental If there is a problem, he immediately corrects it. He is a good comrade. Moreover, the article is mature and stable, and will not break the text. The plot is suspenseful and in-depth.

The unique design concept has a very strong sense of substitution

Only now do I think I am qualified to review this book Please forgive my lack of words and I can't comment, but it's really beautiful. I'm also very nervous about the knife. (I wish the author will publish a new book soon, I went to school)

This book currently seems to me to be one of Tomato's better-looking military fantasy stories. It tells the story of the protagonist Gan Nian traveling through a different world that focuses on military development. What I have seen so far is the part where the protagonist commands his classmates to compete in a county-level military competition. The author's writing skills are quite good at the moment, both in terms of the arrangement of the skills of the protagonist and other characters and the settings of system plug-ins.