Warhammer Fantasy: The Savior Is a Greenskin?!

The writing is pretty good. But there's a problem. Why are you going out to fight in a war? For example, when you fight in the underground cave at the beginning, I remember you didn't bring many people with you, right? But it felt like there were a lot of people in the back. There are still some fights. It was obviously outside or in the forest. Why did the guardrail inside your home get damaged again in the end? And the feeling happened many times. And it seems like it needs to be reinforced at every turn. I haven't seen anyone hit your house. At most, it was only once when hunting wolves. Overall, some logic or precision is still not enough. For example, we fought the guerrilla warfare of the goblins earlier. I remember you didn't have many people. And it feels very fast to write. It's like attacking many places in one day. The timing is a bit unreasonable. Just make the time accurate and correct. After all, it is equivalent to one person attacking 10 people. Overall it's pretty good, but some details need to be more accurate. Be more logical and reasonable. It feels like the jump is a bit big sometimes. You will write better as you become more proficient later.

The writing is okay, but it's too slow at 37 pictures. The protagonist doesn't even have the strength of an orc, and the function of the system is unclear. To this day, I still haven't figured out where the system energy comes from. Moreover, the protagonist's background is too low. As a fart, unless the system exerts its magical power to change his origin, he will not be very powerful. After all, the Big Belly King Gulu is still a goblin.

Very interesting, medieval Warhammer fan fiction, farming style from the perspective of an orc Looking forward to what it will be like when the orcs join forces with the human dwarves to knead chaos. I hope everyone will comment on the author after reading it and mention the traffic [licking screen][licking screen][licking screen][licking screen]

I didn't expect it to look pretty. What is your relationship with the author of Green Skin Savior of Qidian? The content is the same, so I changed the name.

It's okay, but the development is a bit slow. I feel like it would be better to speed up the development a little bit.

It's a good book. I feel that there are no major problems with the storyline. I feel that it needs more polishing, polishing, and setting details to make it more immersive.

A very interesting medieval green novel

It's better than other people's previous novels of the same type.

It's an interesting medieval Warhammer novel, but it's just not updated well.

I just like to see civilized I Xunsi [laughing evilly]