The Entire Esports Scene Is Waiting for Me to Be Exposed

The two protagonists have a tacit understanding, and the waistcoat falls off a little too quickly hahh, but overall, it's actually pretty good. Xingchen's crazy comments didn't make much of a difference, more of a cold feeling? The calm one Some suggestions: The brackets can actually be removed, and some of them can be directly integrated into the text, because it feels a little less immersive? Feeling Then there are some parts that feel very familiar and a bit repetitive. There is some foreshadowing here, but it seems like it was not written out before. Sometimes I feel a little... Confused.

It is not easy for the author to write, and he has always received five-star praise! The subject matter is pretty good and I like it! The characters are also very nice (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ But!!! 1. Parentheses are really weird. In fact, when writing online articles, using them like this rarely reduces the sense of reading. I almost thought it was AI (I didn't say AI, it was just the feeling the brackets gave me). It is recommended to write it in the article. 2. It may be my personal habit. Too many "!" When describing battles give me a feeling of gasping for breath, which makes it uncomfortable to read. In my opinion, if a paragraph is not for strengthening, it will only be ".?!" At the end. These three are the same. When using commas, I personally feel uncomfortable. I have seen several books like this and it is really uncomfortable.●●Maybe it is my personal preference. 3. Too many repetitive adjectives will make the article redundant and affect the perception. 4. I can understand what kind of image the author wants to create, but the reading may still be a bit biased. It can be seen that he is a newbie and needs to be polished, which makes it feel a bit awkward. Looking at it all from a reader's perspective, I definitely can't write such a good article! It's already great, come on!!

Super pretty!!!!! Ahhhh Xingci is so strong!!!!! Although the young couple are not together now! Tiantiandu [Love] [Love] [Love] The author, please write well, I will always support (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

!!!!! It's really, really beautiful! Who understands who understands! Who knew that this king who has returned and is still a legend is so shocking and so beautiful. It's well written. Keep going!!!!!

It's okay, but I still can't see where the crazy criticism is, or the author thinks the crazy criticism is a little different from what I think.

E-sports writing feels a bit like martial arts and martial arts writing. The descriptions of physical changes and Quanzhen games are all too real, but they are really good-looking.

Good-looking, Xing regained his crown, Lu Chen also faded away his youth and became a helper, and then Xingyun was rebuilt. (As for the former teammate, the businessman had no success and was eating up the star after Gong Que's death. Greed and jealousy may have already bred and gradually expanded) (Regarding 'Xing Yue', he is proof that Gong Que is devoted to e-sports. It is a pity that he failed to become the king of the crown in the name of 'Xing Yue') However, I hope that the stars in the other world will no longer encounter teammates who betray their hearts and enjoy love with the people they love. Return to the strongest shadow blade VS loyal top support o>_<o Lu Chen's feelings are shallow. His past has some intersection with Xing Que, but not much. His teammates are also naive. He doesn't talk to Gong Que. Is it because Gong Que has too strong aura? The article is very smooth, but I can feel that Hakimi's hands are new╭(╯ε╰)╮

Really good-looking! The unspoken understanding and interaction between the two are so sweet that it makes your heart melt. Whether it is the detailed description, the progress of the game, or the inner thoughts hidden between the lines, they are all portrayed in a particularly moving way.

I like it. I can only say that it touched my heart. The plot is not draggy at all. I like it very much.

Beautiful and passionate! It feels like a martial arts style!