Harry Potter: The Black Legacy, Raven of the Shadows

I spent three years writing the story outline to support the precise structure of the first-person narrative: the dual-line narrative (Horcrux decryption & political game) is closely integrated with the chronicle events, and the Horcrux line cleverly connects the original work and gives new interpretations. The overall British writing style is strong, blending Gothic gloom and classical narrative, with the first-person "Blake-style autobiography" throughout. There are undercurrents of emotion in the cold writing style, and a large number of long sentences and psychological monologues enhance the sense of character fragmentation. Images such as ravens and shadows are used throughout the story, creating a depressing and poetic magical world for everyone. Colworth Black is an atypical but ordinary hero - Ravenclaw's wisdom and observation destined his non-warrior genes, and his childhood memories formed his obsession with guardianship. The supporting cast is full of characters: Roselind (cold and fiery as a spy and friend), Sirius (trauma and violence), Cedric (The Immaculate Light), Harry (brave and stubborn), and Hermione (growing up as a female politician) all have memory points, and their emotional lines are full of romantic beauty. No spoilers, everyone is welcome to read and comment [Love] [Love] I used A to assist in commenting. After I posted it, I realized that the writing was not good, so I will add some additional comments. I just want to avoid lightning by myself. It's not a HE cool article, nor a traditional BE. I just want to write about the magical world in my heart. More realistically, war is cruel, but everyone also values ​​a peace-loving life. No one is perfect, everyone has their own highlights and shortcomings, because of course there are many knives in war. The love line is more about exploring relationships, about love, friendship, marriage, how to choose, and how to grow between people. Everyone handles this differently. It will also involve political concepts from different positions, as well as the overall view and the view of sacrifice, and how small people and heroes deal with each other when they are involved in the torrent of the times. For example, the protagonist is always guarding, but personal efforts cannot defeat the entire environment. If you can never achieve the results you want, how should you face it, how should you accept it, and how should you fight it. There are also some post-war traumas and the healing of childhood shadows. No matter what, life is about moving forward. I don't necessarily want to express any point of view, I just want to tell a good story about a person and the people around him.

Cole has a very melancholic feeling like an English gentleman, with delicate emotions, restraint and self-control, and he is also very poignant when his emotions explode. I wish him and Cedric love [shy]. The teacher's writing style is like early winter. The cedar forest, with fine branches and leaves, and the north wind blowing, will bring out the rustling echo. It is very touching. It is restrained but warm like Cole. It is a very, very good feeling [Admiration] Come on, teacher (๑•̀ㅁ•́ฅ)

Very nice! As someone who rarely reads first-person narration, I became addicted after reading two or three chapters. The author's writing style is very good. Cole's childhood and youth experiences were more sad than warm. It is undeniable that Cole endured a lot of life and death along the way, which made me heartbroken. In Cole's relationship with Harry, Remus, and Rose after graduation, although danger may come at any time, their mutual companionship and support made me soft, especially after Sirius was released from prison. During Cole's tenure as a teacher, the sad atmosphere in the early stage really slowed down a lot, making people want to watch it more and more. (By the way, Cole has no control over his appearance and likes good-looking people.) As for the emotional line with Syd, let's guess a redemption direction. The age difference of seven or eight years is not big (can you eat the younger ones?) Finally, it's not enough, it's really not enough [crying] [please update]

The writing is good, it feels like reading a diary. Although there are only fragmentary details described, these details are particularly vivid. The best description is the paranoia and madness of the Black family, such as Walburga's insanity and hysteria, Bellatrix's fanaticism and cruelty, Sirius's rebellion and hatred, Alphard's protection and perseverance. Regulus's self-sacrifice, Narcissa's wholeheartedness and love for her family,,,, the young perspective of the protagonist is full of chaos and conflict. The changes in the Black family reflect the turmoil of the entire wizarding society. When he grows up, he actively participates in the front line against Voldemort, the beautiful Colworth. Well, actually if I could, I would like to read the unfolding description of the protagonist's story, but after reading it, I felt it was too short [Love]

I haven't finished watching it yet, but it is undeniable that this is indeed an excellent work. It's rare to see such a well-written first-person work, and I'm very lucky to have encountered this work. I really like the sense of melancholy and silence that belongs to Ravenclaw and Black in the protagonist, like the patter of rain after a typhoon passes, and the sadness of finally waiting for dawn but losing too much in the dark night. (I don't know why, but it always gives me the illusion that the protagonist will die at the end.) As I watch it, I can't help but miss the short few thousand words of childhood when the protagonist and his father lived in Pinewood Pass. The protagonist is really, as said on the Internet, a person who clings to a time that is too short to be called childhood to heal his whole life. (Although he has not yet finished his life) But it was also that time that created Colworth Black, who is as tough as pine wood today.

A very good article. The author's writing style is very good. The first-person perspective is very unique. The protagonist's growth is really bumpy. Regardless of the concept expressed in the article, it is really interesting. I look forward to the follow-up (#^.^#)

I never thought it was a sadistic novel. I thought they could all survive. I thought the arrival of the protagonist would change something, but he is just an ordinary person, an ordinary person who cannot change anything. He is not a systematic time traveler like other books, just like him As he said, he failed to protect them, Alphard, Cedric, Regulus, Sirius... Etc., But he passed on the spirit of the Black family, and if he did not exist, Sirius would not have fallen in love with Rosier, and Harry would still live in Dursley Home... He doesn't seem to have changed much, but he has changed a lot. The author writes about his mental journey in great detail. We seem to have become Coleworth, experiencing his pain and relief. The writing is very good, the pace is relatively fast, and his childhood experiences are also described in a relatively detailed way. It is short, but it can highlight his character traits, that is, less but more refined. I am very honored to see such a good work on Tomato. I also hope that the author can continue to work hard and produce some sweet extras [smile] (revealing the purpose). I also hope that the author can produce some better works in the future! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss](I cried several times while reading [Cry]. This is just a small reflection. If I said something wrong, I apologize here! Thank you! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart])

It was the first time I read a book that was so touching. The author's understanding and portrayal of the characters are so profound. The growth and transformation of the characters were very natural. I originally thought it was another novel that saves everyone, but the result was unexpected. The story is very real. I thought about it after reading it. I understand that the protagonist will also be confused and frustrated. Flowers blooming in the scars can realize the preciousness of life. I think the departure of important people is the motivation to support Cole to continue... The emotions are also very delicate. All in all, it is a very deep fan 🥺🥺🤲🤲

The writing is really good, the writing style is delicate, and it is consistent with the original work. It is a sad and beautiful book that I dare not read a second time. Every regret is so sad, and the happiness within reach is always beyond grasp, which really vividly depicts the cruelty of war. Seder is an ideal dream. Without war, they will definitely live happily and sweetly for a lifetime. Both of them will understand and tolerate each other. George is a warm glove in reality, caring and amusing to warm each other. Regarding the brotherhood between Sirius and Regulus, the former is the older brother that he can rely on after experiencing a lot of awkward support for each other, while the latter is the older brother that he has admired since childhood and will always live in his memory with a beautiful attitude. Two brothers, two lovers, a guardian, a ward and a best friend. I was really moved after watching it, and I would like to thank my wife again for presenting such a good story, a realistic coming-of-age story full of regrets. I'm looking forward to my wife's next book

I really want to say that the writing is really great. The writing style is very mature and profound. Each character is very full and full of cuteness and hatefulness. It really breaks my stereotype of each character, but it also gives each person a future that matches theirs without emphasizing it. He is not a heroic protagonist who wants to save. On the contrary, he is very sad, but he is very strong. It is difficult for me to explain in words. This book is beyond my expectations and every stereotyped guess I have. I praise the author and give everyone in the book a victory in the death of a fisherman.