Plotting in Dragon Ball: My Dad Bardock Is Invincible Under Heaven

Good, I like it. The emotional descriptions are delicate and the logic is clear. The protagonist Bardock also has a unique personality and the heroine is also very gentle. I particularly like this couple. I hope to defeat Frieza as soon as possible and see the protagonist become a Super Saiyan. The author, cheers, cheers.

I have been reading Dragon Ball for many years. As a senior Dragon Ball fan, when I saw this book, I felt it was really interesting. If nothing else, the subject matter is very novel. From the plot point of view, the author boldly innovates and breaks through the framework of the original work. Bardock is no longer the tragic character who was killed with one finger in front of Frieza. Instead, he relies on the wisdom and decisiveness of a time traveler to steadily and steadily rewrite the fate of the Saiyans step by step. Although the pace is a bit slow, I quite like this. From weak to strong, slowly accumulating step by step, and finally bursting out after a long period of accumulation. In terms of character creation, Bardock's image is three-dimensional and vivid. He has the passion and fighting instinct of a Saiyan, but also has the calmness and strategy of a time traveler. He is decisive in killing but caring about his family. He shows the image of a good man and a good warrior. The only slight drawback is that the description of some battle scenes could be more detailed and the battle plot is slightly lacking. It may be that the author has not updated to the decisive battle with Frieza. But overall, this book is definitely a masterpiece among Dragon Ball fan works and is worth recommending!

To be honest, this work is Xiaozhou's first book. The handling techniques in many places are relatively green and immature. There are also many shortcomings in this book. Please forgive me, readers. I don't want to be like other brainless novels, which only focus on upgrading the battle. The battle upgrade is like fighting monsters. This is not what I want. What I want is to create characters, describe emotions, and connect the plot with a slightly slower pace and a lot of foreshadowing and foil. The most important thing is to make each character three-dimensional and full. The pace in the early stages is a little slower, please forgive me, readers! This is also to pave the way for the subsequent plot and to better shape the characters. The emotional description and the daily-oriented plot are to make each character more three-dimensional, flesh-and-blood, and the plot coherent. Anyway, thank you all for reading Xiao Zhou's work. I will continue to work hard.

It's a beautiful, charming, and different Dragon Ball novel. The pace is quite slow, but every day, every battle, the energy to improve, and every little detail are done very well. There is a down-to-earth feeling, unlike other games where combat effectiveness improves by leaps and bounds, there is a feeling of slowly practicing and upgrading. Only in this way can there be a deep sense of immersion. I just like this kind of thoughtful writing, with gentle development in the early stages and paragraphs describing emotions and daily life. It also makes Xiao Nuannuan very happy. The plot design is very reasonable and there is no logic. It's a rare place where things don't make sense. Good luck to the author! The only drawback is that the update is too slow. I hope the author will update it soon.

Okay, okay, Jiene is so cute, I suggest the author write more scenes with her. Bardock is also a real man, and I have to say that the character creation is quite good. I don't know which plot line will follow after defeating Majin Buu, Dragon Ball GT or Dragon Ball Super. @Bowl I still hope to take the GT route. The plot of GT is particularly good, but Dragon Ball Super is hard to describe.

He traveled through time and became Bardock, but the journey to transform into a Saiyan was much more difficult. After all, the Saiyans are a fighting nation. In the original book, Bardock traveled through time to the final movie version of Bardock. As he mastered the skills of transforming into a Saiyan during the battle, Childer pretended to be a patrolman and killed innocent people indiscriminately. Bardock had to stand up to protect Planet Zful (the former name of Planet Vegeta). When we watched it before, listening to the romantic song dedicated to you, Bulma was sitting in front of the window. It was raining lightly outside. At that time, I felt sorry for Bulma. They met from Dragon Ball. It was also the beginning of the dream, but they were promised by "Kiki" later. When you grow up, you want to marry me.

Very good, not bad. Let me tell you my opinion. This book is really good. It is quite new in this series and is different from the previous ones. The first is to change the original fate of Bardock and Jinai, so that Sun Wukong can have a beautiful childhood and living parents, which is very good. What I like most about it is its sense of reality, nothing fluffy, and lots of daily descriptions. It reads like a real thing, and it feels particularly immersive. Every character is lifelike and very consistent with the original work.

Okay, I have actually read some Dragon Ball books, but this one is quite special because the emotional scenes are described very delicately and the plot logic is also slow-paced. Many similar fan works are written in a very stupid way, as if the improvement of combat power can be achieved overnight, which is outrageous. But this book, one step at a time, 20 years of hard training, Bardock's combat power increased from 10,000 to 3.5 Million, as if it vividly shows us the daily life of Saiyans. The emotional descriptions are also particularly delicate. The wedding of Sun Wukong and Bulma, Qiqi's loss, everyone's image is very full. The fighting plot is also very exciting, and the description of the fighting is really good and interesting. And there are a lot of foreshadowings in this book. I don't know if you can see it. For example, why you can't become a Super Saiyan after 20 years of training. This is to pave the way for what follows. The setting and plot are gradually accumulated layer by layer. It has not exploded yet, but I believe it will be particularly amazing when the most exciting plot comes.

It looks good. When I was a kid, I used to wonder why Goku's wife wasn't Bulma, and why Goku didn't resurrect Bardock [thinking]. Bardock really likes him, he is the strongest warrior among his subordinates, and he seems to be the strongest besides King Vegeta. He is really talented and has great potential. Ji Nei is also good-looking, I thought Ji Nei was good-looking during the movie version [licking screen]

Yes, finally there is a Dragon Ball fanfic that interests me. The writing is indeed high-quality and well-written. The emotional scenes are well described, the characters are well created, the plot is reasonable, and the logic is clear. It's pretty good.