Plotting in Dragon Ball: My Dad Bardock Is Invincible Under Heaven

Okay, I like it. The emotional descriptions are delicate, the logic is clear, and the protagonist Bardock has a unique personality. The female lead is also very gentle. I especially love this couple. I hope they defeat Frieza soon and I want to see the protagonist become a Super Saiyan. Keep up the good work, author!

Having watched Dragon Ball for many years, as a seasoned fan, I found this book truly fascinating. Aside from anything else, the subject matter is novel. From a plot perspective, the author boldly innovates, breaking away from the original framework.

To be honest, this is my first book. Many aspects are handled rather awkwardly and immaturely. There are also many shortcomings, so please forgive me, dear readers. I don't want to be like other mindless novels, just endless battles and leveling up like monster-slaying; that's not what I want. What I want is to develop characters, describe emotions, and create a coherent plot.

It's great, I love reading it, a different kind of Dragon Ball fanfic. The pacing is a bit slow, but every daily life, every battle's energy boost, and every little detail is handled very well. It has a down-to-earth feel, unlike other fanfics where power levels increase dramatically; it's a feeling of slow training and gradual leveling up. This makes it easier to immerse yourself in the story.

Okay, okay, Gine is so cute! I suggest the author give her more screen time. Bardock is a real man too. I have to say the character development is pretty good. I wonder which storyline will follow after defeating Majin Buu, Dragon Ball GT or Dragon Ball Super? @Little Bowl of Porridge I still hope to go with the GT route. The GT storyline is really good, while Dragon Ball Super is... Well, let's just say it's not great.

He was transported to Bardock, but the path to becoming a Saiyan was much more difficult, as Saiyans are a warrior race. In the original story, Bardock traveled to the Bardock Finale movie. Having mastered the techniques to transform into a Saiyan through battle, he was forced to stand up to protect Planet Tuffle (the former name of Planet Vegeta) when Chilled, posing as a police officer…

It's great, very good. Let me share my thoughts. This book is truly excellent, quite novel in this series, and different from the previous ones. First of all, it changes Bardock and Gine's original fate, giving Goku a happy childhood and living parents, which is wonderful.

Okay, I've actually read some Dragon Ball books, but this one is quite special because the romance is portrayed very delicately, and the plot unfolds at a slow pace. Many similar fanfictions are mindless, making power-ups seem instantaneous, which is absurd.

It's great! When I was little, I always wondered why Goku's wife wasn't Bulma, and why he didn't revive Bardock 🤔. I really like Bardock; he's the strongest warrior of the lower classes, and I think he's even stronger than King Vegeta. He has such great talent and potential. Gine is also beautiful; I thought she was beautiful during the movie 🤤

Not bad, finally a Dragon Ball fanfiction that interests me. It's really well-written, with good writing skills, well-depicted romance, excellent character development, a reasonable plot, and clear logic. Very good.