I Escaped the Dragon's Jaws and Awakened a Template System

It's not bad. One thing I don't like personally is the descendants. There's really no need for descendants when you're immortal. In the case of multiple female protagonists, you also create a new character to collect the original female characters. This is fine if you have a single female protagonist or no female protagonist, but it is too poisonous to write this kind of thing when there are multiple female protagonists.

It's okay, there are some minor points. The author wanted to make jokes but to be honest, those jokes were so embarrassing. I didn't find it funny, but it's a good recommendation without the plot.

Yes, yes. That is to say, can you explain it when you transition? For example, when you travel to other time and space, the next chapter will go directly to one year, and you don't know whether it is a year after that time and space, or a year after you came back. They were all covered up. Why don't you explain your time span, don't do it so suddenly?

But people's physiques cannot be treated in the same way. When I was in junior high school, I was hit by a nuclear bomb and fell into a coma for two days before I woke up. Afterwards, I went to the cafeteria and ate fifty kilograms of rice and thirty kilograms of beef. Then I beat more than fifty classmates with my bare hands and then went out to shovel a tiger. The physique of an athletic student is by no means unworthy of its reputation.

I read more than 50 chapters. So far I think it's okay, and there's nothing bad about it. It deserves five stars for now.

Shuangwen, Bulma in One Hand, and Bulma in Parallel Time and Space have also disappeared, lest Green

A very interesting novel, written by a real person. It is estimated that the score of the new book is not high for the time being, but it should go up later.

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It's not bad, but the logic is a little different

It's currently up to 104. It's very nice. If it doesn't suck, you can add it to my treasure collection 😳😳