Dragon Ball: Legend of the Time Patrol

It's not bad. The story is a bit fast. It seems that I want to get through the early plot quickly. The old version of Broly is very suitable for my taste, as well as GT and Super. However, Broly has to take more action. The protagonist is okay, but a bit stubborn. Come on, update it. It seems to be a multi-dimensional world.

Dear readers, this book is not a pleasant read. Please be merciful if it does not satisfy your taste! ! ! It mainly describes the story of Law and Broly becoming stronger and standing at the top of the Dragon Ball world. I would also like to ask you to give it a good review. I would be very grateful! ! ! !

It's not bad. The story is quite attractive but the pace is a bit fast. The definition of realm in this book is my favorite. I hope the homework will be updated quickly. It's still the Space Patrol, Cell, and Super Gohan! ! ! ! Come on! ! !

Okay, okay, not bad, but every 100 updates you said, there will be a real and fake update. When will Broly defeat the God of Destruction, and Cell. It's a bit outrageous, but the story plot is not bad, and it's quite to your liking. I'll give you a good review [laughing evilly]

Author, you have opened a new book again. Why don't you add pictures to this book? But it's pretty good. It doesn't have the pictures in the previous book. But it's good to update 10,000 words a day. Come on, I'll give you five stars. Hurry up and write God Gohan.

Carefree and free, sometimes empty and sometimes real, like a fist or a palm, with no distracting thoughts, following the shape like a shadow, retracting and releasing freely, the Tao is natural, the natural way, all in one go, the origin and the fall, unrestrained and free, adapt to changes, act according to the opportunity, and play freely on the field!

It's not bad, but the pace is a bit fast, but the storyline is quite good. When will my godly fan take action, and Cell, the story is quite novel. [Shy][shy][laughing]

I can't give you full stars. The last book had pictures, but this one doesn't have pictures. There aren't many good-looking Dragon Ball fanfics, so don't give up on this book anymore. Remember to add pictures next time you update it.

@WC Compared with the previous book, there are obvious improvements, but there are still shortcomings. Keep up the good work, and seeing that the author likes Lao Bu so much, I think you can try to write a book in which Lao Bu and Xin Bu become twin brothers or brothers but are born earlier than Xin Bu [I learned it] Come on, the progress is obvious. The early stage was not good, but the quality has improved significantly in the later stage. However, I personally feel that there is a deviation in the character description of Lao Bu. Lao Bu talks too little and feels a bit emotionally lacking. @Fresh out of the toilet And I feel that you can make a peach garden sworn relationship for Broly in Super League [sneaky laugh] Also, if you want to open the next book, should you consider what I said about old Bu becoming the protagonist and Xin Bu being the twin brother or full brother? Finally, there is the problem of few people watching it. Should the author consider revising the previous part? I feel that few people have read this book because it was very dissuasive in the early stages.

Recommend a good Dragon Ball novel [Making Faces]