One Piece: The Straw Hat Pirates’ Painter Assassin

The writing was okay. I was attracted by the name and the two heroines. It turned out that the protagonist's ability has nothing to do with painting. It's just that the protagonist likes to draw. Then a poisonous point for me was that the memory of the protagonist was erased, which made me lose most of my interest in an instant. Of course, this may be a plus point for others. Everyone has their own hobbies and opinions, so in general you can check it out.

Three Golden Chapters. Very clever idea, straight to the point design. First of all, the nature of time travel and the price paid by the author are explained. The protagonist exchanges the memory of knowing the plot for the monster physique and devil fruit in the One Piece world. This point is well designed, not hidden, so that readers can know the essence of the protagonist as soon as they get started. The second is the plot design of the opening. There is no cliched way of forming four brothers with Luffy, or meeting Luffy by chance with ulterior motives, but through the guidance of fate, this way of writing allows the two to meet. This makes it more acceptable to readers in terms of perception, and the image of the protagonist has not turned into a wretched villain, which is very similar to the original One Piece. Then there are some clever little designs. Including the protagonist's painter killer character and the succubus argali friend, it will make people feel bright and smile at the same time. It's no longer about pirates massacring villages and blood feuds. It's no longer about forcing oneself to rely on the main plot and arguing that one can't change it. This book is very candid and candid. It explains everything at the beginning and then begins to tell its own story. Clean, refreshing, and principled, people have established it. Later, it depends on whether it is written according to the original work and how good the author's writing style is. A large part of the reason for the low score is lack of innovation. But as far as the beginning is concerned, it's full marks. More comments will be given after reading. Around chapter 65, it seems that some chapters have been swallowed. There is no explanation of Franky's plot, and Bailey's box suddenly appears and disappears inexplicably. I hope the author will check it carefully.

Overall review: It's pretty good, I personally think it's good. 1. What the protagonist loses is the plot memory of One Piece, not all the memories of his previous life. The progress of the two female protagonists is very slow 3. Along with the boat, the description of the group portraits is pretty good, and there are self-created characters (together with the boat)

Personally speaking, because I basically code after get off work at night, sometimes I am not clear-headed and will make some mistakes. I hope everyone can point them out. There are also some so-called poisonous points. I can only say that everyone has their own love for radish and cabbage. I hope everyone can read the book they like. [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I particularly like the protagonist, he makes me feel very cool and the character is very vivid.

Not bad, as long as you accept these two poisonous points, you can continue reading. 1. Deletion of memory at the beginning 2. In the early stage of the journal, the author must have found the rhythm by the time he writes in the Capital of Seven Waters, and the more he writes, the better.

The writing is very good. I thought the protagonist's ability was related to painting. I guessed wrong. I would like to give the author an opinion. A partner is a partner. CP feels that it is better not to write about the people on the ship.

Very good article, it would be nice if there was more love

Very good, the daily interactions between everyone are very interesting and warm

Is it completely broken now?