One Piece: The Shipwright of the Straw Hat Pirates

I support casual writing, but you can also read it. It is not written completely according to the original work. There are many people. There is no Usopp, Ace has not joined the white group, and Sabo has not lost his memory. They are both at sea. The protagonist is a bit like a parent at the beginning, but things start to change in Chapter 33. It is recommended to let Luffy and the others grow and describe more about the battles and growth of the pirate group. The protagonist and Mihawk are the trump cards. (After all, every member of the group has already been cheated)

The use of numbers is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart can't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous words are used, this article cannot be described. Why do you want me to wait? Why! You are so cruel. Do you know that your unfinished article will make me sleepless all night long? Thinking about how long I have to wait, I wake up in the middle of the night. My hands and feet are cold. I want to struggle but I have no strength. It feels like a big hole has been drilled into my heart. Do you care? You don't care, you only care about yourself, just like you don't care that there is no lion in the lion's head and no wife in the wife cake, you also don't care about me waiting until I'm going crazy! ! !

Friendly reminder, don't read with your brain in mind, because I didn't use your brain in writing when I wrote it. If you have any opinions, you are right. I surrender [note][note][note]

There are many fruits that are very good. Collect them so that the pirate world can have good fruits besides the protagonist...

Good looking. I just have a question. Now that the spells are all together, and with the help of the Black Shadow Corps, they can still clean up. You can ask them to help with things like moving things. There are also things like collecting supplies when you get to the island.

The writing is relatively thoughtful and realistic. The subject matter in the One Piece fanfic is very good, unlike other fanfics where there are few innovations. Most of them are less innovative with the original plot. After reading some of the writing, you can look forward to the subsequent plot.

Luffy's temperament is too funny when holding a knife. I think it would be more reliable to make it into a fist glove or a finger tiger, for example, giving the knife a weapon fruit to transform it into something like that.

Come on author, this book is very good and I hope it will be updated more [Like]

Yes, but how long does it take for the protagonist to awaken his domineering domineering energy?

Author, why is there no role for the little white dog? Why don't you give it a Devil Fruit? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]