The Straw Hat Pirates' Marine Vice-Captain

The character portrayal is okay. The protagonist has his own thoughts and is not superior to others just because of his status as a time traveler. Although his strength is strong, he is not outrageous. He does not steal Luffy's scene. The other fans of the ship take away Luffy's scene. It feels like you are the boss of the Straw Hat Pirates, and Luffy has no sense of existence. Also, the writing is a bit fast, and many details are not included. The author can also add a little bit of his own plot, and does not have to follow the original version exactly.

The plot is smooth, the characters are well-rounded, and it's good to watch! I just hope there is no female protagonist. Like the author, the protagonist is written in a big way. The protagonist should be pursuing true justice, so it is best not to have emotional drama. In fact, the most difficult thing to write is the emotional drama. If it is not written well, it will make people feel awkward and easy to be criticized! Personally, I think it should be cp-free and can be mixed with daily life on the ship (personal suggestion). Isn't friendship better than love? [Sending a heart] [Sending a heart] I hope there is no emotional line [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss] [Blowing a kiss]

I'm very curious about how to deal with deserters in the war. Just like the original work, a deserter goes to question the general who is at the forefront of the war.

The author saw that the cover of this book is Sakaski, and the protagonist's name is also 4 characters. Combined with the above mentioned son of O'Hara's participant, I would like to ask the author if the father of the protagonist is Sakaski...😂😂 The subject matter is good and the content is great.

It's so beautiful. The protagonist's character is one of the rare ones that I like very much. He has his own understanding of justice and is a gentle yet firm man. I love him so much! There is nothing worth complaining about in the plot except for Cornish. I feel that she will be difficult to deal with. After all, it is difficult for Bay alone to gain a foothold in the later stage or even in the new world, and it is difficult in terms of combat power and positioning. I really like the scene where Akainu and the protagonist meet in Alabasta. Sakaski's insistence on absolute justice contrasts with Blaster's justice. Not arresting him directly is Lao Sa's last insistence. He should want to see if Blaster can stick to his own justice. The arrangement of the Demon-Slaying Order later is also very reasonable. If it can continue to be maintained, it will undoubtedly be a good book. I am really looking forward to the battle at the top hahahaha

Yes, the protagonist joined the navy before, but was well protected. He didn't see the darkness above, but when he saw the ships holding the slaves. Despite the hardship, he still faltered, causing his strength to regress.

Is there a female protagonist? It's pretty good-looking, and the character creation is pretty good. Although it's a bit rough overall, there's no particularly OOC behavior, and the article is fairly fluent. The only drawback is that the number of words is too small. Please update it quickly. Thank you to the author.

It's pretty good. I wanted to write a novel about Akainu's son, and then the war on the top called him father, and then Akainu said I'm not your father, and the two started fighting. Then there is the woman with an extra empty island. I feel like the one with an empty island is like a burden.

It's not procrastination, it's not procrastination, it's not procrastination, it's really beautiful to say important things three times. It's the first time I've seen this kind of subject. I originally thought that there would be a shortage of books about "Pirates" 😢 There are too few good ones. How about the author updating them five times a day [laughing] good-looking[note]

It's good-looking, better than expected. Although it's about following the ship, it's very good-looking. The only drawback is that the male protagonist's reason for firmly choosing to follow the ship when he only knows Luffy as the protagonist is a bit weak [star], but the coherent plot and good writing make up for this [hold]. I wish the author success in his studies and a new chapter soon [sneaky laugh]