Dragon Raja: The Five-Spirit King! Beating Up Ji De Ma Yi from the Start

Post here as evidence The author himself has written two books, and this is the second one. There will definitely be unfamiliarity, plot rhythm, character design, or other things. If you feel bad about anything, you can give me feedback. I will check the comments under this post regularly. If you think it's not good, I'll post a two-star book review as usual. It's okay. I write novels. Negative reviews are normal. I don't think I'm the kind of person who can't even accept negative reviews. It doesn't matter if you think it doesn't read, and it doesn't matter if you leave a negative review, but I would like to ask all readers to leave their reasons why they don't like reading this book. This is the direction for my progress. Let me protect you from lightning too The pace of my book is a bit slow at the beginning. I would like to apologize to you for polluting your eyes. My second question is that I didn't explicitly say that all female protagonists are pure. Don't worry about this. As long as the novel I write has a female protagonist, it is absolutely pure. When I watch anime, I only watch pure love movies. Trust me. Finally, whether it is a bad review or a good review, it is the driving force for my progress. Thank you for clicking on my book. Let me talk about my shortcomings again. The pace is too slow. Readers who can't stand the slow pace don't need to read my book. I also want a fast pace, but I really don't know how to make it fast╮(╯＿╰)╭ Finally, I would like to thank all the readers who clicked on my book.

It's not bad. As for the comment that it focuses too much on describing the protagonist's mental mysophobia, I think it's okay. As for whether it's watery or not, just write more. The subject matter is very new. From my personal point of view, I think you can take a look

The rhythm is tight, the setting is clear, and the characters are clearly drawn, which is not enough to watch.

It's pretty good, but the author is too short. [Cover face] When will the update reach 100 chapters and I will give 5 stars? Author, you don't want to be without 5 stars, right? [Smile]

Love it. I hope there will be a single heroine Nono in the future.

It's pretty good-looking, the only regret is that I don't accept the Eri clothes😭😭😭

Think about yourself first, then others. So as not to make yourself uncomfortable at some point.

The author must write it down

The author is awesome Klaas🤭🤭🤭🤭A man gives you 3 seconds to fall in love with me quickly

Awesome, very good