Dragon Raja: Make Dragon Cards Great Again

The writing is very good, and it can be written (not that one, not Liu Beiwen). Su Xiaoqiang is the first female protagonist. It is okay that she did not arrange for her to go to Kassel like some fans. The emotional scenes are well written, but it seems that there is something missing in the series, maybe because the word count is still short. Well, it's only over 200,000. The author has added a lot of settings (the protagonist Ye Ting is Constantine, the ancient doctor Li Lin, Chu Zihang and his father asked the protagonist to be brought out from the Nibelungs). If he wants to write at least one million, five to five million words, he has to write five to seven million words. This game is also very interesting, Zulong (the dragon card game with the same name), but the actual combat and game are not very suitable, and it is difficult to write the turn-based system in combat. The female protagonists we have seen so far include Su Xiaoqiang (already conquered), Lin Xuanyue (Chu Yu, Chu Zihang's ancestor) (already conquered), Mai Jiutoku (met three times), Ling (dancing at Amber Hall to start conquests), Nono (claimed to be trophies, taking advantage of a lot of talk), Su Qian (sent by the principal to monitor the protagonist, refer to Fen Dog monitoring Lu Mingfei). In addition, in the battle scene, the protagonist's strength increases a bit quickly. At the beginning, there was only one auxiliary card, and then a lot of it was included at once, which made the fight a bit too easy and freehand. The fighting scene is still very good, but it is basically crushing, and the enemy cannot even force the protagonist's trump card. I have an idea, you can cut the cards into five positions, reduce the damage, and use cards with different attributes and effects to deal with different enemies. For example: If it's fire, use water. If you have thick shields, use a lineup that deals real damage. If you have a lot of control, use a lineup that doesn't require control. It's good to have multiple combinations like this. It is entirely possible to write a new direction for Dragons fandom (game of the same name: Dragons: Gate of Kassel). The best and most intense emotional scene is when Lu Mingfei gives up modifying Chen Wenwen's memory. The best part of the fighting scene is when the protagonist fights Caesar and Chu Zihang in a one-day fight. The following chapters will be written according to these two points, and there will be no big problems. Another point is that as the first female protagonist, Su Xiaoqiang has too few subdivisions. Isn't her family a big company? You can expand your business to connect with Genji Heavy Industries in the small days to help the protagonist open the way. Here is an example. Think carefully about how to do it. And that Chu Tianjiao, where did she go after coming out of the Nibelungen? Didn't you go to the academy to find Chu Zihang?

Did the author split the two personalities of Jörmungandr and Xia Mi, one for the protagonist and one for Chu Zihang? Ha ha!

Excellent fanfic, although the writing style is imitated by Jiangnan, it does not feel out of place. Apart from the weak emotional drama, the story line and narrative are very smooth.

Open ending, during the three months when Norton fled Chicago to China, the protagonist went to Chang'an to deal with another Nibelungen incident...

Okay, the writing and plot are all okay, it's just a pity that it suddenly disappeared.

It's a bit baffling, but overall it's still very interesting. The protagonist seems to be Constantine.

I hope that the character of Dragon King Jörmungandr will remain unchanged in the future and become more beautiful than Xia Mi. Xia Mi will become cooler and match Xiao Chu better.

Although the writing style is not my favorite, objectively speaking, the writing is okay.

Not bad, pretty good-looking

I don't play dragon cards, it feels a bit complicated, is it fun?