Ling Cage: A Sword Strike at the Thought of It

Oh, a new book is out. Damn it, write it quickly.

The biggest advantage is that it does not deliberately cater to younger age themes. Not only do the logic of many similar works fail to withstand scrutiny, but the plots also appear childish and can easily make people laugh, but this one shows a relatively mature quality. However, there are some problems in the advancement of the plot: the protagonist comes with the "Long Aotian" system setting at the beginning, his ability value is almost full, and he also has the incredible skill of stopping time. But what followed was that there was no crisis, and the apocalyptic atmosphere was handled quite casually - just drinking with a few people from the original team, and then having a relationship with Feixue (Feixue slept with him outside the golden hall, and Feixue's reaction was very ordinary, like a modern woman, here is the drama). There is no real crisis conflict, and there are no important events that advance the main plot, leaving only the hook of the Sleeping Lightbearer. Charles assigned the task, and the protagonist was revealed to Mark and his group in the blink of an eye. However, Mark readily accepted the mission without taking any precautions. The entire team lacked proper awareness of crisis and ability to doubt, as if everyone was acting in conjunction with the protagonist. The protagonist himself is either sleeping or on the way to sleep, and there is almost no serious action or main line of growth.

There are no major problems. The character design of the main character is pretty good, and the writing style is quite skillful and comfortable to read. It is definitely the best work among Spirit Cage fans.

Seriously well written. The ending was cut too quickly.

This is really pretty

Come on, the fanfic is well written, don't be a eunuch.

Okay, there are not many good books left.