Card Adventurer: A Gray Knights Squad from the Start

Recently, a brother commented that this book cannot have a high score, the characters are confusing, the plot is confusing, etc. In fact, I just improvised, and I never thought of making money from it. I just entertained myself and hoped to bring some fun to everyone. It is indeed possible that this is my first book, and there will be good and good shortcomings. I can only say sorry here. As I said before, if there are problems and I see everyone's corrections, I will try to correct them. I should try my best to write them in the future. I am very happy if someone can read them. I don't really expect high-scoring masterpieces, that's it...)

Let me start by saying that I am a cloud hammer, but to be honest, I feel that this book is very good and suits my taste. As a newcomer and a social animal, the author has written such a good novel, which is indeed very good.

It looks okay, but when are we going to add the stuff from My Stars? I really can't wait to see the aether act like an engine, draining the warp and ascending. [Your home is mined. Jpg]

Come on, the author, please don't stop updating. [Adoration][Adoration] The author wonders if the world of Tomorrow's Ark and Fairy Tales has traveled to that place or is there still a character there?

Um, I can't understand it a bit, but the setting is quite interesting and the author is also very nice.

I think it looks very good and suits my taste. The author must update it.

To be honest, there is a lot that needs to be improved. In terms of writing, I really need to improve.

There is no need to provide a lot of data or introduction at the beginning. It may affect the perception. But as a newbie with a new book, I can give it a 5🌟 emm looked at it for a while and it is indeed similar to what the comments below said, it is a bit confusing. This confusion is not just in one aspect, but in many aspects: combat power, plot, and sudden developments and changes, etc., Which cannot be connected in the process. It is a bit uncomfortable to watch, but the subject matter is okay. The card limit is very high and can be superimposed infinitely. If the heroine cannot be written, there will be no heroine or a woman. Otherwise, the emotional line will be very stiff, and everyone will feel uncomfortable when you write it.

By the way, there will be greenskins and necrons later, right?

Okay, the author can change the cover.