Hogwarts: Powering Up to Become King

It is indeed very interesting. This is my third HP novel that is one of the few that has been put on the bookshelf. It is the emotional line of the protagonist. There are three girls who like the protagonist. The author also made it very clear. In the end, it will be the single female protagonist Luna, right? I have read more than 400 pictures. In my opinion, it is obvious that the single female protagonist is Luna. However, after more than 400 pictures, the protagonist interacts too much with Hermione and the original character Amy, but the protagonist has no intention of accepting it. My personal opinion is that this is a gift book for girls. If you like to read gift girls, you can read it [smile]

You are the best of the male protagonists I have seen. Although other male protagonists are saving the world, superheroes, and even ancient dark lords, etc. But you are different. You are being yourself. You are doing whatever you want to do, you are living freely, and you are living out yourself. So you go out of your way. The above comments are from Ms. Hunter who explores treasures. I like this novel very much, but I never knew how to comment on it. Until I saw this short review, I couldn't help but copy it. The author created a very charming protagonist. On the surface he is kind, upright and brave, but in fact he is not bad either. [Laughing] It's just that he is more decisive in killing. In terms of plot, the protagonist is not the nanny of the three little ones, he himself breaks down and commits suicide after being played by Voldemort. But it doesn't completely break away from the plot. This is a better control in fan fiction. But there are also some shortcomings. The rhythm control is slightly poor. The early stage is relatively slow. In the middle and late stages, in order to control the rhythm, the author will make sudden turns, which is a bit abrupt. But if this novel can be written to more than 2 million words, these shortcomings cannot be considered shortcomings. [Laugh]

Overall, this novel is very good for Tomato. It is a rare good book. It is not as dark as other fanfics. There are not so many conspiracy theories. However, there are also some insignificant flaws, that is, the data is a bit passed over. Except for the overall panel at the beginning, it almost talks about how many attributes you get. Is there an overall attribute panel, such as physical strength, mental energy, etc., But only talks about how much mana you have individually.

It's very well written. It's a rare masterpiece. The only shortcoming is that the numerical values ​​are problematic. If you don't know how to write numerical values, don't write them. It's annoying to read. Okay, okay, it's okay to overwhelm the combat power, don't wait for the last hit and wait for the counterattack, right?

It's super cool, and the main character is a Gryffindor, not Harry. Very charming, clear goals, knowledge fanatic, never afraid of knowledge. Handsome, gentle, patient, strong and principled, he really fits the imagination of a decent male protagonist. He can really say that: Never underestimate the power of knowledge. "If you forget, keep remembering, Neville, and don't be afraid of knowledge." Really, it feels so exciting

The content is very well written. I didn't expect the plot of this book to be so good at first. I was attracted to it as I read it. The character's personality is well shaped, and you can see the growth process of the protagonist's mentality. I think this book deserves a higher rating [like][like][like]

The writing is so beautiful and the content is very rich. I highly recommend it. This is the best Harry Potter fanfic I've ever read. It's not a lie at all. It's really beautiful. Once I opened it, I couldn't stop. I don't know why the score stopped here. It's at least 9.8 Points.

I decided to withdraw at Chapter 338. A score of 8.1 Is a very fair evaluation. The author has written carefully because I can see that he has been absorbing readers' suggestions. The writing is very good, unlike the first time he wrote a novel. The story is also good. Ethan is charming and the original character is restored. But the problem is that there is no panel in the early stage, and Ethan's combat performance is not well written. After all, the three bear babies in the original book can kill Quirrell. Of course, the logic of children's books is very confusing, but Ethan works so hard and is still hanging, which makes him seem too weak. However, children's growth is limited after all, and the previous plot is so close to the protagonist group, so it is reasonable to grow slowly. Then I added the panel after listening to readers' opinions, and my attributes skyrocketed, and I suddenly became invincible. I was directly at odds with the protagonist group. The highlight of the protagonist group was gone, and only the bears were left. I was speechless. After all, it was necessary to bring Ethan's perspective into it, and then there was a plot where he was too invincible to be taken back to school? I added a murderous aura setting to Ethan and reduced his strength by half [face covering]. The repeated back and forth has made me lose interest in Ethan's growth. I really think the writing is pretty good, so it's a pity that I typed so many words. I'll see you next time.

A very good HP fanfic, but unfortunately the character descriptions are too sharp. They are either black or white, except for Dumbledore. However, this is quite in line with the requirements of Shuangwen. After all, too many twists and turns will only make people look annoying. As an extra mention, today epic is giving away the legacy of Hogwarts. Come and enroll in Hogwarts and become the first generation Dark Lord.

The protagonist is well portrayed, but some settings are a bit flawed. For example, Harry doesn't know what Eton is. Overall, you can watch it.