My Little Pony: Diary of a Kirin
小马宝莉：麒麟马的日记
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- Completed
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- Anime Fanfiction
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I promise to update twice a day, and I think this book will definitely reach a new level. Of course, I hope it will have a single female lead, since the world of My Little Pony is a world of pure love. The characters are well-developed, and the story is relatively coherent.
Flaw 1: Forced to return after being harmed, and still as a supposedly beloved tribe and friend. Flaw 2: Knowing the protagonist is naive, still tricking him into becoming a male model. Everyone who's self-righteous—of course, in a place like My Little Equestria where any mistake can be forgiven, they'll probably all be slowly assimilated!
It looks great! Avoid using Chinese-style rhetoric and sentence structures. Remember that you are writing Western-style fanfiction, otherwise it will feel out of place. Nothing else is particularly noteworthy. The writing is excellent, the emotional progression is very comfortable, and the descriptions of emotions and situations are well done and appropriate.
Overall, it's alright, but something feels a little off. I think it deserves around a 7.5 Rating. The main issue is that there are still very few chapters. I feel the descriptions of the protagonist's emotions are a bit strange. The author could refer to other Little Pony stories. Good luck! ✊
This novel is fantastic, especially the inclusion of the mute protagonist in the original plot. The romantic subplot with M6 is also handled very well. However, the author's frequent deliberate typos seem like a ploy to attract reader comments (or perhaps it's an expression of the author's homesickness 😏).
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, beautiful! More than 3,000 viewers in three days
It's really good, with no flaws. The protagonist isn't a saint; he has his own unique personality, unlike protagonists in other novels.
What made it a bit difficult to read was the extended screen time given to Princess Celestia and Silent Stream, and the somewhat confusing romance. However, it's rare to find a long My Little Pony story still being updated, so I'm giving it four stars as encouragement. Keep up the good work, author! There's something there; I've randomly shipped a lot of different pairings... See chapter 246 for details.
To summarize for everyone, without this thing, Little Stream got MVP. Little Maria, if not completely wiped out, would at least lose half of her horses. 🤦 It seems like the speed started from around chapter 100. 🙂 I feel this cover is more suitable for the book "M6 Sisters" 🙂 Of course, on the audiobook page.
Speaking of which, every time I see the term "big butt," I always think of a famous scene. SpongeBob: Squidward, stop! You can't eat any more Krabby Patties! Squidward: Why, chew chew chew SpongeBob: They'll gather on your butt and then explode. Change to My Little Pony version Luna: Sister, stop! You can't eat any more royal cakes! Princess Celestial: Why, chew chew chew Luna: They gather on your butt and then get bigger.