My Little Pony: Diary of a Kirin

Guaranteed to be updated twice a day, I think this book can definitely reach a new level. Of course, I hope it will be a single female protagonist. After all, the pony world is a world of innocence. The characters are well drawn and the story is relatively coherent.

Poison Point 1: After being hurt and forced to come back, you are still the so-called dear tribe and friend. Poison Point 2: Knowing that the protagonist does not understand, he tricked him into becoming a male model. Of course, everyone who thinks they are self-righteous will be slowly assimilated in a place like Little Malia, where you can be forgiven no matter what mistakes you make! (Does anyone still remember the teacher who never appeared in school again? Does anyone remember the protagonist who was neglected and bullied in childhood?) (´`) In this case, staying away is the best compensation! Of course there are good ones, the material selection is good and the writing is not bad. I hope it can be optimized.

Very nice! Don't write some rhetoric and sentence patterns in a Chinese style. Remember that you are writing a European and American style fan, otherwise it will be very dramatic. The rest is nothing special. The writing is very good, the emotions progress very comfortably, and the emotional descriptions or descriptions of some situations are very good and appropriate. There are no inexplicable plots that make people dig their toes on the ground, and there are no inexplicable burnings. Many "high-risk plots" are well written and will not make people embarrassed. [Like][Like][KISS][KISS][Love][Love] "High-risk plot": some emotional/emotional changes, fight scenes, or encountering danger/opportunity/certain things/turning points. Some authors obviously have nothing special to say when they write these, so they don't know what they are burning about! ! ! It seems very embarrassing [laughing] The rhetoric is too gorgeous or too boring, and it is polarizing. This one is very moderate, very suitable, very good. [Like][Like][Like]

The overall evaluation is okay. It feels a little awkward. I think it should be rated around 7.5. The main reason is that there are still very few chapters. I feel that it is strange to describe the emotions of the protagonist. The author can refer to other Xiaoma articles. Come on✊

This novel is great, especially the inclusion of a mute main character in the original plot. The emotional scene with m6 was also well grasped, but the author kept making typos intentionally to attract readers' comments (possibly to express the author's homesickness [smile])

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It's really good-looking, not toxic at all, and the protagonist is not a good guy. He has his own unique character, unlike other protagonists in novels.

It was a bit uncomfortable to watch because I forgive Princess of the Universe and Silent Creek for taking too long to work hard, and then I was a little lost in the emotional drama. However, it is rare that there is a My Little Pony novel that is still being updated. Four stars encourage me, please go to the author. Those who had something, ate a lot of CP randomly... See Chapter 246 for details.

Let me summarize Silence for everyone. There is no such thing as Xiaoxi winning the MVP. Not to mention the total destruction of little Maria, she has to lose half of the horse's mouth [face covering] It seems that she started racing from about Chapter 100 sitting down [smile] I think your cover is more suitable for the M6 sister's book [smile] Of course it's the page where I'm listening to the book

Speaking of which, every time I see the word big app, I always think of a famous scene. SpongeBob: Squidward, stop it, you can't have any more delicious Krabby Patties Squidward: Why, Chew Chew Chew SpongeBob SquarePants: They'll swarm on your butt and explode Change to pony version Luna: Sister, stop it, you can't eat the royal cake anymore Universe Princess: Why, Chew Chew Chew Luna: They gather in your butt and get bigger