A Cross-World Trader: From the Start, I Snatched a Million in Gold

Very good [Like] I got hooked in a second, especially the first few chapters, which vividly describe the characters, environment, emotions, etc., Which had a great impact on me. It is the best beginning of a web article I have ever read. The writing later became more bland. In the beginning, I had to pay off debts. I gave my wife 1.6 Million, rented a base, rented an office building, and bought a car. The amount did not match up. I also charge 20,000 yuan for a massage, smoke imported cigars in the back, and have a luxurious office. Is it true that the family doesn't care about it? Interweaving the protagonist's original family life and the feelings of Zhou Dai from another world, the protagonist's heart is entangled with each other, with overlapping and contradictory aspects, the persistence of the original spouse, and the life and death of the new love. There are obviously docks and warehouses, and the supplies are placed in the valley. Wouldn't the division commander think about how to transport them? There is another reason to take the waterway to the dock. Although it is said that you don't need to use your brain to read online articles, it just feels good. I still like the author's first few chapters, and I hope to continue to maintain his original writing skills and achieve a masterpiece!

Very well written. The scenes and inner descriptions are too descriptive. Too much is not enough. Female author?

Although it is a time-travel novel, the modern experiences and emotions of the plot characters are written very realistically, so real that it makes people feel depressing - if there were no cheats, the male protagonist would be the middle-aged unemployed you and me: it is difficult to live, but reluctant to die. To borrow the lyrics of a song: You and I are both mortal, born in this world, running around and suffering all day long, never having a moment to relax. .

Looking at the novel this way, it is overly polished (love is effortless), and it makes you nervous to read, but you feel a bit excited afterward. Please take some responsibility from the author and make it easier for readers to read~ All in all, the work is a good one, it would have been nice to have more plain language...

If viewed as an ethical family drama, the protagonist is indeed not a good father. He has children in both the first and second worlds, but he never carefully teaches his children and does not accompany them to grow up. He is very derelict in his duties and even unqualified! But in magnified terms, as the savior of the earth, his achievements are infinitely magnified. The hero-like figure is very great and incomparable. Traveling through three earths with different processes, you can understand that the same big tree has three branches, with different development processes, and the story of risking one's life to save the earth unfolds. However, there are too many adjectives in the beginning, and the story feels like a slow and lengthy romance novel, but if you read it patiently, it does have depth, and it feels like a novel! As long as you follow the text, there will be a different world waiting for you. . . !

I give myself a five-point score, [shy]. Swear lightly, I will slowly change it.

The writing is very realistic and the writing style is good. The content is innovative and innovative.

This book is good. Just too slow. I looked at the front and there was no bottom. Better hurry. Write it out.

The plot is new and different, very worth watching...

The writing is good. Now that your identity has been endorsed by the country, your first wife and daughter no longer care?