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Explore more →I Beg the Hokage to Read the Novel and Not Lick Konoha! ! !
Villain writing is the best
Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
Anime Fanfics Rated 9 or Above
Naruto's Fourth Battle, I'm Resurrected
I Just Picked up a 50000G Mobile Phone. I'll Give It a Try with Some Books.
Looking for Hardcore Popular Books That Are Being Read by More Than 400,000 People!
The aroma of wine is not afraid of deep alleys! A good book is not afraid that no one will read it! I finally found a rule again: the more people are reading it, the more interesting the novel will be! Bookworms, please take out your bags!
Looking for the Most Popular Fan Fiction at the Moment
Brothers, I am currently short of books, so I would like to ask you to take out the books in your library, Kangkang.
The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
Naruto: Eternal Kaleidoscope, All Wooden Shields, Nine Magatama Samsara Eye, System
Naruto, the Heroine Is Best Tsunade, the Content Is Better
Looking for Various Anime Fan Fiction, Preferably with More Words
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I Want the Protagonist to Be a Purely Numerical Monster, Relying on the Numerical Crushing Mechanism
I want to watch something similar to "One drop of blood forever, I will still be invincible!" Book.
Is There No More Masterpieces in Naruto's Current Life?
Naruto Live Broadcast of All Ninja World Has No Protagonist
System, no protagonist
It's True That Naruto Is Getting Worse with Each Passing Year, so We Can Only Use the Previous Books to Compare.
I want to read a book similar to "Naruto: Beginning with the Twin Kamui".
The Hokage Begged His Mother to Have the Eternal Mangekyō Sharingan in Her Womb.
Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
Uchiha Madara Himself, Don't Take Over, Don't Be a Template, and Don't Act.
It's best to have no heroine and no CP (it feels like there are no more books to choose from T^T)































































































It simply restores the original Naruto. You can see all kinds of wonderful ninjutsu and intricate chess games in it. Don't miss it if you pass by. Sister Juan's book is so good to read. This is simply a unique Naruto fanfic. It makes up for the regret of Boruto. I can actually read this novel in my lifetime without any regrets. The new ninjutsu settings for Naruto are amazing. People can't help but wonder, can this really be written by a human?
The beginning of the chapter is okay, except that some readers of The Crimson King thought they had discovered a poisonous point, but in fact it was deliberately foreshadowed by the author, and the two people were criticized by name, Naruto and Sasuke.
I asked why it was so familiar, and it turned out to be Sister Juan's book (if you don't know Sister Juan, you can search for Naruto: The Two Kamui Obito at the Beginning, one of the few books with a 9.2 Rating in Naruto fan fiction)
Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can read it without being amazed? ! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life? ! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts? ! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it!
This novel is so well written, it perfectly combines a sense of warmth and privacy. It has a tender feeling. Although it is said to be Naruto, it gives me a feeling of watching daily anime and a feeling of daily writing. It may be that my vocabulary is too small and I can't even find words to describe it! Perfectly made up for my regrets about Naruto. It's a pity that Itachi-gami doesn't have anyone else, it's really nothing
Alas, let's give it five stars first. The author's writing is indeed very interesting, and I enjoyed reading it in the early and middle stages. But in the later stage, Nazuo and Sakura Hina... Were unable to explain in words. Reading this book, it's okay to take the perspective of the protagonist, but it's not suitable for those who like Naru Sa Sakura Hina, like me. I stayed up late to see the part about the god style... Touki, who represents Hinata's dark personality, and for revenge, Naruto is pure green. I was almost heartbroken when I saw it, not to mention other things. I originally thought that in the middle of the game, Narusa would be able to change his past and fight against powerful enemies with the protagonists, Madara and Obito. But the image Naruto has always created is that he is as stupid as a donkey, making mistakes again and again. Every time when he wanted the truth, there would always be a cross step to make Naruto continue to make mistakes. All in all, it makes the original Naruso fans uncomfortable to watch. All I can say is that the characterization in this article is like this. This is the first time I read a fanfic in such detail. I can't say anything about the logic of the writing. It's really excellent. Anyway, that's the same sentence. I don't recommend it for Naruso fans. It's only suitable for taking the perspective of the male protagonist of Shuangwen. In the early and middle stages, we can see the regrets of Madara and Obito. Sigh... It made me so heartbroken to read the latest chapter all night long. Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke and Sakura, two beauties, neither of them died well. I won't say more about Hinata, Midori and Naruto... Sigh.
I must support Sister Juan's new book! I hope it has a reasonable ending this time Hey, as a loyal reader of the volume, I think I really have to give up this time. I vaguely remember my surprise when I saw the twin gods. Although the writing is a bit immature, it has a good ending. The Return of Naruto is my favorite book. It accompanied me throughout my boring high school career. It can be seen that Sister Juan's writing skills have improved a lot in this book. The actions, actions and dialogues of the characters are very consistent with the original work. It reaches its peak in the Indra chapter. Even if it is often interrupted in the later period and the ending is hasty, this book is still very good. The Return of Sasuke is considered to be the pinnacle of Sister Juan. It not only has the advantages of The Return of Naruto, but also the description of big scenes, the control of rhythm, etc. Are all at their peak. Unfortunately, it still fell apart in the later stages. Even though every book has flaws, it is still possible to see Maki's love and understanding of Naruto and Tomato's authority as the number one Naruto fanfic. But this book Chen was quite disappointing to me. I started reading it when it only had about 20 pages. I don't know why this book, which I used to have such good pacing, was so slow to write! So much nonsense! The character's personality is also broken! The writing style is completely different from the previous books, not even as good as the cubs and Shisui that I think are trainees. Maybe Sister Juan has not changed, but I have changed as a reader. The books I read anymore cannot give me the same feeling as before. Hey, goodbye Juan
Sister Juan's writing is as good as ever, and each book has a different setting. The story is novel, humorous, and an authoritative work of Naruto fan fiction. Unfortunately, except for the twin Kamui, the rest of the endings are not very good.
In this battle, Susanoo combined with the pupil technique to synchronize the user's ninjutsu. It's simply amazing. The creativity of Sister Maki is six, what a genius. Those who give low scores in the comment area generally give negative reviews to all other Naruto stories. They are obviously trying to suppress the scores of other Naruto story creators. I also write Naruto stories myself. Sister Juan's writing style is really the strongest I have ever seen on Tomato. Her innovative ninjutsu and pupil techniques are also the best. Even the description of the emotional lines between the characters is top-notch.
As a long-time fan of Sister Juan's books and a man who has read Double Divine Power 7, I would like to call this book the strongest and most styled book after Double Divine Power. The plot is interlocking and very exciting. Alas, Sister Juan, maybe life after marriage is not easy, she was a bit too devoted in writing, and ended up going high and low.
It's very interesting and the logic is very clear, but I have a few questions. 1. When will Naruto and Sasuke be strengthened? 2. Will the Three Ninjas of Heaven, Earth and Humanity appear? 3. Will the protagonist unify the ninja world? 4. Will the Uchiha clan resurrect people? 5. How does the combat power compare between Boruto and Shippuden? (Personally, I think Nazuo and Naru fell from the Six Paths to the peak of Chaokage. The combat power of One Style is about equal to that of Ming of Six Paths, and Madara of Ten Rao starts from Six Paths. If I am wrong in the future, I will not say it.) Some people on the Internet are too outrageous, such as the following 6. Will the five major congresses use some special means to discover the Dark Hidden Village base camp and then attack? Finally, I particularly like Sister Juan's books (for some reason I only read Naruto and the Two Kamui, and I don't remember much about the plot)
Bond: (Uchiha's last glory) Composition: Uchiha Madara, Uchiha Obito (2/2) Participating in a ninja battle increases chakra by 50% When in the same camp, Taijutsu increases by 25%, Susanoo becomes the complete Susanoo, Ninjutsu effects increase by 25%, enemy morale decreases by 50%, and if the enemy has Uchiha blood, there is a 75% chance of defecting. If the "Declaration of Ninja War" is triggered in different camps, both sides will increase their physical skills by 50%, and the probability of triggering the heart-wrenching attack is 80%. When encountering Senju Tobirama, Uchiha Madara will trigger the BUFF "Blood Sea" to lock the enemy and never give up. If the enemy has Senju Hashirama, trigger the BUFF "Battlefield Duo", and Uchiha Madara will challenge Senju Hashirama to a duel. If the enemy has Nohara Rin, Uchiha Obito will trigger the BUFF "Little Sun", and Uchiha Obito has a 95% chance of surrender.
Emmm, it's a very interesting new book by Sister Maki. However, since I haven't read many of her other books before, except for Twin Kamui, I don't know much about the ability of her private kaleidoscope. The heroine is Uchiha Hikari. You may feel a little uncomfortable because of Shikamaru at the beginning, but it may get better later. I am looking forward to the performance after discovering Shikamaru's abnormality and the reasons for Shikamaru's abnormality. There are many private settings.
The fighting is well written, and the use of abilities is very novel. The power of the god style is also much higher than that of the twin Kamui and Minggui. He is a qualified villain. However, this book tortures Naruto even more cruelly than Narugui tortured Sasuke. His son and daughter disown him, and his wife falls in love with someone else. Naruto fans should be careful before entering.
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The writing, plot and even settings surpass those of Double Kamui. In Naruto's words, it is absolutely super 5⭐! And looking at the plot and rhythm of this awesome story, it must be written to a higher plane in order to have a reasonable ending, "Sister Juan"!
A rare good book, the kind with brains In front is God, behind is 💩
It's pretty good, looks good everywhere, but why is Naruto written like a character [face covering]
So far, I have read the latest chapter. I can only say that those who like Naruto should run away. Those who simply like Shippuden will see Kawaki preparing to run. This book has the same malice towards Naruto as Soul Travel has towards the players. This book has Naruto's dick exploded (physically), and his spirit is as distorted as seeing an ancient god. I personally feel that I am a bit perverted, but the Naruto in this book still makes me physically uncomfortable sometimes. (Others are okay) PS: I will write some things from the book under this book review, please be careful of spoilers.
It can be said that it is very real and exciting. There are some parts that you may not understand the first time you read it, but after you read it again or think about it carefully, you will find that it is quite reasonable. After reading [dozens of chapters], I feel that the only flaw is that the protagonist has been planning to join hands with Ming Zuo to fight against future enemies, but before changing the plan, he only tried to meet Ming Zuo once but failed in the end. There has been no contact, no understanding between the two parties, and no evidence, how can we build trust? The protagonist directly chose to give up his long-standing plan to join hands with Ming Zuo after a failed attempt. This is unreasonable, but it does not affect the excitement of this novel. [But the author has already revealed part of the explanation for this issue]. My personal feeling at the moment is that I hope that the author's answer in the subsequent plot will not disappoint me [Thinking]
Hello author, this is my feeling after reading this book. The character descriptions and characterizations are very vivid, and the reading is very smooth. The foundation is irrefutable. The only shortcoming is the plot. There is no suspense. I can see the ending from the beginning, which affects the follow-up reading. Although there is a conspirator like God, I can guess it from reading to 4/1. The plot development is also relatively old-fashioned, and it feels a bit pretentious. For me, it may be a bit old-fashioned. Overall, it is a relatively good fanfic.
Cool! A rare Naruto fanfic from the Boruto era. And the writing is very delicate. It sounds very smooth.
Well, I read it from beginning to end and found that the plot of his story was very well arranged. Then I was given Fire Ninja to make up for it. His creation of story connection and skills is very good. Sister Juan's book is quite good, and then drive when it's time to drive. Stable driving skills.
I have read more than ninety chapters so far, and I would like to ask a few questions. 1. The plot is not bad, but the various parentheses and the author's too many expressions in the text affect the viewing experience. 2. Although there are a lot of Internet slang and some empty Japanese, I think there are too many and it is unnecessary. The character of the original characters becomes unsightly under these terms. 3. The use of formats and symbols can be more rigorous, so that it will look more comfortable. In fact, the author's setting and plot are pretty good, but other aspects affect the fun of reading the book, just like watching anime. Who knows until the end that Madara's opening of the Eye of the Moon project is actually a scam by Black Zetsu? So there is no need to constantly emphasize the setting of Shikamaru being possessed by a certain magic in the early plot, because the work is for readers to see. Just like Kishimoto was unknown in the past because he only created from his own perspective. I hope the author can optimize the subsequent content or make greater progress in the new book! The above are all personal opinions. There are a thousand Hamlets in a thousand people's hearts. Just stick to yourself and don't care.
Although there is no unified code But it is indeed a cool novel. Each of the protagonists' eye skills is more powerful than the last one.
Very good-looking, very organized, very powerful, very feminine, very planned, very combustible, very patient, very kind, very decisive, very powerful Haha I'm going crazy hahaha It's really beautiful. I recommend everyone to come and give it a try.
After reading more than forty chapters, I felt that it would be better to spend more than ten chapters describing the protagonist's childhood. Everyone knows that the protagonist feels sorry for his younger brother, but they can't empathize with it because there is no description of his younger brother at all in the early stages.
It has to be Sister Juan. I read so many Naruto fics, and it's rare that I see the reminder button. When I looked back, I realized it was written by Sister Juan [Love]
Sister Juan is another masterpiece. I didn't notice it when I first read it. The later book gave me the same passion as reading Double Divine Power when I was in junior high school. I found out that it was written by Sister Juan again. There are a lot of foreshadowings, the logic is clear and the characters are delicately drawn. I can sleep while playing games, but I read this novel straight up all night. I haven't had this kind of passion for a long time. Come on Sister Juan.
This book is really good, so good that it's worth using my few brain cells to describe it. This book exceeds your expectations. The quality is not very high and the recording is very good. I hope everyone can listen to such a good book. ! The story of this book is not procrastinating and the conception is rigorous, making it a pleasure to read. Ratings are booming