Woman Transmigrates as a Man: The Copycat Writer Is Really Straight!

The interaction between the protagonist and other people is very sweet and enjoyable, the character design of the protagonist is also very good, the writing is smooth, and the structure is okay. Overall, it is very good. But there are a few points: 1. Although it is a copy of official documents, the songs need not be so frequent. Rather than the same lyrics and understanding of the songs, I want to see the plot more and see what the protagonist does and who he interacts with. It can be seen that adjustments have been made compared to the initial reading comprehension, but the proportion of lyrics still seems to be too much. You can try to only keep the beginning, climax, and end, or choose two of the three lyrics. 2. The protagonist is portrayed as a little too girly, especially in the latest chapters. The protagonist may not adapt to it, but it always feels bad to be like this on stage or in front of fans. The protagonist can be pretty but not delicate. 3. When a woman dresses as a man, I think the protagonist is already a man, so there should be a transition from female to male. Human brain capacity is limited. When the memory of being a male begins to take over, the protagonist should change, instead of repeatedly emphasizing that he is a female and trapped in a male shell.

In fact, overall it is really good, the characters are very nice, and there are very few women wearing men + unisex heartthrobs, which is very suitable for me. However, it is true that the pace is a bit too fast, the variety show is set up in a hurry, and the description is not in-depth, which makes me feel that it is a bit lacking in excitement. And a large part of it is focused on copying the lyrics and understanding the lyrics. To be honest, I am not very interested in reading comprehension. I want to see the stage effect of the protagonist, how to sing the song well, the innovation of stage design, etc. I can only say that I am a bit disappointed. But one thing to say, I read the author's next book first before reading this one, and I found that the progress is indeed quite big, keep up the good work👍🏻

Ahhhhhh, the gentle senior and the stupid beauty are truly immortals [admiration]! ! So embarrassing [shy]! ! ! ! Please update it soon [sending my heart], it's not enough [please update]! ! ! !

She is a very good-looking heartthrob. Yun Meiren has a good personality, but she is not enlightened. A group of people around her are looking at her eagerly. Yun Meiren thinks she is a brother. Because it is a novel about the entertainment industry, the atmosphere in the article is very good, there is no too strong conflict, the comments are very loving, and it looks very calm and comfortable. I don't know if the ending will be open, or if it will be written separately, please give it a big boost [Love]

My wife's writing is very good, and every couple is very friendly, but it's a bit awkward to be called "she"

Very nice! ! ! Dear author, I came here from your last book. I have already read it. I was about to read another one of yours, but I found out that I had read your other book before and added it to my bookshelf. It is a fairy tale. It is so good! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The baby is very cute. Here's a tip from Brother Ti: I feel that all the male protagonists are very good, but the character descriptions are still a bit lacking and they don't feel very distinct. But the wife is already great when she is written like this! Also, it would be better to describe the relationship in more details and less about love at first sight.

The author listened very well. At first, he wrote very humanistic song reviews. Readers responded and he stayed up all night to revise them. It's really great👍🏻. Now he writes lyrics and reviews interspersed with them, which is very comfortable to watch! The whole article is very heart-warming. I feel better every day when I read it. I have to read the sweet article before going to bed!

The story is relatively novel, I give four stars for encouragement. The ending is a bit hasty. There are many parts of the story that could be written in detail, but it is not explained clearly. The relationship between the protagonists is a bit vague and the organization is not particularly strong. There are several lines written and the theme is also very good. It is good enough to be published separately. It is a novel, but it is not explained clearly, but the author also said that he made a plate of dumplings for a plate of vinegar, so this book is still good and highly recommended. The author still needs to strengthen his writing skills in writing the story lines between the protagonists. Overall, this book is good.

It's very beautiful, but it's too little. [Cry] The children don't have enough to eat [Cry] [Cry] [Cry]. This book is really a heartthrob. She is a cool and gentle beauty. Everyone inside is nice, because the bad guys can't get close to Rainbow Dash