Girl to Guy: I'm a Master of Allure!

Well, overall the characterization is quite good, and the protagonist's personality is also very good. Well, the content design is also quite good, but the only thing I think is lacking is that the love line is completely unnecessary. Then after meeting Pei once, did you fall in love with him? And it's true, and Pei already had a girlfriend at that time, and it was also posted in the circle of friends. The two even had rings. Pei's friends also called his girlfriend sister-in-law, which is equivalent to saying. Well, the relationship is very stable, and it is almost to the point of talking about marriage, and then at this time, the protagonist likes him again, and then secretly spies on Pei. I think this is actually not good, and there is a plot in which the protagonist and their friends meet Pei on the way home while driving. Pei was drunk at the time, and then the protagonist wanted to send Pei home, and then forgot the address mentioned by Pei's assistant, and then wanted to take Pei back to his home privately. Have you ever thought that he actually has a girlfriend, and the relationship will be stable? The protagonist gives people the feeling that, well, he clearly knew that Pei already had a girlfriend at the time, and the relationship between the two was stable, and they were about to talk about marriage. Then he was still secretly peeping at Pei, feeling like he wanted to take advantage of him.

The writing of the content is really super attractive, very novel and beautiful! ! ! ! ! But but! ! The protagonist is written a bit like San, that is, he is addicted to his own emotions and likes Pei a little bit, but he has already written that Pei has a girlfriend and is still together, and it does not appear that Pei and his girlfriend have a good relationship. (If their relationship is not good, it would be okay, but the emotional description is very good. Pei's good friends call the girl sister-in-law, and there are sweet photos of the two of them in the circle of friends.) The protagonist was very uncomfortable when he knew that Pei had a girlfriend, but he was still shy when he met Pei after that, and then he subconsciously deleted the option of Pei having a girlfriend, and was addicted to his own shy mood. Maybe it's to create a tension, but on the contrary, it's a bit realistic. How will Pei and the protagonist get together after three (╥_╥)? But the other characters of the protagonist are well described! ! ! ! ! ! ! Let's see how it develops in the future (╥_╥)

An unexpected treasure! ! ! I really like the tone of this book. There is no evil male supporting actor or anything like that, and even the male protagonist and the protagonist of the original book get along very well! ! Everyone is gentle and has super upright values, and the male protagonist is also incredibly cute. I hope the author and teacher can shape the uncle's girlfriend who hasn't appeared yet into a very good person. Don't deliberately lower your girlfriend's image just because you want to arrange for the male protagonist to be with your uncle. After all, the person your uncle once liked must also have a very charming personality...

It's very interesting, the characters are created very well, and the writing is also very good. In fact, if you like someone, you can't help but want to get close to them, and you can't control it at all, let alone the love brain 😢 I know he has a girlfriend, and I just feel like I want to get close but can't. It's really uncomfortable 😢

It's an excellent book. Although it's not many, you can tell that the author's writing style is very good! ! ! I hope the author can update more [laughing][laughing][loving][loving][loving][loving][loving][adoring][adoring][adoring][adoring][adoring][adoring][adoring]

I quite like this subject matter, but I don't like the fact that I know someone else has a girlfriend and insists on getting him. It's just like knowing three things and doing three things.

I think the emotional line can be removed. I can be the protagonist of my own life. It doesn't have to be someone who already has a girlfriend. Isn't it good to let the protagonist shine? That's it

I quite like it, but the male protagonist is a bit too aggressive. He should be more natural. But I still like it

Looking forward to the next plot

It's good, but I don't want it to be 1v1.