World War I: Starting by Saving the Austro-Hungarian Empire

I think this book is pretty well written, with basically no problems, and the plot is connected. Although I don't understand why many people are dissatisfied with the part about returning home from the Qing Dynasty, but in short, from the current chapter I'm reading now, this book is definitely well written. There may be some minor flaws in some aspects, but you can ignore them. In any case, the author's plot is really good and well written. I am not satisfied with most people's views on the recent chapters. I am also dissatisfied with the protagonist's recent addition of a sister and a fucking MI6 agent. In terms of literature, in this book where everyone wants to write about and watch war, a sudden parachuting of a character out of nowhere will indeed cause dissatisfaction among most people. Of course, the author revised the plot in a timely manner. His attitude has been corrected, and he is willing to listen to readers' opinions, which is already rare.

A small suggestion to the author: when writing, you can use more punctuation marks to break up sentences. Firstly, this can reduce the number of words and enrich details (after all, the original sentence is divided into three sentences, and each sentence can add something extra). Secondly, many times a sentence is too long and complex and the clauses give people the feeling of reading in English. The author may not feel it when he writes it, just like I am writing a review now, but it will be more difficult for readers to read than short sentences. After all, novels are mainly for entertainment. I won't comment on the content of the novel because I have only read twenty chapters.

The writing is very good (except for the part about returning home from the Qing Dynasty), which has a bit of a pre-censorship Hans style.

It's a very good historical novel. Although the early Qing Dynasty plot wastes a little time, the overall sense is still good. [Praise]

It's very well written. I like the description of naval battles very much. It's a very good article about the First World War. The author should not stop updating it.

Very good-looking, um, yes, British to Lion

It's okay, just a little bit poisonous but not serious.

A good novel about Austria-Hungary

I have to say, this book made me listen from beginning to end, and I support

It's very good. I've been reading it for a month. It's very good. I just don't know who the heroine is. I think she could be the daughter of Rudolf or Ferdinand [smile] [smile]