I Bought a Down-and-Out Noble Heiress for One Gold Coin

It looks good. If you like cool writing, you must come! Guaranteed to make you come home defeated! [Sinister smile]

It looks so good, so interesting [punch out] I regret it [face covering]

A very perfect novel, sometimes we are naked together [admiration]

I couldn't help it when I read Chapter 44. The drama's description of emotions is very strong. The heroine in it, especially Helen Yin, has a really three-dimensional character. This is really a book worth pursuing

It's quite good. If you can eat the mixed version of female videos, you can try it. This is called the joy of suffering. Of course, the development of the plot of this book is far from being the end of the world. Please be patient and eat more. There is sweetness behind it (a blank check promised to the author, ask him to cash it) [laughing evilly] I have no patience, I just want to taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, taste the sweetness, and go to bed after tasting it💤

I have read this book three times over and over again. Whether it is the new version or the old version, I admire the author's setting of the heroine's character very much. He has painted each character in the book into a vivid and clear character, especially Ivisa, who originally closed her heart due to the collapse of her family and was full of spikes, to being cared for by the protagonist and slowly unloading her heart, letting the iceberg slowly melt and gradually revealing her inner fiery side. It is addictive and I look forward to the author's updates every day. Come on, author.

The writing style is okay, but there are some poisonous points. What about the character of the protagonist? He is arrogant at one time and a turtle at other times. I think the title of the book could be called "After buying a poor daughter, I was trained to be a turtle". The system is on the roadside, and the daily writing is okay.

Those who like cool writing may not be able to read it, but fortunately I can eat everything. This book is really good in terms of character creation, at least it is definitely three-dimensional in Tomato. Some of the emotional descriptions are very detailed and good, and I can give it five stars. Although when I first read it, I felt that the male protagonist was too weak, but from a non-shuang writing perspective, it was extraordinary that the book could be written through emotional lines in the early stage. Moreover, the author gave each heroine a very three-dimensional shape in the harem novel. It cannot be said to be perfect, but the emotional details are already very impressive. I feel like it may be difficult to write later, so stay tuned.

This book is one of the few that really made me get into it. Although the villainous protagonist is as difficult to get into as the protagonist of Wei Guangzheng, I really entered the emotional flow of the protagonist, maybe only for a moment, but this is already a very rare and precious experience.

It looks good, the character creation, and the daily plot are very good. The only drawback is that the plot line is too slow, and it seems to be the same regardless of the main plot. To be honest, this book is very good even if the main plot is separated and only focuses on daily life. There is no big problem in emotional processing, and it does not drag out some stomachache plots. And another question, author, you can't be a eunuch. How can I live if you are a eunuch? Author, I really like this novel after finishing it. I like Yi and Hai the most, they have very three-dimensional character images, especially Yi's direct outpouring of emotions at times. The strong emotional stimulation almost made me go straight to GC. The image of Hai Ping's little girlfriend is also hard to hide her smile. The modified character setting is obviously better than before the modification, and some adjustments have been made to the protagonist's personality, which is more pleasing to the eye than before the modification. Overall, it is a good change [like] The settings of several supporting characters are also very good. The eldest prince is strong but is constantly hit by the relationship between the protagonist and Yi. The prince's loyalty and sensibleness are even more touching, but the protagonist is a bad person [laughing and crying] The images of the other female characters are also very good, which prevents me from forgetting what she has done when I see this person again after a few chapters. Generally speaking, the author's writing is very good, but what does it mean to update two or three chapters a month? Now you update three times a month, I don't force you to be attentive, but now it is three updates a month, so what will you do in the future, update two chapters a month? One update? As a reader, I'm probably going to beat you, really. But, to be honest, I really feel that this system is not bad with or without it. The group with a low sense of existence has no practical significance except to explain the protagonist's strength. And currently the main character's only goal is to help Yi get revenge, and nothing else? There is also very little development about the worldview, gods? A vast amount of lost ancient knowledge? The origin of Haima? The whereabouts of Yi's mother and sister? Wait, this is really a bit head-scratching. I can feel that the world view should be quite big, but in this world view, the main character's purpose is only to avenge his wife, which makes this world view not of much value. And even the purpose of helping his wife get revenge has big problems. First of all, the reason for the genocide is not clearly stated (rebellion? It feels like there must be a hidden secret), and the protagonist does not ask (or the heroine doesn't know?). Even the step of revenge cannot be determined (whether it is to kill the emperor or kill the emperor and his family). The heroine still cannot determine her true intention. Secondly, the goal is set, but how to do the process? Help the heroine or gain the power of the God of Tribulation yourself? Too childish. But the author has written 800,000 words, so it would definitely not be appropriate to revise it. I don't know how the author's outline will deal with this problem (although it is more likely to be a direct eunuch). One advantage is that the author's emotional line is really well written, which can completely dilute the shortcomings of the plot line. There is no problem in reading it as a short love novel (emphasis added). If the author starts a relationship in the future, I will definitely read it. I feel that the author is more suitable for writing romance novels that are light-hearted and mixed with heavy emotions. After all, the relationship between Yi and the protagonist is really appetizing, and it makes me excited. As for the character of the protagonist, although it is very twisted and makes me a little unhappy, there is nothing too wrong with his behavior and it is within an acceptable range, but it is indeed not particularly kingly. As expected, I still prefer kingly plots [laughs], but such a protagonist also has a different flavor. This is the first time I write a long review on Tomato, and I feel that the author has a promising future. If it weren't for The Extraterrestrial Demon, this novel would be the author's debut. It can be seen that the author is writing very carefully, and the future is bright. I hope the author can persevere, って. Author がずっときけてほしい