I Took Out a Loan for a Loki Mask, Then Enrolled at Hogwarts

It's pretty good and interesting. But for the heroine, I feel that the author originally planned to have Hermione, but some people were very vocal about it, so I changed it. It seems that there is no heroine, which is a bit abrupt, but it doesn't matter. If you rely on this to make a living, it's normal for whoever shouts to be louder (but you have to pay attention to a small number of people who make the majority of the voice, because there are many readers of male videos who don't rate or comment much. If they are not satisfied, they will leave directly or leave negative reviews). If not, then write according to your own ideas and refine your own skills. Okay, I'm still a little disappointed. I won't write about Hermione in the following to avoid taboos. I'll just ignore what I wrote well in the past. It's good to put aside my personal feelings and not talk about the book.

So far, it's very good-looking, but I hope the male protagonist doesn't have CP. I feel like the male protagonist can focus on his career and knowledge. I don't even want to become a harem novel!

It's super nice [Blowing Kiss] I'm looking for no CP or a slight heartthrob. The protagonist is very smart and powerful, which gives me a very powerful feeling. I don't want to become brainless after having CP (some works are like this...) Heartthrob: Mainly because powerful people are easy to attract other people (actually... I also like this kind of thing)... Finally, I hope the author will update more. No matter what the subsequent plot is, the above is just my personal opinion [Blowing Kiss] [Love] Very nice, recommended

It looks good. I would like to ask the author if there will be a female protagonist. I feel that the protagonist should be the one who focuses on knowledge. It's good now @ Touching the Fish's Capybara

The rare Kitty Hawk protagonist, with a reasonable plot combination, is also unique among HP fans, with a novel golden finger setting, so far there is no too toxic character, and misunderstandings and conflicts are just right without being too toxic. However, the protagonist's strength is progressing too fast. Less than a month after school started, the advanced knowledge of the growth-stage mythical beast's Traceless Stretch Curse and Semi-Permanent Transformation Curse has appeared. I don't know how the plot will develop later. , I hope the author has a complete outline and it will not be unfinished. The plot of the original novel has just been released. At present, it seems that the protagonist does not have the idea of ​​following the main line. Some characters are OOC, but most of them have become more gentle and perfect. I believe the author has his own views on the characters. Don't join the ultimate original book party. The protagonist is a bit impulsive. At present, it seems too irrational to take the initiative to contact Quirrell because he wants to make money. However, considering that it is written in order to promote the development of the plot and promote the protagonist's contact with Voldemort, it is understandable to write this way, but I still hope that the author can handle the relationship between the characters and plot well and develop the plot in a thoughtful direction. It's very good. I've been following it since the first few chapters. It's an HP fanfic. I feel it's particularly good. The plot is also good. I just want the author to put a line at the end of each chapter with a period or an ellipsis to remind them to update. Now, if the last sentence of each chapter is meaningful and you want to see their discussion, you can only see the reminder.

Excellent, beautiful, and can be called a masterpiece of Harry Potter fan fiction! Oh, my God, this is simply better than Mrs. Susan's pie! Please forgive my recklessness, but the author adds 100 points! 👌👐

This book is very well written. I personally feel that if there is a female protagonist, it can be written in the upper grades. After all, they are all time travellers, and they may not necessarily fall in love with children. In reality, a real person changes a lot as he grows up. If there is no female protagonist in the early stage, it is acceptable to have me in the middle and late stages.

It's quite good to watch, but it's weird when it involves girls. But later on, there are less plots involving girls. It's quite normal, and it's quite good to watch. I feel that if there is no cp later, I can read it as a career writer. It's quite good.

All I can say is that it's really delicious. I hope that the female protagonist doesn't have any emotional lines after all. It's all one-sided. The male protagonist's character is very good without any poisonous points. The three views are also positive [KISS]. It's very interesting. The writing is undoubtedly refreshing. It's written in a way that makes people want to read and not get tired of it. Hehe

Big cheers for the author! I really like the setting of this book. I wonder if there is a cp? If not, can Daphne's appearances be reduced? I just want to see the protagonist doing his career and nothing else🥺