Loaning Loki's Mask Begins and Enrolls in Hogwarts

It's pretty good and interesting. But for the heroine, I feel that the author originally planned to have Hermione, but some people were very vocal about it, so I changed it. It seems that there is no heroine, which is a bit abrupt, but it doesn't matter. If you rely on this to make a living, it's normal for whoever shouts to be louder (but you have to pay attention to a small number of people who make the majority of the voice, because there are many readers of male videos who don't rate or comment much. If they are not satisfied, they will leave directly or leave negative reviews). If not, then write according to your own ideas and refine your own skills. Okay, I'm still a little disappointed. I won't write about Hermione in the following to avoid taboos. I'll just ignore what I wrote well in the past. It's good to put aside my personal feelings and not talk about the book.

So far, it's very good-looking, but I hope the male protagonist doesn't have CP. I feel like the male protagonist can focus on his career and knowledge. I don't even want to become a harem novel!

It's super nice [Blowing Kiss] I'm looking for no CP or a slight heartthrob. The protagonist is very smart and powerful, which gives me a very powerful feeling. I don't want to become brainless after having CP (some works are like this...) Heartthrob: Mainly because powerful people are easy to attract other people (actually... I also like this kind of thing)... Finally, I hope the author will update more. No matter what the subsequent plot is, the above is just my personal opinion [Blowing Kiss] [Love] Very nice, recommended

It looks good. I would like to ask the author if there will be a female protagonist. I feel that the protagonist should be the one who focuses on knowledge. It's good now @ Touching the Fish's Capybara

The rare Kitty Hawk protagonist, with a reasonable plot combination, is also unique among HP fans, with a novel golden finger setting, so far there is no too toxic character, and misunderstandings and conflicts are just right without being too toxic. However, the protagonist's strength is progressing too fast. Less than a month after school started, the advanced knowledge of the growth-stage mythical beast's Traceless Stretch Curse and Semi-Permanent Transformation Curse has appeared. I don't know how the plot will develop later. , I hope the author has a complete outline and it will not be unfinished. The plot of the original novel has just been released. At present, it seems that the protagonist does not have the idea of ​​following the main line. Some characters are OOC, but most of them have become more gentle and perfect. I believe the author has his own views on the characters. Don't join the ultimate original book party. The protagonist is a bit impulsive. At present, it seems too irrational to take the initiative to contact Quirrell because he wants to make money. However, considering that it is written in order to promote the development of the plot and promote the protagonist's contact with Voldemort, it is understandable to write this way, but I still hope that the author can handle the relationship between the characters and plot well and develop the plot in a thoughtful direction. It's very good. I've been following it since the first few chapters. It's an HP fanfic. I feel it's particularly good. The plot is also good. I just want the author to put a line at the end of each chapter with a period or an ellipsis to remind them to update. Now, if the last sentence of each chapter is meaningful and you want to see their discussion, you can only see the reminder.

This book is very well written. I personally feel that if there is a female protagonist, it can be written in the upper grades. After all, they are all time travellers, and they may not necessarily fall in love with children. In reality, a real person changes a lot as he grows up. If there is no female protagonist in the early stage, it is acceptable to have me in the middle and late stages.

Excellent, beautiful, and can be called a masterpiece of Harry Potter fan fiction! Oh, my God, this is simply better than Mrs. Susan's pie! Please forgive my recklessness, but the author adds 100 points! 👌👐

It's quite good to watch, but it's weird when it involves girls. But later on, there are less plots involving girls. It's quite normal, and it's quite good to watch. I feel that if there is no cp later, I can read it as a career writer. It's quite good.

Big cheers for the author! I really like the setting of this book. I wonder if there is a cp? If not, can Daphne's appearances be reduced? I just want to see the protagonist doing his career and nothing else🥺

All I can say is that it's really delicious. I hope that the female protagonist doesn't have any emotional lines after all. It's all one-sided. The male protagonist's character is very good without any poisonous points. The three views are also positive [KISS]. It's very interesting. The writing is undoubtedly refreshing. It's written in a way that makes people want to read and not get tired of it. Hehe

It's quite interesting. There is no CP at the moment. I don't know about it in the future, but I hope there won't be CP. I'm afraid that the author won't write well. I also think that the protagonist is very strong, and I feel that no one is worthy of it. No one can advance or retreat with him. That's it for CP's point of view. Then there is the plot. There is nothing to criticize about the plot. The protagonist is really powerful and has a golden finger, but it is not the kind of idea in other articles that once there is a golden finger, you feel that your learning is useless and is not as good as the golden finger. Although the protagonist often relies on the golden finger, he still works hard on his own, which makes up for the readers' regret that the protagonist cannot be too idle [laughing]. The most important thing is that it is not a nanny article, it does not revolve around the protagonist, and helping them does not always protect them, but to improve their knowledge reserves, expand their strengths, strengthen themselves, and help them improve their strength. There is also a reward. What I did not expect is the author's way of writing Ron. In other articles, Ron is just a mascot, but the author writes that Ron is very talented in certain parts, and his lack of strength is due to lack of confidence. Also, everyone in the Weasley family is excellent, and Ron is not particularly bad. From what I can see so far, there are no surprising points or embarrassing plot points. The article is very good, but it has one shortcoming, too! Few! Got it! Author, how do you manage to rest at your age? Update soon! Quick! Even! New! I finished reading this stuff in half a day [smile][smile][smile]

It's good to read. It's been a long time since I read HP's article. The Harry in this book is the Harry in the novel. He's not dull anymore. It's pretty good. The protagonist isn't stupid either. There's no conflict between the characters. There's no CP. He just concentrates on his career. It's pretty good. It's pretty good. It's a masterpiece.

Girls can choose to watch it, because it is like the trend of the harem. Although it is not stated clearly, it is probably that there are many Yingying Yanyan, but if you watch it, for example, it is still very enjoyable, right? The subject matter is better

The author must stick to his own ideas and create more female protagonists. Those who like to watch will not talk about it. Only those who don't like to watch will keep talking about it. Come on

The main character is so handsome now. Ravenclaw protagonist, genius type. It was a pleasure to watch it all the way to the end. The talent and strength are very strong, and it is not embarrassing, it is very natural. The character of the protagonist is also relatively indifferent, and he just pretends to be cool. Don't be upset. When the beetle interviewed the protagonist, he directly threatened him. I'm glad that I finally didn't have to teach him a lesson after the interview was sent out. I don't know in what grade this book Voldemort was solved. And the protagonist is not crazy or abstract. There should be no cp and no heroine. There was a tendency in the early stage, but the author avoided describing it in the later stage.

It's pretty good. I don't care whether it has a female protagonist or not. If you keep the pace of progress now, you can maintain the current appeal.

It's really the best book I've ever read [crying] The author is really good at writing 🤔 I really like the protagonist who is close to magical animals (similar to Newt!) But there are really very few of them... The main character is Ravenclaw, but I think he is also very suitable for Hufflepuff [Adoration] This little badger who likes magical animals must be fascinated by Lao Deng [Thinking] The pace is a bit slow for so long and it has only been pushed forward for two years? 🤔 I hope there will be more updates [Blow kiss] The author is really awesome. It is really a super high-quality book! (Nod [please update])

I stayed up late to finish reading it. The setting is pretty good. The male protagonist is very powerful in the Muggle world. The loan system is very interesting. You need to give something in exchange for knowledge. It's a good idea. It's much better than what you get. I hope it will be updated soon! As for the female protagonist, it will work, but if there are multiple female protagonists, the emotional line will be difficult to write, so I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. Update soon! ! !

The author's writing is good, but he is too cautious. He must know how to cause trouble. The Holy Light Spell was arranged for Voldemort, the resurrection was given to the old bat, and the soul summoning was given to the old bee.

Very good-looking, one of the few novels that I have read for more than 200 chapters. The protagonist has a good outlook on life. The most important thing is that the IQ of the protagonist and the supporting characters are all online. There is no such brainless villain, and it is also very enjoyable. I am afraid that the only shortcoming is that there is no heroine, but it does not affect the reading. It is still very interesting [Bird Food Goddess] [Bird Food Goddess] [Bird Food Goddess]

It's a very good book, nothing too exaggerated. There is currently no CP. (It's not uncommon for some to collapse as soon as the CP is written. I still hope there is no CP...). The career-oriented protagonist of Yingyuan, and the description of how the characters get along is also good.

Except for the fact that the male protagonist's strength is a bit exaggerated (the first-year student is solo in the Forbidden Forest 🤪👍), it's one of the best HP fanfics I've ever seen. There's nothing dark or bad about it. The characters of the little wizards are all so cute. The author will update it soon.

Not bad for a half-hearted Harry Potter reader and movie-watcher like me. The rhythm was well controlled in the early stage, but the speed increased in the later stage, resulting in asymmetry in the front and rear rhythm. There are many exciting and exciting plots and plots about the protagonist group, which may be a little difficult for the author to write, resulting in unclear explanations. Then the point! ! ! There is no news from the author at the moment. The update has been suspended for 5.6 Days, and the daily updates have been decreasing dramatically in the past two or three months. It is more likely that it will be stopped. If you can't bear the interruption, I recommend you change it. I started to update it intermittently. I updated a few chapters after a break of more than ten days, and updated a chapter every few days. And then there was not a single word from beginning to end. I can't stand this kind of author who doesn't take readers or his own work seriously [face covering]

Yes, to be honest, the description of the female character in the early emotional line is not out of the ordinary for me, but it is not a proficient emotional line. If you can't control the writing method of the plot of Qilin's saliva, you might as well omit the method of obtaining it...

The story is readable and the protagonist is well set👌🏻! But I still have some advice for readers who break in. 1️⃣This article is about male videos. If you only accept female videos, it's best not to read them👀There is a high probability that you will be incompetent. 2️⃣ It is a semi-fun article for men. If you can't accept the HP nanny article at all, it's best to quit. 3️⃣ It does not completely follow the original characters. There are slight differences in the characters of Snape, Dumbledore, Greengrass and Malfoy. 4️⃣Some paragraph comments are not friendly to women and can be selectively opened.

Nice! It's very interesting. I hope there won't be a female protagonist. I also really look forward to Newt and the protagonist chatting together.

It's a HP fan content that I really like. It has magical animals and alchemy. The only problem is that the writing is not interesting. Some people may worry that the hang-up is too big, it depends on whether the author can control it. Hope it can be stable.

The plot design is quite good. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾ Finally someone has entered Ravenclaw. The important thing to ask is, is there a cp? Is it a CP-free article? [Blowing kiss]

It's good to read. Although I don't know why this book dropped to around 8:00 (it seems to be Chapter 123? That's no problem), but this book is really a high-quality HP fanfic. Of course, there are thousands of people with different faces. The reason why I like this book is that the protagonist is very comfortable in the process of constantly learning and improving magic. There are no battle scenes or ambiguous scenes. The chats with the female characters are quite normal. It is a more daily story. Well, there is no heroine for now. Also, I don't understand why some people think that the protagonist is always having an affair with a female character. I think it's a normal academic exchange, and it's the same with Furong. The protagonist doesn't take the initiative to seduce the female character. Isn't it normal for a good person to have a crush on a girl? Besides, the author doesn't describe it too much, it's all pretty point-blank. Well, there may be a heroine, that Fleur.

Good news. The protagonist is strong but not brainless. He can keep his brain to himself.