Professor at Hogwarts, Would You Like a Talisman?

It's so beautiful. I finished it in one day and got 10 stars! Let's talk about the heroine first. Alice is the most perfect heroine in my mind. She is mature, rational, focused, not restive, never stops learning, and has great love. She does not join the protagonist group and focuses on her studies, but when encountering problems, she will not avoid them and take the initiative to solve them. Therefore, major events every year are solved in advance because of Alice. In the words of Dumbledore praising Alice in the book, she said that she "made the right and appropriate choice." Regarding the main soul, diary, and diadem that could not be solved, Alice chose to tell Dumbledore instead of solving it alone. The emotional line with the Sri Lankan teacher is very low. The heroine will not pay too much attention to or evaluate the Sri Lankan teacher in the early stage. From ordinary teacher and student to comrade to lover, the transition is very natural and unobtrusive.

After reading it for a while, the overall feeling is pretty good. The heroine herself is a very powerful girl. The entry point of this article is very good. The feeling of flowing water is more comfortable (well, I am a Ravenclaw, and I prefer my own family) There are some minor surprises (in my personal opinion): The heroine is a monk, but she feels like she has some insight but not much? Unlike those who have survived in the world of immortality (oh, maybe it is the world of happiness and equality), I feel that the heroine does not want to reveal her strength, but she uses it intentionally or unintentionally (it seems that the wizard cannot see it?) And it feels like she wants to integrate the system of immortality and magic. The integration is a bit stiff and unnatural; the author seems to want the heroine to participate in the original plot, but entering the plot is a bit sudden and stiff. I don't care about the emotional line, but I care about the plot line, the heroine's career line, etc. Ps: I'm really not a hater, I'm just giving a small opinion. Laws can pretend that he didn't see it. Pps: I hope the work will get better and better and become more popular. Come on, teacher [blowing kiss]

Very good book! Why is the score so low? The plot of Upup is very smooth and reasonable. The heroine is also very comfortable. She is very strong and knows what she wants. If anyone can get close to SS, I think it would be Ellie. Although there are not many details in the overall content, it is still worth watching. It feels comfortable physically and mentally, and there are not so many misunderstandings. When the ideas are inconsistent, they have the ability and courage to do their own thing. They are all complete individuals. I never felt that the professor needed a little sun, just like Lily was shining but would burn him at the same time, or it was wrong to hold him as if she was protecting a fragile thing. Even if his experiences are hurtful, they are all part of what makes him who he is, including his strength. I really think it is suitable for him to be equally accomplices. The best way to deal with the hurt in the past is not to dig it out and solve it, but to caress it and cover it until those parts account for less and less in his life. I personally also agree with brushing off Lily's matter and the professor being "used" by Dumbledore. Although it is indeed despicable for the principal to achieve his goal by grasping people's hearts, the situation after Lao Fuyi's first blood is that he is not a human inside and outside. Would he still be safe as a Death Eater in another person, even if no one knows that he made that prophecy. In addition to using love to kidnap people, Dumbledore's proposal actually benefits the professor. It protects and recognizes him as a good guy, and at the same time atones for the professor's sins? Revenge? The opportunity, in fact, there is no resurrection, he has no place to repay. He has never been a smart person who gives up on himself, so in my opinion, it is more essential to characterize the transaction as a consensual transaction. In addition, I think the professor's feelings for Lily are very complicated, and summarizing them as liking is too shallow an explanation. She is responsible for teaching almost all the emotions of teenagers, including love, friendship and family, dependence on fellow wizards and only friends, appreciation for smart people, nostalgia for well-intentioned utopias, and even a slight yearning for the atmosphere of Lily's family. So rather than saying that he is in love and admiration, it is better to say that he secretly hopes to be seen by beauty, or that he wants to be that kind of person. Yearning for beauty is just human nature. Just my own little idea. Thanks to the author for his great creation! ! Everyone go and see it!

It's great. I'm looking forward to the plot of the third grade. It's a child generation and the ss doesn't have an OOC. The heroine is a standard Ravenclaw eagle. She is very talented and very curious. Most importantly, she is very smart. She is not far or close to the ss. The relationship with the trio is mostly from a distance. It feels super comfortable! Unlike some articles that I just fell in love with for no apparent reason, and I didn't become a babysitter, it's a perfect sense of distance! Looking forward to the development of plot lines and emotional dramas in the future! ! I really like the heroine~

To be honest, I really didn't expect it to be so long [face covering] In many film and television literary works, although there is a lot of love for the protagonist, the regrets of the supporting characters are even more disappointing, so thousands of fan works have been born. The professor is a controversial character, and I have also seen feedback from some readers that they do not like the Alice I created (of course, it is more of a compliment to her), but in real life, no one can be liked by everyone, so neither will the character I created. I really hope that Alice and Severus can be as happy as we see them in another parallel universe. Physical freedom is not true freedom, spiritual freedom is. To me, the professor deserves to be loved, and everyone deserves it, so he should not be trapped in memories by the past, he should step out and live his own life.

It's rare to see a ss fanfic with a sane mind on Tomato. I really like the character of the heroine. The heroine is quite strong. I've been following her for a long time and I kind of forgot about the plot. Anyway, I'm not a nanny (the plot of the three little ones is all mentioned in one stroke), and I got together with ss after the war. (Next time I will rate it after I finish it.) I will write a good review when I finish my second brush.

It's really good. Every character is very three-dimensional. What's more, the most important thing I like about this book is that the heroine doesn't become childish when she is dressed as a child. In many books, she seems to really become a child when she wears it. She always struggles with small things. This heroine can tolerate the differences of others like a real cultivator, analyze and observe the details and emotions of others. I love it. The author works hard, can you write a little dragon in the next book (especially the fragile baby in the article) [Shy] I love both dragons and professors❤️

It's so beautiful. The author's writing is very good. The whole text is fluent. The heroine is a strong sapiosexual, which is a perfect match for Sri Lanka. The emotional line between the two is very natural. They both fell in love with each other inadvertently. One confirmed his feelings by the smell of the love potion, and the other confirmed his feelings by the patronus charm. Alice's proactive confession made me feel unexpected and reasonable. It really made me laugh to death when Sijiao ran away. The final extra chapter is also very interesting. In short, there is no shortage of touching plots and sweet love. I think the actual score of this book is 9.5.

It's been a long time since I've read a book in one sitting, and this is my favorite Harry Potter fanfic in recent times. The arrangement for the war was very reasonable, and it was finally not the kind of light or heavy war. I like this kind of fanfic that is not about redemption for the sake of redemption. There is not too much plot involving the protagonist group, and there are no inappropriate emotions. The heroine is calm, strong, and rational. I really like her. The setting of Eastern immortality is arranged in the plot, but it doesn't feel too abrupt. There is no setting that says that cultivation of immortality is better than magic. The male protagonist is still Snape, which is great. He finally doesn't fall in love with minors in fan fiction. Love is what happens after the war, and is an expression of true feelings after everything is settled. I like this setting, it's stable and reassuring. Finally, why are so few people reading this article🥲? There are no ratings yet. I really recommend reading it. It's a truly invincible article!

It's pretty good-looking. I finished it in two days. Overall, I can't find any faults. The emotional lines are well written, but emmm, there's a little bit of sugar? (No other meaning, in fact, I just want to read more sweet articles) I wish the author better and better [blowing kiss]