Harry Potter: The Sickly One Becomes Everyone's Favorite

I have read all the contents of the first grade. The heroine is a Ravenclaw student. Hogwarts still likes the 80 Geniuses. The heroine was selectively ignored and ridiculed by many people at first because of her illness and maverick, but she didn't care because she couldn't understand () hahaha It has changed my view on Quirrell. In all the fanfics I have read so far, he is an unremarkable character. His description is just to attract Voldemort. However, this book is different. It describes Quirrell not just as a submissive person, but as a misguided genius. I also realized that he is an excellent Ravenclaw.

It's beautiful, very beautiful. Professor Quirrell's short clip made me cry. The big brush strokes make Quirrell more three-dimensional. I also saw a different Quirrell. The if line at the back also fills up the regrets [send heartfelt]

It was very good. To be honest, I cried when I watched the Quirrell part. I also read their comments. Quirrell is an outstanding graduate of Ravenclaw. He is a Ravenclaw. How could he not see that Yun Shu was lying to him? He never thought of involving Yun Shu in the game. If he hadn't encountered Voldemort, maybe he would have become bigger and stronger in the field he was good at. I really hated him when I read the original novel, but I have changed my mind now. Putting aside his status as a Death Eater (probably), he is really a very good teacher. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, this book really designs the characters very well.

I wasn't very serious about writing books, so I didn't pay much attention to it at first, but then I found that more people were reading it, so I started to take it seriously. Yes, I am actually very holy. Every time I analyze characters, I try to make them more three-dimensional and fuller. But maybe my writing style hasn't achieved that effect yet. Anyway, the author said that it is updated frequently, so you can open it from time to time and take a look. Yun Shu is the protagonist in my novel. Maybe she started off a bit miserably, but I really don't have a fetish for sadism! Her subjective consciousness may be more about believing that the world is kind, which is related to her growth experience. I have never seen many people who are scheming with me, or people who are scheming with me, or they are doing it but I don't know. So Yun Shu is the same, not so sensitive, as if his eyes have been opened. What I want to say is that it doesn't matter whether you like her or not. She is the heroine in my novel, and I write everything. She is always positive and energetic, as strong and vital as the lush vegetation, and as firm and upward as the vines.

It's very interesting. Whether it's the plot or the protagonist, the author has drawn up rich characters. The heroine is very smart and in line with the style of Ravenclaw. She does things without pretentiousness and is neat and tough. The heroine's academic achievements are also very good. The heroine's outlook on life is also very upright and she cares about the original owner. I like Yun Shu very much. The plot is compact and there are no particularly outrageous or embarrassing plots that people want to avoid. The system is also relatively humane and does not force the heroine to do outrageous things. The plot between the heroine and Professor Quirrell touched me very much, and Lockhart's behavior was not OOC and irritating at all. I also hope that the author will continue to work hard and not give up. As long as the emotional scenes with the male protagonists are not blunt and the novel is shaped according to the previous ideas, I believe that this novel will become popular (from only more than 2,000 readers to 19,000 readers now), I am also very happy for the author. I also hope that the author will get better and better and be happy every day ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற) This is my first time to comment on the poor expression of the writing. Please forgive me.

"I wanted to teach her more. I could have been like her." There is no need to say more about the greatness of this book [crying][crying][crying]

The characters are rich, the plot is compact, and the content is rich. The author's text not only focuses on the protagonist, but also on supporting characters like Quirrell. The last paper really directly deepens the characters of Qi and Shu. Shu is also a very charming person, the kind of good friend who is willing to make friends actively. The article also reveals Shu's ideological reform movement in the magical world later, which reflects the in-depth connotation of the entire article. But I feel like the writing is still a bit green, but overall it's pretty good. I hope the author can persevere [Like][Like][Like]

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful. Well, let me briefly explain why I continue to watch this thing? Because the character you wrote, the author, is very much like me to some extent, and very much like what I have read. The white moonlight made her look like the unattainable bright moon in the sky. Although that book is finished, I have read it almost 30 times, but you are not finished at all. I can still continue to follow it, haha, I feel like I will cry every night. The writing is also relatively good. Great, keep it up! You really look like her in this persona, but she has perfect scores in science and close to perfect scores in liberal arts. She is a genius who is more of an all-rounder than an all-rounder. But this book is different, this book has parents

The writing is really good, so good that I can't describe it in words😢The Quirrell part is really regrettable, but I know there is nothing I can do about it. The teacher's writing is really great. I really want to cry when I read it. Teacher, the overall emotion is really very delicate, and the plot is also great. I didn't feel any discomfort during the whole process. I hope the teacher will keep going like this! ! ! This article is simply a masterpiece! ! !

The only book I wrote a rating for just after I finished reading it in the first grade. As someone who (I think) has read a lot of HP fanfics, this is a very good story. I'm personally quite picky. I didn't pay much attention to the old time travel setting at first. I didn't expect it to become so addictive. I feel good about the author's description of emotions. At least it made me feel sad and sympathetic to Professor Quirrell who met his best friend but was forced by authority. The pace of the story follows the story line and the development speed is moderate. There are also some interesting daily stories about the heroine's personal development. At least it makes me, who is impatient, quite comfortable. 😋🙌 The heroine has a naughty customer service system like an eldest sister (?). She also has parents who still love her even after two lifetimes, and she is also very smart in her studies. It's refreshing [laughs] Uh-huh, in short, it's very good. I will be very sad if no one sees the excellent work👊