Hogwarts: The Ravenclaw of the Weasley Family

This book is really beautiful. As long as the author doesn't write too much, it will be an absolute masterpiece. I finally got rid of the big trap of Hermione as the heroine. Nine out of ten Harry Potter fan fiction books have Hermione as the heroine. This is not to say that Hermione is not good, but I have read too many books and it is not interesting anymore. Nowadays, most of the best works in Harry Potter fan fiction are separated from the Three Little Ones and are not used as babysitters. Because there is nothing new to write about the three little ones. The change of the protagonist in this book is very good and very reasonable. Ravenclaw is more suitable for Percy. The wand is finally no longer made of lightning wood or something with oriental elements. Thank God ~ Never be the heroine Hermione, and don't write about the protagonist taking the initiative to help her. There are so many things written like this. Author, please write well and don't get too excited. It's not easy to have a good book.

It's a very, very good book. The character of the protagonist is a genius, rational and cautious man who is very consistent with the control of a sapiosexual protagonist. His past life experience also makes the character better rationalized, from being simple and cautious to the rigor of a scholar. But the character of the protagonist is not a thin and indifferent character. He will care about his family and study harder for them. Therefore, there is no need to set up a female protagonist, which would be redundant. As a natural legilimen, coupled with his past life experiences, the protagonist is destined to be a precocious person, so it is destined to be impossible for him to develop any love with his peers. Another very important point is that the reason why we need to set up a female protagonist is probably because we are afraid that the protagonist will be lonely, but first of all, the protagonist's character is destined to go to the dark side in the study of magic and the pursuit of knowledge, so he should enjoy this kind of loneliness, which will allow him to learn more immersed, and this kind of loneliness will only make him more focused. So as long as he has family (or a few like-minded friends), the love he gets will be enough. The plot setting is also very good. The daily-oriented research route fits the character of the protagonist very well, and the characters of the supporting characters also completely fit the original work. The language style of the entire article is also relatively close to the original work, with a touch of humor from the magical world and a sense of fantasy common in Western fantasy novels. Come on, author, this book is really excellent and the update speed is very good. I hope you can stick to it ^_^

So far, the plot is pretty good, and the character of the male protagonist is OK, but I would like to make a small comment. The author's descriptions in some places are a bit too gorgeous. For example, the place where I bought the wand could be a little simpler. It feels too gorgeous and looks a bit complicated (I don't mean to say anything bad, it's just a small opinion. This book is still very good.) [Like] [Like]

I have read Chapter 31 so far. I agree with what the long review said. This book is very suitable for fans of Sri Lankan religion. It is not a whitewash. I can only say that it is friendly to Sri Lankan religion and has a certain degree of admiration for it. It has the flavor of a male video. When the protagonist pretends to be a compliment (complimentary), this can be clearly seen in the behavior of the people next to him; I feel like some of the sentences are a bit... Strange? The wording is sometimes repetitive, and the description is a bit confusing (for example, the part about mental barriers and Occlumency), but it's okay, and you can see it if you just glance over. In short, it is a good book to pass the time. The author is also quite active in the paragraph comments, explaining to readers, correcting typos, etc. I will keep reading, come on, author! Um... I changed the rating a bit. Sirius is like a superhero. Colonel Deng is too tough and OOC. He puts some things that should be said in private into the open. I feel like he is not very smart.

No heroine! The author has made it clear in the introduction! The protagonist is very talented and hard-working! The biggest feature of this book is that the content is really novel! This is the most innovative and unique article about the growth of the protagonist among all the HP fanfics I have read. I enjoyed it very much! Then, all the characters in the original work have rich personalities! I particularly enjoyed the interactions between the protagonist and Snape and other professors! Secondly, the writing is solid and concise, easy to read, and definitely not brainless. The protagonist is super hard-working and diligent. I really like the character of the protagonist. He is rational and calm. He is not great at the beginning, but is slowly working hard. I have been attracted by this book and plan to keep reading it! Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you [Sending my heart]

The writing is delicate, recreating the somewhat rigid and somewhat arrogant and selfish character of the original Percy, and portraying a calm and rational protagonist who pursues knowledge and abilities while protecting his family and dreams. The plot is given a reasonable timeline, with some straightforward narratives and some refreshing moments. At present, it seems to be a rare masterpiece in fan fiction. Everyone must watch it!

Not going to lie, this is my favorite HP novel I have ever read. Although it has been marked as no cp, I still want to tell the author not to write cp! Not only do I not want to see the protagonist having cp, but I also can't imagine that Percy would fall in love with someone else. There are no male CPs or female CPs! There must be no cp from beginning to end! I will always follow you author!

The writing is great, a rare masterpiece on Tomato. The plot and writing style are very rigorous and smooth. It is not a cookie-cutter kind of story. The author wrote the story in his heart, which makes people feel comfortable to read [Like]

It's nice, but too little. The new HP Shuang Wen Liang Cao, I love the genius flow! The characterization is also very vivid, and my understanding of the characters is similar to what I feel in my heart. I probably have the same three views. And I found that hp male videos rarely describe the beauty of women, so even if you are not a fan of Harry's books, you still like to watch this kind of videos, instead of the ones where Gao Wu always shows beautiful school beauties, even if you don't have CP, you still have to do this.

Good. But starting in second grade. The author started a large number of private settings. For an old stubborn like me. People who prefer the original work in terms of setting. It's a little hard to accept. If you haven't read the original work or can ignore the original work. Or not to think about it. Still very nice. The author's writing is very good. Many of the descriptive aspects are very good. Especially the part where Blake comes forward for the protagonist. The kind of madness that only belongs to Sirius. It was really fun to write. Old Bee Deng also had a rare moment of toughness. First grade is really, really nice to watch. The score is a bit low now, maybe because many people can't accept the large number of private settings starting in the second grade. But as a novel. The author's level and writing style are quite excellent.