A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting as the Young Leader of a Martial Arts Sect

Not bad, there are some minor issues, the rhythm is okay, if you like mortals, you can give it a look

It is very suitable for my taste. Please speed up the update. I have read the novel for decades and I feel that this novel has great potential.

It's pretty good [Like] There is a younger brother who doesn't have to go first. I think I am the chosen one [Like]

It's so beautiful👀The author is a master at writing about fighting!

Average, a bit bland, five stars for encouragement

I hope to stick with it and keep IQ's online strength stable.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

The writing style is okay. At least I can accept it. I just hope it won't be updated too frequently.

The writing is pretty good. Come on

Not bad, I like it very much Too wordy [smile]