A Mortal's Immortal Fate

How can I put it, after reading books for many years, I have very high requirements for some details and writing style. I feel that the author of this book has just started writing books, or is still young. Many things written seem very immature, but when I read them, I am very inspired. Just like when I watched The Condor, there were no gorgeous words, only simple dialogues, and everything seemed so simple and plain. To say that he has returned to his original nature is really flattering, because he is still young. He has a pure heart, does not follow the crowd, and takes one step at a time, but it is just right. I am commenting with joy. I am not concerned about whether I can finish the book. I am just leaving some thoughts on the chapters I have read so far. By the way, I have just read Chapter 27. I am not commenting on this book to increase my sense of existence or to score points for this book. I just have some thoughts. Cheers to the author.

The plot of this writing is reasonable, the character settings do not violate basic human nature, nor are they divisive, personal knowledge and cognition, and the text dialogue settings are consistent with their age and knowledge structure. The description of the world of cultivating immortals is relatively reasonable. It's not like the protagonist in a certain book who is set to exchange various items in his storage bag, fearing that someone else's store won't be able to eat them. As a result, a lot of items are only exchanged for 200 spiritual stones. 🤭 Most of the text in other books is the author's subjective description. Sometimes the pig's feet are deeply affectionate, and sometimes they are ungrateful...

It is well written, interlocking and fascinating. It is a good casual novel. I hope the author will update it faster.

Very exciting. Very exciting. The rating of 8.1 Is low.

Yes, be brave and resourceful! Know how to advance and retreat, and kill decisively.

As a 20-year-old bookworm who likes novels about mortals, I give this book a five-star rating. I hope the author will continue to work hard. Come on, bookworms who like reading novels about mortals should not miss it.

First-class masters are good at rebuilding their own spiritual home, allowing the soul to present free and conscious spiritual creation at a higher latitude. When consciousness is focused, inner wisdom will flow naturally. The so-called flow is the joy of body and mind that occurs when a person is mentally focused. The wonderful feeling of free flowing consciousness is an advanced creative state of the unity of body and mind. In this state, body and mind are unified, people and environment are unified, and people and things are unified. Entering a state of selflessness, consciousness is full of vitality and shows strong spiritual creativity. The unity of body and mind means turning the spirit inward, while turning the spirit outward is the beginning of self-imprisonment in life.

Five points are to be given. There are really not many novels to read. I've watched more than half of it, and I feel a little anxious. This one is about imitating a mortal's journey to immortality. But it still looks great. I hope the author will be more stable. The encounters continue one after another, and there is no buffering time for us.

Very good look, clear thinking, step by step, one of the models of mortal flow

I really like reading novels about mortals cultivating immortals. Mr. Fuchenzi, your works are pretty good. However, there are many problems. Immortal cultivation is ancient, so it must be written according to the ancient tone and data. The ancient cauldron medicinal herbs are set to mature at a certain time. The protagonist stayed in the demon bat cave for so long. Did he go without food during the Qi training period? If we watch costume TV dramas, there will be people wearing watches to tell the time, people using meters to calculate distance when walking, people using Arabic numerals when writing, and people using popular contemporary slang when speaking. Can you continue watching a drama like this? Coding is not easy, five stars encourage you, I hope you can write good works! I'm curious! When I wrote about the Five Spiritual Roots, I always looked down on the qualifications of the Five Spiritual Roots, saying that it would stop at the Qi training period. As a result, the Five Spiritual Roots were all established, but no one mentioned the qualifications of the Five Spiritual Roots. No one even mentioned it. Could the author clarify this?