Harry Potter: I Became the Daughter of the Malfoy Family

I'm really surprised by this book. The story line of the teacher does not specifically follow the protagonist. Judging from the plot connection, it can indeed be seen that he is a novice writer. But it can be seen that the teacher really cares about the characters he writes. The shaping of the Malfoy family is very surprising, and the atmosphere of the Malfoy family is really well written! Especially for Draco, it is rare for an author to not change Draco's original character. And I feel that the part where the teacher changed Draco was relatively gradual. Although he changed, it can also be seen that he is Draco. He did not crudely define a character and stuffed his OC directly into a leather case called Draco. This is really rare in foreign persimmons. There are also Calista and other self-created characters, they also have their own distinctive characteristics, they are also very lovable, and the logic is smooth. Although there are some minor flaws, they definitely don't affect the look and feel, and the teacher's writing style is actually not bad either. What the teacher wrote is actually great! Teacher, please continue to persevere and wait for the end!

The teacher's writing is really good. The character's growth process is well written. The writing is smooth and makes people feel involved. The description of the Malfoy family getting along makes people smile unconsciously. The sentence "The Malfoy family always comes first" is really felt. ᵔ◡ᵔ Draco's character is well written and the character is not broken. I am very happy for his growth. Xiaolong is the cutest! The description of the system really shocked me. Many novels are dominated by the system, but in this book it is just a support. The heroine is the one who controls everything. I like the character of the heroine. She is sober and powerful. ൕ̈ ૩ Teacher, please keep writing and wait for updates✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩

Come on, author, I like your writing very much. The heroine is very wise and strategic. I would like to ask the author what is the general direction of the plot? Does the heroine's family prefer to support Riddle in the diary to come to power, or secretly aid Harry's group or design to kill Voldemort. Or make Malfoy bigger and stronger? Will Grindelwald come to power next? I'm curious whether Harry's godfather will be written off (although I personally don't want to, but the author can do whatever he likes). Will the heroine have a scene with Theodore? Come on [love] [love] Great work

Family respectability is the deepest curse. Hahaha, exaggerated. If the character of the heroine is a little more plump and lively, and a few other things are added, it will really taste good. It's not that this character is not good, the underlying colors of this character are still great. The always sane and decent family heir. But in the day-to-day interactions with friends, there is an echo of humanity. No insulting words, great

The teacher was very attentive to the shaping of Carly, and the writing style is also very good. Carly was specially selected by Harry, and the events such as 180 and 180 fully demonstrated the calmness of a controller and her uniqueness. Carly had a conversation with Dobby, and Carly's answers were so cool! [Shy][shy][shy] Moreover, the teacher has his own logic after writing and the writing is very good. I am looking forward to the plot of the next chapter. Come on, teacher! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I like it, I like it, I really like my sister's character.

Very nice, I like it very much. Support the author greatly

Bao believes that my investment in this book is not a loss. [Shy] If you think the chapters are too few, you can read it. [Sending my heart] The description of the characters is very detailed and it belongs to the type of book that is very interesting. [Blow a kiss]

The writing style of Da Da is very good. It is my ideal book. It is very vivid and the OOC of the characters is not very serious. It is a book that makes people feel unique in their hearts after reading it. Although I read everything, it is really picky. It is my highest level of recognition for the author Da Da! Pinch at the end, give it a little more [Sending Hearts]

Beautiful, the heroine is very elegant